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Sharp 07-19-2015 11:55 PM

Junto 6-2 vs Ace 2-0 (ROAST BATTLE) - JUNTO WINS
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Junto @Ace

Sharp 07-20-2015 12:56 AM

https://scontent-lga1-1.xx.fbcdn.net...7c&oe=56285790
@Ace @Junto

acceptable?

Ace 07-24-2015 07:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 508155)


Aiyyo
U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
Mahfucka.
.
.
.

Junto 07-25-2015 02:50 AM

https://scontent-lga1-1.xx.fbcdn.net...7c&oe=56285790

yo...

Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool

El Muffin 07-25-2015 03:00 AM

U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
(lmao. this was funny. I smirked) 10/10
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
(this is dope but kinda strange u talm bout gunbars in a roast battle. I like this tho. ill give it an avg because of what I said prior) 6/10
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
(hHhahaha damn this got me too) 9/10
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
(ok) 6/10
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
(another good one tb) 8/10
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
(yup this too) 8/10
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
(ehhh concept the truth but something about this I don't like. seemed kinda corny for some reason. cant explain it) 5/10
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
(man this is random but I like it. this that shit u do that im like wtf but cool)
8/10
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
(see u. but personally not feelin much) 4/10
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
(ok) 6/10
Mahfucka.

whats that 70? mmk

El Muffin 07-25-2015 03:05 AM

Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
(nah not feeling this at all tbh. just the pic analysis didn't grab me) 1/10
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
(hahaha this was clever. I fuk with this hard) 10/10
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
(not enthused. the gobbling of wieners left me n im not immediately familiar with the reference tbh. it sounds familiar.) 4/10
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
(lmfao. yeah me too) 9/10
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
(ok) 6/10
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
(heh slick. I like it) 8/10
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
(ehhhhhh) 5/10
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
(another clever word association. this that shit right here) 9/10
Yo selfie stick arms... rockin that 2-tone band extra fat look stupid dude
It's mostly white. But the light makes it look half black like ya hoped that hat might do for u
(heh pretty cool) 7/10
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
(lol ok. decent but lolish) 6/10
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
(nice) 9/10


fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck u guys

h/o I gotta crunch numbers n shit

edit: mm kay

no wonder I had to use that method

it was incredibly close

I had junto by 4 points according to my breakdown

and I will not go back n alter shit. that's all my legit feeling of each bar on a scale of 1/10

junto had worst bar but still pulled it out by a hair

v/junto

Vulgar 07-25-2015 11:26 AM

Ace

U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
Lol
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
Nice
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
Haha
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
Ok
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
Ha
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
Didn't like this
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
Ehh
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
Decent
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
Cool
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
Cool

Junto

Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
Ok
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
Nice
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
Ok
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
Ha
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
lol
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
Clever
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
lol
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
Seems played, no?
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
Bahaha
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
Meh

Vote - Junto

Aero 07-25-2015 11:45 AM

Ace:

Aiyyo
U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
aight
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
cool concept but just ok
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
ha ok
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
nah
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
decent
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
meeeeeeeeeannnn
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
lol jokes
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
nice nice
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
meh
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
nope


some ok stuff, couple really nice lines


Junto:


Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
didn't like the sagging your nostrils part even though it fits concept
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
nah, not worded well enough
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
aight
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
I would've liked this more had the parent element been removed and it just been about him wanting to be hood
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
ok
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
lol cool
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
niiiiice
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
lol ok ok
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
nahhhh
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
this could've been delivered way cleaner

started off slow but picked up steam towards the end




this a close battle and I really only like voting on battles where the winner is clear cut..



Ace gets my vote. His good lines had a little more appeal to me.

Netcees Battle League 07-25-2015 02:40 PM

2-1 Junto . UP

Swerve 07-25-2015 04:35 PM

see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.

vs.

Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting


Fuck this was close. I thought Ace had this for sure because Junto started so slow, but Junto made up for it in a BIG way in the middle part of his verse which was FIRE.

