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Sharp 08-02-2022 09:40 PM

Incredible vs R!canTheoryz - R!CAN WINS
 
Netcees SOL Season II
Week 6


Due Friday, August 5th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
@Incredible @R!canTheoryz

Incredible 08-02-2022 10:18 PM

Yo 10

R!canTheoryz 08-03-2022 04:08 AM

10 is fine.

R!canTheoryz 08-05-2022 02:00 PM

I need the small ext I’ll post soon as I get off work.

Incredible 08-05-2022 09:48 PM

Sent 10 to Sharp VIA PM.
@R!canTheoryz

R!canTheoryz 08-06-2022 03:37 PM

I’ll split ya Ear ever met a scared retired graffiti artist? You’ll Quit in Fear,
This like Magic Markers the way one swipe’ll make INK disappear.
I’ve been flexible. To build a crazy bond wit ya ppls never inseparable,
I’ll kill Your credits bold out Anythin you’ve said & still wouldn’t come out incREDIBLE.
Better run south. Having a hoe for a wife ain’t reslly some clout,
Because Your girls pussy been sitting on miles & that’s why we call her Fun Couch.
Imma bout to do Herb Badly. Right after I expose This Nerds Hobby,
You can sing all the ja Rule you want Ink will still get murder faster than IRV gotti.
This stupid bitch never raised it always been apart a group of lies,
So don’t stick ya hand on a touchy subject unless it’s a ceiling fan while the power on high.

Incredible 08-06-2022 04:10 PM

Sharp noticed I had to do some digging on my last opponent, but your a known loser
Vote-Rican?? He thinks it's a joke he's in on, not laughing with you...were laughing at you, stupid!
Said he'll post after work, guess the live battle scene ain't poppin
Stop n check with us?? Stfu, that's just the store you go to cash your weekly profit.
dgaf about your live battles, that we've never seen video of
You see the gif? That's just your gang of lames tryna get into the club
NC for sure the only time you'll catch rican with a Poll and it gets clicked proper
Strap is stitched to my shoulder so when I 'Terminate', naturally I'm 'gettin the choppa'
I hope your moms caught a toliet roll from the Donalds hands, B
I'm lying...honestly hope that storm a few years ago wiped out your whole fucking family!!!

evaD 08-07-2022 11:37 AM

Thought Rican had better ideas and smoother writing but a couple like Murda Inc bar could’ve been done better. Incredible I think your closer was strongest but a few at the start barely even rhymed to me

Vote - Rican

Wanderer 08-07-2022 11:52 AM

Rican delivered a harder hitting verse. Nothing was knockout but the wording / multis helped it land. Opener was LOTB despite the simple wordplay. Inc, ideas were there but needed more time taken to polish

Vote Rican

Sinacog 08-07-2022 08:49 PM

V/RICAN..

Adverse 08-07-2022 11:09 PM

Rican threw around some decent concepts although nothing was exactly hair raising, I think the attacks were definitely one dimensional focusing on just his name and nothing more. Would like to see some variety.

Inc was a little more variable with concepts but the execution wasn’t there. I think Inc needs to put more thought into making his concepts sting. I gave the same sort of advice earlier to Defiant, you’ve got to actually say something that’s going to do damage sometimes being clever isn’t enough. Go for the throat

V/Rican both could have used some rewriting but he was better this week

UserName 08-08-2022 10:12 PM

This was… interesting.

The ink lines from Rican are maybe the best things in his verse, and the stop n check line is probably my favorite from Inc. This was close.

Going with Rican on the strength of 2-to-1.

V - Rican

Blue Bayou 08-08-2022 10:15 PM

Rican

Opener an okay ink/Inc obvious name flip
Second nah
Fun couch... huh? Is this a funk ouch wordplay?
An ink ja rule punch in 2022... Jesus Christ
Closer makes no sense... touchy subject and a fan ref?


Vs.

Opener is poorly worded but the punch is ight
I assume Stop n Check is a mkneymart kind of store... okay third no
The random Arnold movies with no mention of Arnold is interesting
Storm probably an old personal... worded bland and straightforward


Seen both drop better before... i have Inc edging it with the stop n Check line and a couple okay personal attempts vs easy and played nameplays


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