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Blue Bayou 05-18-2020 12:08 PM

Week 7: Bomb Bard (3-1) vs. Allen Knight (2-1) - AK WINS
 
NBL Season XIV

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@Bomb Bard
@Allen Knight

Bomb Bard 05-18-2020 12:11 PM

Been awhile.. let’s get it

Allen Knight 05-18-2020 01:34 PM

Sup yo goin 12.

Bomb Bard 05-23-2020 09:42 PM

Allen Knight aka Maserotti Knight on discord

Quote:

Blue Bayou aka Dexter Morgan vs. Ill-Nika NBL Season One
forget lookin for Chicago chicks with nice racks and a car..
if you wanna see Illinois bitches watch this creep try and mack at the bar

Quote:

Allen Knight 06-30-2013
nika im sick of hearing about ur past, fuck wat this scrubs saying
illinois the fuck outta me cuz he hasnt been relevant since jordan was playing

Quote:

Allen Knight again
ur not nice w/ this shit, i'll spray at u when i ride high
wen u talk like ya Illinois the shit out me, u'll catch a stray bullet like a chicago drive-by

Quote:

Blue Bayou 06-22-2018
ur bitch pays me a Fifa sex & says every day that she'll blow me..
so i roll thru & leave her w/ less 'Clean Sheets' than Saudi Arabia's goalie

Quote:

Allen Knight - Two Weeks after
ur sluts tryna pay my team to train her out & go grimey in it
charge her a FIFA '19 of my niggas to send balls at her box for 90 mins




Listen Cock sucker...
You don’t want War w/Spree. Quickly Missiles goin through bro back
Won’t even hear “Hit the Dex” in battle.. or have time to Gun off for a Notepad!
Shoot your face in, Pussy! Plus bullets rockin your ribs
Ambo bring you to the Morgan Drop, & not where you pick up concepts to flip!
This black hawk? Blast & leave you dead n off’d quick
You recycled Illinois so much we’d think you removed trash @ Creds apartment
Gang kill this old fuck! Fam leave you dead & choked
I paid them a Grand, Mas..to rape & murder yours B4 we get a vote
Punches I throw up? Sick! You a pure joke kid
way you Bit Blue over ILL? Could definitely Cure Covid!
Your pig of a wife gets trained on! Always slobbering cock down
Gang Rush In & rage! It’s just a typical party with Moscow

Blah

Neighbor 05-24-2020 11:01 AM

Allen Knight

Ur sluts pussy is wretched, mad niggas mopped the thotti
That hos vag smells Atomic Bomb & it gotta bigger body count then Nagasaki
Catch u after dark bitch, spray ya w/ the K faggot
I'm comin for Blood at Night, leave ya coat filled w/ more metal then Blades jacket
This redneck alkey faggot, thinks he's dope w/ the spits he flexes
Neva see a verse from Bardwell written shit sounds like a drunk hick from Texas
U can act like u a blood w/ a rag, I'll steal ya soul w/ a mag
ya lifes Wirfs shit & I'll Bucc 13 hollows at ya till I leave ya skull on ya flag
been on all sites winnin, pussy not even rb likes ya average trash
I Colleagues like this dope & no site wants to be associated w/ ya faggot ass
talk all that tough shit like my fists wont fold u scrub
Show Bomb proof he ain't untouchable wen i uppercut'em till his face explodes w/ blood

Coop 05-24-2020 12:25 PM

Bomb Bard

You don’t want War w/Spree. Quickly Missiles goin through bro back
Won’t even hear “Hit the Dex” in battle.. or have time to Gun off for a Notepad!
Ok, but, where's the diss
Shoot your face in, Pussy! Plus bullets rockin your ribs
Ambo bring you to the Morgan Drop, & not where you pick up concepts to flip!
Same issue here
This black hawk? Blast & leave you dead n off’d quick
You recycled Illinois so much we’d think you removed trash @ Creds apartment
This could've been better if the setup was relevant. Wasn't feelin it
Gang kill this old fuck! Fam leave you dead & choked
I paid them a Grand, Mas..to rape & murder yours B4 we get a vote
I like the wp, not a strong diss
Punches I throw up? Sick! You a pure joke kid
way you Bit Blue over ILL? Could definitely Cure Covid!
Ehhh
Your pig of a wife gets trained on! Always slobbering cock down
Gang Rush In & rage! It’s just a typical party with Moscow
Bland for a closer

Grandmas was really the only bar that interested me. Your wording aint bad overall, but i'm not a fan of the style. I'd guess it took you 10 minutes to put this together.

3/10



VS


Allen Knight


Ur sluts pussy is wretched, mad niggas mopped the thotti
That hos vag smells Atomic Bomb & it gotta bigger body count then Nagasaki
Ok, but subpar for an opener. Save the girl jokes for later.
Catch u after dark bitch, spray ya w/ the K faggot
I'm comin for Blood at Night, leave ya coat filled w/ more metal then Blades jacket
Not a diss
This redneck alkey faggot, thinks he's dope w/ the spits he flexes
Neva see a verse from Bardwell written shit sounds like a drunk hick from Texas
Abv avg filler
U can act like u a blood w/ a rag, I'll steal ya soul w/ a mag
ya lifes Wirfs shit & I'll Bucc 13 hollows at ya till I leave ya skull on ya flag
Points for creativity but wordy. Put Wirfs in the setup and this is smoother
been on all sites winnin, pussy not even rb likes ya average trash
I Colleagues like this dope & no site wants to be associated w/ ya faggot ass
I was wit it until the ending.
talk all that tough shit like my fists wont fold u scrub
Show Bomb proof he ain't untouchable wen i uppercut'em till his face explodes w/ blood
Meh

3 /10

First impression? Nothing stood out in either verse, no clear winner.


Went back, re-read...

I got

Bardwell, Wirfs > Grandmas
Nagasaki > Illinois


Vote: Allen Knight

Victor. 05-24-2020 12:33 PM

I got Allen slightly


Really liked his opener


Bomb loses impact on punches cuz how they are worded imo


Fun read

FGR 05-25-2020 12:51 AM

I'm not sure if it's a accent thing but the first two bars from spree didn't really rhyme for me.. notepad/bro back.. ribs/flip.. plus the wording on the first bar came off choppy to me.. cred apartment was ok.. grand mas was cool.. covid was ok but a little mild..finisher was a miss for me...alright verse..I've seen better from u. Few misses in there.. Allen had an okay opener..nothing special but not a miss.. blade jacket was alright..bardwell was cool.. next three were just okay . Nothing in this battle stood out as a strong punch to me..alot of jabs n a few misses... It's actually a pretty close battle..but I got ak taking this with one or two more hits..VOTE ALLEN KNIGHT

UPN Zuch 05-25-2020 01:01 AM

Allen had the better verse here. Not a blow out by any means but he had a couple more hits and his shit flowed nicer.

Vote- allen

Neighbor 05-25-2020 12:39 PM

At a cookout

I got AK by 2 bars & a more consistent verse

Enjoyed Bomb’s showing here & thought it was his best yet

Blue Bayou 05-25-2020 12:49 PM

AK wins


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