V/ Junto

Saint 07-25-2015 11:11 PM

damn. battle of the week most likely..

i read this a few times and its hard cuz i keep going back.

Ls loose, foam fingers, open up tommy.. heaters

pokeball, chestnut, call me son .. lollin

i felt the two weakest were aces balloon Lin and juntos opener.

goin back i feel ace had some clever, wittier solid lines, and junto had more observational stuff.. watch, woodwork etc..cool, but close enough where he had a few execution problems I felt, like the watch line.

i got ace by a hair. Vote-ace

Useless 07-25-2015 11:51 PM

Aiyyo
U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.

Consistent verse n u brought the lulz. Only a cpl lines I thought missed. Good shit.

Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool

Tbh I thought ur verse got off to a slow start. U had a couple almost quotables in the beginning like the elbows/ounce line and move to NY line but I didn't really like the wording. Woodwork is played but I liked the flip n that closer was meh but for some reason I liked it.

I think ace got this on consistency and he had the lulz factor. Dope battle tho junto had a good verse too just not enough.

V. Ace

Pastor Troy 07-26-2015 02:40 AM

U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
(this bar was better than the movie.)

see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
(Yep)
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
(Nice)
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
(well executed)
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
(mustache wrong direction// blah blah has been done before)No

i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
Nice wording. but wasnt hitting

Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
Funny

u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
Ok
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
(Nope)
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
No



Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
(nice
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
cool
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
hmm
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
Ohh
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
hmm
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
Could have been lotb if worded better
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
nice
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
ok
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
nice
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
basic


I really thought Remy had this with so many good hits. but reading both them verses twice . i feel ace like edged it by an inch.both came hard. def battle of the week

V-ace.

Bust 07-26-2015 05:55 AM

Ace

That opener was funny af,
Hilfiger top was cool
L got me louse was cool
Backwards look was nice
Wasn't really feel the crumb trail that much, was almost funny tho
Fisk fingers was lol but a lil light
Be fly was ok
L liked down look
Short pier was oooook u tied it well but wasn't feelin the insult that much
Closer was ehh, set up was cool tho

Junto

Opener was lol
Take an elbow was dope
Didn't like how u closer out O chestnut impact wise
Son. So bad was funny
Facial hair was ehh
4th down n short was pretty slick
Strange creatures was funny
Felt woodwork coulda been better still ok
Hate Christmas was cool
Closer was aight


Damn thus battle tuff, lotta good shit n entertaining read.. Well shit wasn't a while lot wrong with neither both very consistent great pic references, but I felt junto slightly edged this man very close n a difficult desicion but felt Jun was a half a punch better maybe.. Could go either way


Junto

Orc 07-26-2015 08:55 AM

U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
[this is light]
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
[dope here]
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
[this is cool]
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
[miss here]
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
[good, creative]
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
[dopeee]
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
[a Fly concept in 2015 is shameful]
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
[simple, light]
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
[nah fell flat, coulda worded cleaner man]
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
[not feeling the closer]

some dope shit mixed with some misses, i think you're shaking the rust but not at 100 percent just yet, from the Fly line onwards the concepts hurt ya verse imo

vs


Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
[not feeling this]
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
[not crisp enough imo, bad execution]
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
[better, now we're starting]
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
[nah bro this isn't good]
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
[hahahahaha fucking funny]
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
[this was creative and sick]
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
[now you're cooking]
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
[this was nice man]
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
[this was terrible lol]
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
[this is light, wording killed it bro]


u had about four bangers in a row mixed with some bad lines like the Grinch, at other times the concepts were nice but it just all got a little too wordy bro


reading over my feedback Junto had one more quoteable than Ace. i think the Fly line and Grinch line were the worst respectively. it was fairly even throughout with both having some mean fucking bars but Junto edged it barely to me

v Junto by a quote

Pastor Troy 07-26-2015 02:03 PM

Lol. i quoted remy. my bad. Junto

Hush 07-26-2015 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ace (Post 510806)
Aiyyo
U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
nah
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
nice
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
haha ok this is clowning.
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
im suprised u worded it this way, wording on the punch is totally off. its light regardless. id even classify this as a miss
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
nah
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
yea thats cool
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
this is light, like real light.. missing the sting here bro
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
wack tbh
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
this is fire, this is what i was waiting for. dope af
Mahfucka.
.
.
.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Junto (Post 511032)
https://scontent-lga1-1.xx.fbcdn.net...7c&oe=56285790

yo...

Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
ok
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
elbow? lol thats some 80s shit, this aight tho.
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
dont get this
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
wack
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
aihght cool
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
this a super reach, u could of made it doper, but points for creativity
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
lol ok
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
eh weak wp but its ok
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
light, boring
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
dope



Junto got this
Ace had the best line, but he missed too much
Jun had consistency and some shit of his own


v/jun

~RustyGunZ~ 07-26-2015 07:10 PM

U aint out to score.. ur father thought ya life would amount to more..
so he did a Billy Madison to first grade.. & now he showin us how he counts to four.
cool
see this wigger drop, bring all the guns u have.. i got the bigger pop..
one peep outta u & my Tommy will open up at ur neck like that Hilfiger top.
This kid only rocks walmart brands, but cool
& when I say the L got me loose im smokin the herb, high
when HE says the L got him feelin loose he's just complaining about his shirt size.
lol good
bro, stop cruisin by stores & kill whoever convinced YOU to buy more
cuz that hat got a 'backwards look' dyslexics would choose suicide for.
nah
check this stupid guys pores.. u think ya facial hair grown.?
missin kids can use that crumb trail u call a mustache to find their way home.
okay
i got serious game.. u got grotesque hands.. what u shows sicker..
now i cant hit a free throw for the life of me.. im distracted by his foam fingers.
eh
Ur whole style says anorexic loser.. go eat a fry there u goon..
only way u'll ever be Fly is if someone handed this skinny fuckin guy a balloon.
eh
u GOTTA be retarded.. ur genes are from a weak source..
ur face got a Down look that can double a rollercoaster's G force.
eh
You not only missin a chromosome.. i hate what u sport queer..
ur moms should abort here.. fuck a slope.. ur chin looks like it took a long walk off a short pier.
nah
i've listed ur calls, fuck ya iPhone negative 7.. u got a flip that appauls..
u aint go pro..when all u do at the club is dance in place & selfie stick to the wall.
lol cool

vs

Is this some snooty rich kid or will this gangsta get hostile?
I can't tell if you're turning your nose up at me or just saggin ya nostrils
lol okay
I move weight in the gym & from the porch, Try swingin & you'll get found a corpse
& I'd nevvver take an elbow from u dude. The one ur showing's atleast 6 ounces short
lol
Lookin like a faggot slash addict who gives out blowies for dimes
That apartment's an ode to Chestnut... but u've gobbled more weiners than him & Stonie combined
cool lol
He's a mommas boy.. cuz Pop left soon as he saw this bum, SO fast
ur dream is move to NY... you hope some random black guy there'll call you "son" SO bad
lol okay
Plus thinkin you look like a mans just asburd fool
You don't have facial hair your upper lips covered by herpes & blur tool
looll
Why u got ya fingers up tryna do 'the shocker' when u don't pull no ass my dude
It don't matter that the 4th down & look short... whatever the scenario bitches ALWAYS pass on u
okay
I bought that same mobile by 5th grade. For '02 that camera worked well holmes
But back then I captured strange creatures wit pokeballs, and not my cell phone
lol word, wording could've been better but liked it
Wherever this poser's gettin his cheap ass clothes? Depressing
How u comin right out the Woodwork... wit an outfit on that Wouldn't in aaanny social setting
eh okay idea, seen would work before
Kid is so weak, chances u'll sculpt those arms & ya midsection? bleak
I bet you hate christmas .. cuz you're poor .. & have the grinch's physique
eh
Ya timepiece don't come wit Siri but says "broke fuck". Just stop it fool
No matter how many bands u get u can't change that hideous face... but the watch looks cool
dope

v/junto


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