Battle Arena Tournament - Cred vs Lotto Smirk - OPEN FOR VOTES
 

Verse 1
known to body weak cats n it's fact the punches u throw light son
so bitch u been walking a fine line w/ me since you can't fuckin write one
triad punishment w/ the blade it'll make ya suffer bad kid
1000 cuts'll have your death dragged out way longer than the summer classic
run a train on ya bitch, we gon have her pussy spread waiting
playing on the table while all of my dogs poker that ain't no famous painting
netcee's is ya life so guns won't be the cause of this 'g's death
cus the only way he loading clip after clip is viewing bags beef thread
sluts into bondage so when I have her in my room later
have the bitch strapped from both legs n call that move the tomb raider



Verse 2
No Terrence Crutcher but..

Infared dots at your top leave you shot when 2 arms rise to the air
Connect 4 wit the glock. Them red dots 'll cross a line thru this square
Im hittin ur broad right, all 12 inches in her throat keepin the jaws tight
Doggg, I aint seen NOTHING get rid of a foot this fast since frostbite
Send em to hell quick ur body in Tampa Bay sleepin wit shell fish
All they saw was a Machete under ur Skull. Thats a Buccaneers helmet
This nigga only tough off liquor but I'll end a party wen the heats drawn
Think its a game n I'm shooting right across the table like beer pong
Ur girl I put the D on, givin more blows to heads than a Klitscko fighter
She got that fire top that dont stop the shit remind me of a zippo lighter

Verse two got it. Verse one had the famous painting and that's it. Verse two was more consistent. First four and beer pong was koo

The second guy was better but I enjoyed both verses tbh, the first bar in the first verse was weak imo but it picked up after that. The second verse was consistently nice throughout, with a few haymakers, that frostbite bar was crazy lol

Vote second guy.

i thought dude 2 just kinda expanded on what dude 1 had already like kinda done i realize they was different concepts and shit but like the approach was the same and dude two felt weak in his opening two bars whereas i felt dude 1 was more consistent like he knew what he was actually trying to do throughout the battle i realize possibly if you break this battle down like the other two people witty and nikka said the second verse had more quotables or heymakers if you will..... still in the back of my mind im thinking dude one won this battle with his technique.... just my opinion tho...


vote: first dude

Verse 1 was pretty cool, came off more braggy to me..
I thought the famous painting/beef thread line came in.
didnt like the rest though, didnt fit with those 4 lines...
the first line made me lol but wasnt noteworthy..

Verse 2 had some slick lines that I really enjoyed.
I liked everything except for those last 2 punches...
they came off kind of rushed compared to the opening
your opener was the hardest line I thought..

v/Verse 2, the verse was more enjoyable for me.

Cool battle but second verse was much more creative.

That connect four n frostbite lines were fire.



I like the tomb raider bar in the first verse but second verse murked.

Battle was close af... & dope too.

The dogs poker line outta 1 was ill lol... I dug that shit.The clip after clip bar that followed was cool too. There were some misses for me that hurt 1 tho.. specifically the opener & closer.. which are the strongest points of the verse. 2 had more consistency imo. Connect 4 opener, Bucs helmet, & fire top closer(lmao btw) did it for me. Props to both.... it was close.

Vote- Verse 2

it was kinda close verse 1 flow was legit but verse 2 rhymed shell fish off helmit smh
mvgt verse 2

I swear i heard that famous painting line in a URL battle.

but cool battle

V/second dude got it reguardless.

v/verse two - overall more interesting bars, better more creative concepts and pretty smooth flow.