Destroyer vs For Battling - FOR BATTLING WINS
The Summer Classic ‘18 The Premier Text Battling Tournament @Destroyer @For Battling Rules Due Dates:
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YOU FUCKIN DEAD
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Lol. I’ll agree to 12 lines about your hideous deformed lip
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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad |
I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ |
Oh wow. There was some serious nastiness in this. I'll edit it a vote in when I have fully digested this exquisite meal of deliciousness
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Des - baby Ruth’s was cool // 2nd of beyond nay for me // fused properly lol good // one reaching and shot down was niiiice, mean // bags concept over done. Liked that you used the word beat // palates could’ve been better with a better tie in to palates...
For B. - wife’s dead fetus was harshhhhhh. Loved it // lol @ burst. Annabelle was good // dummy talk dope concept needed better set up // don’t know if I fully get the MMLP2. Not feeling even if I get it // bingo night was good for stick concepts // banging cans on floor I don’t think grocery stores honor that. At first I had it clearly for Des but now need to re-evaluate and do it on points. Yes I got Des here. Good battle. |
For Battling
I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse Destroyer Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat Vote: For Battling... this was actually really close and the lotb was the fetus shit to me which is what pushed For Battling over the edge to the win. Wording really fucked up a lot of y'all verses seemed like you were more focused on just the ending punch in some of these lines. Like i said though close battle and For battling had my favorite bar of the battle to break the two punch tie that I had y'all in |
Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths Not really feeling the opener here... You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye Lol, funny jab here Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly Another funny jab..I like this one ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it ODing on the LIP bars, I didn't like this one to much here tho me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat This was good hit here and worded just right on the execution & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad Closer was decent, nothing to hard hitting on the opponent imo ----------- I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did Wow, direct personal sting on the opener Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse Lol, I had some Annabelle concepts I wanted to use, this was executed nice I must say tho. Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic Fiya! Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season Lol this was decent far as a jab go, personally funny here tho You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! Bingo lines kinda played, lmao but that rattle as a gunbar shit/lingo setup was funny as hell I cant lie Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ Decent closer, I don't to much think Can lines are hard hitters, but overall the line is decent at best. Overall this was nice battle here, Des had a cool verse, but I feel like he was ODing on the LIP jokes a little to much where Zelph was all around in his verse. Des had 2 lines in his verse far as quotes go. Zelph had three & a half line far as quotes go with less misses. Props to both, but I got Zelph on this one. V-FB |
Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths huh? not getting the humour here, maybe im missing something... but nah You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye hmmm, kinda funny, this was okay Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused haha cool, this hit ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it okay me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat the whole bag over head idea is pretty overdone, chuckle worthy tho & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad lol cool wp, good finish vs. I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did ohh shit, good hit & a tad better then the bar Des used Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse niice, cool concept & attack line Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic another dummy bar? anyways this is a cool flip on the ventriloquist idea, worded well Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season dece personal hit You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! damn, this is dope... good creativity here Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ it's funny you tell me I used too many gay punches when you have pretty much an entire verse of gun bar lol... that aside, I dig this.. concept is dope, good finish Good battle here, Des you had a couple good personal hits and a mixture of pretty/dece & okay lines.. FB nice verse, opener hit hard and some dope attack lines & concepts throughout.. Vote - For Battling |
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Zelph I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did harsh. kind of a rebuttal tho Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse cool Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic 2 dummy tie ins in a row? no Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season weak You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! no, reaching for a concept Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ ok 2 gd punches 1 jab 3 misses v/dest |
I wrote this vote four times an it's been lost four times. Z my man, if you wanna hear why message me bro. I had des here. In short because he took a personal angle the whole way through an nullified to a degree my fav bar by zelph (opener). Although zelph probs dropped best he has n there was alot of fire...Sadly you both had one miss an it came down to z using a few generics in there an destroyer making everything personal that edged it. My fav battle this round by far. Z if you wanna break down pm me bro loved this shit both deserve credit.
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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths (Hmmm I didn’t care for this one. I like that you went for the flip on Zelph’s “I thought I told you” but the punch just wasn’t there” You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye (Lol this is funny. Pretty good) Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly (The archives part was a good personal angle. The second line was pretty good. Good prebuttal and the punch was okay. Overall good line) ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it (Hmmm this is not bad. You coulda set this up a better so we know exactly what ‘reaching and getting shot down for it’ is referring to. This was solid but coulda been dope with a better setup/tie in) me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat (Ehhh, the bags flip doesn’t feel fresh and the flip was pretty simple. Not bad though. & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad (Damn I wanted to like this one. The wp itself is slick but it def doesn’t fit in the punch both ways imo. Coulda def been fire with better execution) I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did (This would have been a bit better if Des didn’t anticipate it. It was okay) Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse (Yezzir. This is dope and creative) Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic (Dang you def shoulda split this and your last punch up. This coulda been fire as well but two dummy punches back to back take away from it even though dumb dumb punches aren’t even that common. The concept was still nice though and execution/wording as well. Overall pretty good) Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season (This is a good personal. Woulda liked to see a punch at the end or something to make it a tad more impactful. Not bad though) You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! (Lmao nigga got that tommy pickles tucked. This is a dope punch. I like the personal angle in the set up. The bingo night punch is dope and it tied into the set up well) Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ (This some hood shit lmao. The reference is funny af to me. Punch was nice. You flipped a pretty long phrase pretty flawlessly here which is impressive. Really good closer) Man this is a good battle. A grudge match for sure. Des had a nice verse. It read better each read imo. Des has some subtleties in his pen that I enjoyed. Also every punch had a personal touch to it. The amount of kip bars might have made some of your latter punches come off less impactful but you still showed a lot of creativity. Zelph went off and was punching back to back. Des definitely had the better personals but you was tryna punch that niggas head off. A lot of heavy punches combined with gout wording and flow. Your verse was also very consistent with no misses imo. This battle got closer and closer with each read but I thin Zelph had a few less misses and also had the heavier haymakers. I got zelph taking this one. Mvgt Zelph |
Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths sheesh You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye Ehhhhhh nah Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly coo you could've worded it better though ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it fireee me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat seen too many similar lines used against bags tbh but it was a cool personal & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad the set up made me think it was about to bang but that last bit was weird vs I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did cot dam Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse Don't get it I don't fux with gay "horror" movies Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic feels used but good wording Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season I might be missing the reference for the punch but I don't see a connection to MMLP2? That had a ton of potential but yeah don't see any connection. You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! cool Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ was gonna say there's too many cans bars but the half off flip made it sting pretty much exactly even for me. zelphs opener was his best and a good deflection on personals vs him. very knucklehead of you. I think Destro had LOTB with the cop shit though it was slick as fuck and a bit more creative. v/ des but can see it going either way. surprised by zelph i never really peeped you before just saw you get caught biting in the past so never pay your battles any mind lol |
Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths st8, prolly giving more cred cause of the Goonies reference You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye cool line Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly solid ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it ehhhh decent cop flip me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat st8 because the ending was lackluster & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad ehhh OD'd on lip punches I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did jesus Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse dope Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic st8 Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season st8 You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! fuck with it Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ umm ,had to re-read it but i like it I got FB here, his first 2 bars was dope with some decent one spread out, Des dropped good too but I OD'ed on lip jokes by the end. Good battle fellas |
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Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it vs I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse This battle was pretty dope tbh. The lines I quoted above from both were fuckin fire. that irony cop line was flames but that annabelle dummy shit was LOTB imo. Thats what kinda edged it here being so close. Vote - For Battling |
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