NBL Semi Finals - Adverse vs Wanderer {Wanderer wins}
 

12 lines due Sunday night.


Dont ask me for an ext. No EXT


this shit has dragged out.

Here

Dope. Rematch

Ur lines a chore to finish. I’m determined to win & feeling a hunch
U not pulling out all the stops.. we just hope there’s one coming when reading ur punch
U gotta make amendments unless all ur writtens are bit
No shock if Adulter a lot. U gotta struggle to commit to that shit
Shouldn’t vote on what u don’t understand. U feeling this scalding
If they say NOTHING goes over ur head.. it’s referring to ur premature balding
& chicks wish I did anniversaries.. I’m like fuck that shit it’s just weak
If ur ever celebrating ur 1 year it’s the only 12 months ur bitch didn’t cheat
Pay no attention & I come to urs duel wielding, be sure it’s hopeless
Berettas beside u. weather girl side view; twin cannons in ur area draw ur focus
Or it’s the uzi aimed. On ur knees pleading, all u need’s a prayer rug
They say kill em with kindness. I’ll just squeeze til it click, that’s receiving a bear hug

@Adverse

I got the nine cocked if I see you in public it's on, believe me
Packing bullets that'll easily 'break Wand in Chamber' like Ronald Weasley
Always close to success but folds under pressure, y'all catch his pitiful match with Dave?
Once my ratchet spray he better pray he's half as good at dodging bullets as he is accolades
Your punchlines are nickel-and-dime shit, whose playoff runs y'all think this boy thwarted?
Skill wise you 'a quarter of Cash' you're only here because of the coin shortage
Nobody wakes up in the morning thinking that they'll get shot today
But once that gat pop it'll 'leave Wander off'd' like it grew legs n fuckin walked away
You're in such a rush to lose this battle, man I'll give em mad props
Ain't seen some1 'drop to waist, and rush a Verse' like that since ya bitch was tryna get my pants off
I seen your pic, proportions are JOKES how the fuck you hold up that head?
Wand's got such a pencil neck it's poetic justice once I'm at his throat with the led

Best line wins it



My vote for adverse

pull out stops is an old one but ok
not feelin, adulterer
balding is ok
wasnt feelin 12 month
twin cannons always like me a tittays line, decent
bear hugger nahh coulda been better

vs

weasley was ehh
musta missed the personal with accolades, ok
random cash mention dont like it, concept coulda been done better
wander offd was a reach
pants off was off
not feelin pencil neck

seen adverse come wayy better, wand too but he had couple decent lines and took it

v wanderer

Ur lines a chore to finish. I’m determined to win & feeling a hunch
U not pulling out all the stops.. we just hope there’s one coming when reading ur punch
Nice opener
U gotta make amendments unless all ur writtens are bit
No shock if Adulter a lot. U gotta struggle to commit to that shit
This is okas a name play and I haven’t seen it before but ‘if adulter a lot’ doesn’t work as a phrase
Shouldn’t vote on what u don’t understand. U feeling this scalding
If they say NOTHING goes over ur head.. it’s referring to ur premature balding
nice
& chicks wish I did anniversaries.. I’m like fuck that shit it’s just weak
If ur ever celebrating ur 1 year it’s the only 12 months ur bitch didn’t cheat
Lol decent
Pay no attention & I come to urs duel wielding, be sure it’s hopeless
Berettas beside u. weather girl side view; twin cannons in ur area draw ur focus
Lol how do you even come up with bars like this? random but it’s cool
Or it’s the uzi aimed. On ur knees pleading, all u need’s a prayer rug
They say kill em with kindness. I’ll just squeeze til it click, that’s receiving a bear hug
Clever but punch a bit wordy


I got the nine cocked if I see you in public it's on, believe me
Packing bullets that'll easily 'break Wand in Chamber' like Ronald Weasley
It’s decent but wand angles been done too much imo
Always close to success but folds under pressure, y'all catch his pitiful match with Dave?
Once my ratchet spray he better pray he's half as good at dodging bullets as he is accolades
Haha this is nice
Your punchlines are nickel-and-dime shit, whose playoff runs y'all think this boy thwarted?
Skill wise you 'a quarter of Cash' you're only here because of the coin shortage
Decent
Nobody wakes up in the morning thinking that they'll get shot today
But once that gat pop it'll 'leave Wander off'd' like it grew legs n fuckin walked away
Doesn’t quite read right but ends nicely
You're in such a rush to lose this battle, man I'll give em mad props
Ain't seen some1 'drop to waist, and rush a Verse' like that since ya bitch was tryna get my pants off
Nice but drop to waist doesn’t quite work to describe ur opp
I seen your pic, proportions are JOKES how the fuck you hold up that head?
Wand's got such a pencil neck it's poetic justice once I'm at his throat with the led
Led played but this is nicely flipped


Pretty close here guys but I’m leaning Wanderer just for more consistent hits. Good stuff from both though.

Opener ( nice start..didn't hit hard but was a smooth ass jab)
Over your head

Vs

Dodging bullets


Even tho I only quoted 2 and 1 ...there was decent jabs thru out.. those were the better I thought but like I said no real misses thru out both verse..

V wanderer