Exis vs Corleone - EXIS WINS
 

10 bars due whenever.

in..

Check bro...

hello can you tell me where I can make a battle ?

quick keystyle..

fuck exis..
I'll punish this guy.. he'll crumble and die//
and mount exis (exit) to the ground, like a government sign//(lol.. his name/government sign)
.. best believe he'll never win, him beating me is a negative//
it's evident he's retarded..
you couldn't pronounce his name without a speech-impediment//(.. exis)
I'll teach this degenerate a lesson.. as I piece his head into segments//
cause either way he's getting fucked, regardless of his sexual-preference//
.. I'll batter this nigga exis in battle and trash his record//
and shatter his clavicle till' he baffles and chatters his death wish//
I'll handle this peasant and damage his essence//
.. and rip exis off his skin like damaged complexion// (exis.. excess/eczema)
I'm raw.. my lyrical skills are beyond his comprehension//
a verbal chemist, destroying labs with liquids tested over records//
saliva samples gathered and measured, when composing my writtens//
in the coldest conditions, been flowing with this sickness before exis existed//(.. his name/the word, "existed")
infectious linguistics'll wreck your existence//(.. his name/the word, "existence")
bullets travel to your body, too quick for the ballistic report to match up with forensics//
I'll torment exis till' he's pronounced schizophrenic//
till' he's institutionalized and subdued by anesthetics//
till' he can't move a muscle due to hallucinogenics//
injected by countless needles, and he pukes his intestines//

I post our battle on #OCTF, as well.. you can respond there if you want, as well.. I could care less.. lol

https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/offi...attle-t92.html

.. @Exis ^^^^

here's my two votes for the BA section with links.. to follow up with rules and regulations..

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=143777
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...161#post782161

Hold up nigga lol...got a child to look after & shit, I'll post soon.

This Cor whore surely bores me
Truly beneath Sharp & myself like floorboards, look @ your flaws C
I said 10 bars not 10 lines you dense bloody hoe
I dent fuckers yo, honestly you're the gayest bitch
Exis keeps you amazed with spits, watch me deploy blades to snitch
I'll drown out our bad blood & you'll just give your Aids to fish
Once the disease hits dawn, demons that eat wack shit spawn
& your psalms & songs won't make it to track 6 son
Devour your sour mentality, 'cause Ex's lyrics are empowered reality
I goto work & shoot everyone with a higher salary in their abdominal cavity
Astronomical haphazard matter gets splattered when I react with these batteries
I'm bashin' this dork, do you ever notice the ash on her back when you're mountin' a whore?
She smoked out fountains of raw, then I put out my blunt & match on her jaw
Ahem, don't call it a comeback as lyrics rarely get stuck
Like LL said "Knock out ya moms" or whatever the fuck
My spits are never clean, sick infection reppin' fluids
Spirits & metal, give most of my lyrics a competitors edge like revvin' your foot on the pedal
Metaphors are broken, structure is broken
My only hope is that sarcasm & jokes are in focus
All I see is Corleone chokin' on novice, tryin' to rap but approachin' the rank of hopeless.

.. @Exis you said 10 bars guy.. learn how to count your bars.. 10 bars = 10 lines.. but I key'd in some new rhymes to meet your new bar limit.. lol smh.. peace

Where I'm from a bar is 2 lines...maybe where you're from, like Sri Lanka or some shit it's different...learn to write first then second guess son.

Isn't editin' gay, or swayin' on some shit @Sharp...you posted a verse, got destroyed...deal with it you little bitch.

cockbite chill.. I only edited my verse because you told me to post only 10 bars.. you posted 20 bars.. where you learned to write music? smh.. what's fair is fair kiddo.. and its not like I edited my verse or changed anything.. all I did was key in extra bars..

You posted our battle on your forum (which apparently you the only nigga on there) didn't let no one comment (as you the only nigga on there) & say "I win"...how's that fair man? Tell me...

read the rules in the b.a section on my forum.. I judge every battle to a perfection and overall, I had the better verse. Why prolong anyone to vote when it was obvious that I won? Stop being a sore loser.

Aight...I'm not gonna go back & forth with you man, you win.

lmfao.. I know what you mean, you wanted to play cockadoo.. I dont play cockadoo.

I won stfu...