[Contenders Match:] Slechtc 6-1 [vs] R!canTheoryz 4-3 [Slechtc Wins]
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @slechtc @R!canTheoryz |
Salutations My Nigga.. @R!canTheoryz
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It'll be more than Rican's pitfall if he keeps insisting to brawl, Fist to the jaw n' he's Russian quicker than Putin granting citizenship to Steven Seagal |
Checking In
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Fuck ur ndependence the cannons lit your not adequate rappin like a advocate
Your mother's pussy like the elections got me questioning candidates |
Sletch....pretty strateched last Line....set up was nice.... Russian/Rushin' was ehh' shoulda read "If" he's Russian maybe..didn't hit right tho
Rican- idea was cool...don't think it was worded right tho'///set up was also ehhhh... lil' more creative attempt on the wordplay tho' and rhyme wasn't as stretched both didn't bring much this week...but Vote- Rican Trump |
V. Slech.
Two decent concepts. Both stretched, Rican had wording issues as well. Slex gets my vote cause his bar read a bit smoother |
i dunno man, both were weak but Russian flips are played to death and slech's wasn't worded well anyways, Rican's line was just decent and he takes the W here for me
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both concepts were interesting for what they were...
whenever I see a Russian line thrown out there it reminds me of Nelly... R!can came with a decent concept but I felt like it was rushed. the set up felt odd but I feel he brought an almost original idea... v/rican |
SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Slechtn vs. R!canTheoryz
Slechtn: I liked the relevance of this. The final concept was original, but the Russian/rushin' wordplay wasn't. Your multis were somewhat problematic; you set up a 4-syllable scheme with "in-sisting to brawl" and "Fist to the jaw," but then broke it with the first two syllables of Steven Seagal, unless you have some accent that I'm not familiar with; do you pronounce the long "ee" sound as the short "i?" I thought that the second line was long-winded, though I'm not really sure how you could have shortened it. Overall: good punch, mediocre execution. Final Score: 12/20 R!canTheoryz: Well... the punch was alright, nothing great. Even though you had several multi sets, the fact that the first three were close to each other, followed by a large gap between the third and fourth one, made the flow rather awkward. It wouldn't have flown in a live battle, that's for sure. I really wasn't impressed with this. Final Score: 10/20 Final Thoughts: While neither punch was mind-blowing, one was more creative, and that earned its writer the win. Slechtn gets my vote over R!canTheoryz (12 - 10) |
both had decent current events
voting for the better set up with that said, slecht here rican was ok but execution was sloppy imo mvgt slek |
3-3
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Next person to free post I'm fucking giving the Boot
3-3 Uppin |
Ricans setup n finisher were irrelevant went into a gun bar then finisher about slechtn mom didnt correlate well at all. @Slechtn russian wordplay old af and really dont get ur concept i dont comprehend the Steven Seagal and Putin line is it true? It was executed better but i do need u to pm me for explanation of the reference.
Im voting slechtn for the fact he had better execution and his setup and finisher were relevant. |
V slecht
Russian concept was boring but decent enough flip. I felt like Rican had the better concept, but could've done a lot more with it. Missed opportunity here kid |
5-3 Sletch Wins
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