WEEK 4: Wanderer 2-1 VS Mod of War 1-0 WANDERER WINS
 

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Good luck, gentlemen
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Hey let’s do 10

Sure

Ayy boss how you feel about dropping today?

Sent 12

PREPARE TO DIE


Isle end this! no expiration date. Wait till u see where this gooks headed
He’s so used to the taste of defeat he developed a foot fetish
I could drop straight trash. Literally a dud of a verse and I’m good
Cuz when it comes to beef in this battle I already knw u bratwurst than I would
And your girl? Likes to nibble, s’cool.. I’m just glad she’s not a biter
A Nice broad, says she’s into innocence.. kinda weird she likes the smell of topical writers
KAPOW! I hate foreigners. Best believe I’ll leave you dead mate
I pack pistols.. my grain is 147, it’ll give you more than a headache!
This is straight murder, it’s no secret I’m killin em
The verse will either be gunbars or just dead funny like Robin Williams
Death by aerial assault. Fuck around n get aired
This nerd wasn’t ready but I’m sure he had his Bluetooth pre paired

Hey Zelph / Zaddy / Mod of War

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me
I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties
A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell..
If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell
Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about
Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb

Zelph’s verse was garbage. Funny at times, but garbage

Wanderer - liked the opener, cool personal. I don’t get the Balloon bar man. Soldier bar was fire, the wording of the set up could have been tweaked to make the bar better. Brush was a weak connection to the punch imo. Name drop is fire and a good personal. Tripwire was filler.

Vote Wanderer

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had

vs

idk if this was a serious verse or wut, after i read defeat/bratwurst lines.

v/wand

Wanderer got this obviously

What the hell zelph?

Mod of war and alias lines were cool


Vote wanderer

Wand, you didnt need much but these were tight:

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb

Zelph i hate you

V - Wand

Defeat? Gtfo



V/wanderer

Mod - bratwurst was good and bad for me lol... KAPOW!! LOL no gangster has ever said Kapow

Wand - outcomebof battles and failing under alias

Wand wins here. Mod was decent just wasnt there conceptually

Wow a defeat bar? Fuckin plug


V/wanderer.

Overstep line and name drop were fire concepts. Opener was a nice name play too. Solid verse from Wand. Kid was kinda funny but not good.

Vote - wand

LMAO at Zelph's troll verse... defeat oper, inno scents lol wow

vs.

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
good punch, nice personal touch in the setup... youve already won
Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me
I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties
ehh okay conceptually, smoother connecting multis would help the wording and delivery
A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell..
If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell
some coolish connections throughout but its just okay
Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about
Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth
fresh concept and good personal as hes a vote troll
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
good hit
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb
nice concept but i think this shouldve been done differently.. overstep the line "with me" takes away from the impact and makes it less smooth


Zelph made me laugh as he intended to, but Wand won easily with a good mix of solid concepts and personals..

I Like Zelph, but this verse didn’t have much bratwurst was okay defeat is tired tbh

Wand had failing under aliases, change the outcome and soldier had potential. Your verse wasn’t a knockout punch but it had some good bars.

V/Wand pretty one sided