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Blue Bayou 07-02-2019 09:39 AM

SC9 Round 2: Blue Bayou vs. Killing Spree - [BLUE WINS]
 

Rules

  • Due Dates:
    Verses are due SATURDAY
    JULY 6TH, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
    Check Ins are not due this round, as there are officially no more replacements.

    Battles that lack votes may close later.
    One sided battles may get closed early.
    Extensions are normally 24 hours
    (unless requested otherwise, that is),
    can be no longer than 48 hours
    and have to be granted by your opponent.


    Line Limit:
    Min. = 12 lines
    Max. = 20 lines
    The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 20 lines

    General Rules:
    1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
    2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
    Feeding = DQ.
    Recycling = DQ.
    Biting = DQ.
    No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
    Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
    linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
    means you will disqualified.
    Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
    If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
    must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Killing Spree

Kill Spree 07-02-2019 10:00 AM

Pics?

Blue Bayou 07-02-2019 10:20 AM

Nah.. save that for Kings pic tourney.. I don't think SC should have pic battles personally

16?

Kill Spree 07-07-2019 09:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by barcotic 9-5-18 Vs King
ya gf scared too.. she cant prepare u for barcs hammers
so Draw ur Tiny Arms when the Fire's on ya Tail. u a charmander

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou 9-21-18 Vs Allen Knight
Ya i fucked his bitch. gave’er a Poke cuz she loves when a male's behind’er..
turned on the Charmander panties dropped… TRUST ME guys that Tail is Fireee



Listen you fuck bitch!...
Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!
U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!
Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!
Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!
Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!
Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’

Blue Bayou 07-08-2019 09:36 AM

Kill Spree aka Bomb Bard.. the miserable coke head that's always mad at the world


fuck coke.
.
.
problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb
when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face
take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion
it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese
when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive
ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted
Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass

Aero 07-08-2019 10:49 AM

KS:

Listen you fuck bitch!...
Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!
LOL nice... Blue's rendition of Char was better
U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!
nah.. reaching
Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!
lol liked the concept.. could've been worded stronger
Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!
Delivery with multis makes this stronger
Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!
terrible
Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’
no way


BB:


problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb
predictable
when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face
lol
take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion
cool idiom use.. so-so
it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese
lol this was good
when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive
Witty
ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted
awful
Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass
this is one of those bars where the concept is there but you don't have enough time to word it


Good battle here fellas but outside of two lines Blue was really consistent.
Good concepts, decent wording.


MVGT Blue.

DMS 07-08-2019 01:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killing Spree (Post 743560)
Listen you fuck bitch!...
Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!

meh

U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!

cool

Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!

cool

Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!

as Aero said, the flows wack and its gay

Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!

goodish

Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’

nah



Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 743592)
Kill Spree aka Bomb Bard.. the miserable coke head that's always mad at the world


fuck coke.
.
.
problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb

good

when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face

this was cool, but it felt kinda lazy, like you worded just to excuse using the play

take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion

nice play on an idiom, but the same problem before is kinda shown here

it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese

dope

when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive

good

ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted

nah fam

Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass

dope


I got Blue for better concepts and execution, V/Blue

Answer 07-08-2019 05:14 PM

Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!

ok opener, i think the word "high" was kinda forced in here unnaturally and doesn't tie to anything from the second side of the reference. also just so I can flex

U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!

kinda simple, but funny so I like it

Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!

this felt like it was going somewhere but then it just kinda got clunky at the end

Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!

I dig this one. Solid current event flip

Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!

eh to be honest, I think you're harping on the barcotic angle too much. It's a cool thing to bring up and mention maybe twice, max out of 12 lines. After that it just loses luster imo

Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’

personally, I think the Askren bar could've been better to close out with but this is ok


problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb

this idea here is super creative, which i like... and everything works syntactically, but there's some kind of x factor that felt like it was missing. I don't know why, it's still a technically sound and solid bar

when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face

I'm guessing if he used the name bomb for any meaningful period of time that photo-bomb would've been a bit played, but overall the wording here makes the bar land imo

take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion

solid, no real complaints at all just something also stopping it just shy from being a devastating haymaker

it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese

lol I fuck with this. Not sure if it's been done, but to my knowledge, I haven't seen it. fuego

when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive

I like the wording on this more than the wordplay here, but good bar overall

ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted

eh nah, pretty dated. prolly your weakest bar in the verse tbh

Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass

solid closer but I just didn't really like how this concept came together


I think it's 14 lines vs 12, but I don't think it really matters. Tbh I think if blue left that clap/rounds bar out of his verse, it would've been even stronger. Both sides were cool, but if I'm being honest I did think there was a clear winner here. I think one of the biggest downsides to Killing Spree's verse is he kept using the same angle. I think from a creativity and wording standpoint, blue also took the edge. I got Queso as botb

v/ Blue

Inno 07-08-2019 09:40 PM

Kill

You mentioned barc to much tbh what 4-5 lines nah b. You had some good concepts but mentioning barc so much ruined them.

Blue

Honestly this was ok. Nothing spectacular or even hard hitting. You just kept it consistent and landed some ok stuff. I dug the queso line, probably your best one. Either way good shit.

I got blue winning this

Barcotic 07-08-2019 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 743599)
LOL nice... Blue's rendition of Char was better

even if i didnt disagree, i cud drop better renditions too if i was jacking his concepts lol

anywho. voting

Spree

Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!
my opener dissing his charmander bar was a lot better.. this still hit tho. u had enough of a variation to make the concept ur own, unfortunately i chose the best one to hit him w. just decent
U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!
weed wack is played on me, so this doesnt do any damage ime
Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!
ur overusing a personal i already beat him w/ to base ur verse around... i didnt really like this particular concept either tbph
Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!
good
Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!
tf? corndog whack
Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’
titan itself is mad played but the personal aspect of ir makes this dece.

1 gd punch
2 jabs
3 misses 3

vs.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 743592)
problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb
ok
when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face
decent again
take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion
miss
it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese
dope
when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive
cool
ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted
reach
Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass
lol dope

3 gd punches
2 jabs
2 misses

blue won
but he also dropped a 14 when ks had already dropped a dozen
uh oh

~RustyGunZ~ 07-08-2019 11:23 PM

Listen you fuck bitch!...
Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!

eh weak personal angle tbh

U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!

ok

Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!

no

Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!

lazy current event flip

Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!

wtf was this

Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’

TIGHTEN/TITAN IN 2019? go home spree

vs

problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb

ok

when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face

fuck no

take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion

ok

it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese

good wording but seen it during the flood of gunbars last year i'm pretty certain

when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive

no

ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted

weak

Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass

are you calling him a mocking bird? or calling the "bird" a mocking bird? don't like this


what a disappointment but blue got it BARELY

spree shouldn't have phoned it in thinking he'd lose cus he could've won

Saint 07-09-2019 01:41 AM

Askren/ High Tail we're coo. Queso was a standout..
BB worded his verse overall better. Misled was ok, Kill Mockingbird was a risky concept. All the Rage...decent

VOTE: BLUE

Kill had more misses & some clunky setups to me.. weed wack was ok. Other two i mentioned hit but lower lows

Zuo 07-09-2019 05:56 AM

Listen you fuck bitch!...
Betta run wen the gun works! 1 rnd’ll have ur heart burst..
I’ll really have U on sum ‘high Tail shit’ ..U jus won’t be rewording a Barc Verse!
nice, solid opener
U prolly cleaned out the archive yard! U a landscaper @ heart dude
U graze Verses & weed wack bars out! & get paid to help Barc mow the lawn to!
alright
Gotta Illmatic that’ll Ether this faggot!.. U hard queer kid
I blast legendary hip hop... U Bang Lil Nas &&& don’t associate that play w/Bars;Lyrics!
no lol
Feel froggy? Leap! I gotta 9 that’ll smash u in..
I’ll Jump quick to put a cap to ur chin..have U out quicker than Askren!
ok, coulda been better. Setup was super lazy papi
Cronus shadow w/a glass jaw! Typical Canadian I would punch through
Ur such a ‘clear faggit’ U ‘Windex Barcotics pillows’ right B4 he fucks you!
nah
Canadian pussy! U ain’t no ‘Worrior’..shots check U cos u thought u sick
Or this fist’ll ‘Titan’ ur jaw... right after wrapping ur face w/that ‘Hockey Stick’
too played to give recognition to


1 good
2 ok
3 misses


Vs



problems w/ his girl is the reason that he’s losing calm
it’s like they've had their ‘wires crossed’ forever...she’s constantly Refusing Bomb
never heard of the term “refusing bomb”
when u ask for a pic she’s livid, pretends she doesn’t hear the question then in haste
she says okay to the Photo-Bomb. prayingg someone does & draws attention from ur face
ok lol
take a deep breathe.. relax.. it should be easy to stay calm cuz ur a minion
i don’t understand ‘all the rage’...you being dope will NEVER be the popular opinion
ehh
it’s your life or your money. choke on the barrel as you drop to ya knees
Queso deep in your throat it’s ironic when i make you cough up the cheese
i liked it, cool
when i shoot to kill, i shoot to Kill.. every shot is smokin’ this guy
if at any point i Misled shiiit i must’ve somehow gave’em hope he’d survive
decent
ain’t bangin the tech, pussy you’ll never have the nerve to blow clips
only clap' round after round during stages of this tourney once my verse is posted
no
Spree shouldn’t even try & get a date or even chase some ass..
it’s not a novel idea.. To Kill A Mockingbird is a chick laughin at’em when he makes a pass
this was bad man


1 good
1 ok
2 Decent
3 misses


If I’m being completely honest this wasn’t the best battle here. And did blue drop more lines than spree? I thought blue would kill spree after reading sprees verse but it was underwhelming. No hate forreal. Ngl I feel really pressured into voting for blue here but I can’t lie, I have to stay true to the people. Sorry fellas.


AFTER FURTHER REVIEW I HAVE BLUE TAKING IT FOR BETTER OVERALL


Vote Blue Bayou


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