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Blue Bayou 02-16-2019 11:58 PM

Blue Bayou vs. Infiltrate - INF WINS 4-2
 
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Saint 02-16-2019 11:58 PM

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Blue Bayou 02-17-2019 12:07 AM

boyyy you dyin. time to brace for a sub-machine outcome
on some Yellow-Tape shit.. youre The Beatles makin their Submarine Album
he's an Asian faggit. i don’t need no hollows to blast
one Sake’s fallin over so fast u’d swear he chugged a bottle of that
they say i pprewrite. but its garbage & ill have the last laugh
write n’ advance.?! yaa, thats what Resin's doin next week in the champ match
i've peeped mad Inf battles and aint dug em at all
they say battlings my Outlet.. cool, im bout to put a plug thru a wall
ur girls all over my stick tryna smash at the bar
ill get'er Altima self.. then make sure she gives me head in the back of ur car

Saint 02-17-2019 12:15 AM

i've seen the threads on RB talkin shit, allll the time y'all GOT to bitch
life starts at 40....but u'd take yours if that verse you worked night & day lost to Spit
you're next to nothin! be layed up in a hospital bed w/ a head concussion
docs givin u bad Prague Noses like Nazi's pickin out Jews in the Czech Republic
ya can't match me player. punches, wording - I have dynamic framework
keep your distance blue cuz truust a pole'll lay a square out - that's a land surveyor
biggg weapons break armor & skin homie - turn u to fractions
i'll point the Substrate at you to pierce layers til u feel an internal reaction

Blas 02-17-2019 10:57 AM

boyyy you dyin. time to brace for a sub-machine outcome
on some Yellow-Tape shit.. youre The Beatles makin their Submarine Album
ok
he's an Asian faggit. i don’t need no hollows to blast
one Sake’s fallin over so fast u’d swear he chugged a bottle of that
cool
they say i pprewrite. but its garbage & ill have the last laugh
write n’ advance.?! yaa, thats what Resin's doin next week in the champ match
simple but dope
i've peeped mad Inf battles and aint dug em at all
they say battlings my Outlet.. cool, im bout to put a plug thru a wall
meh
ur girls all over my stick tryna smash at the bar
ill get'er Altima self.. then make sure she gives me head in the back of ur car
cool

..

i've seen the threads on RB talkin shit, allll the time y'all GOT to bitch
life starts at 40....but u'd take yours if that verse you worked night & day lost to Spit
lolz
you're next to nothin! be layed up in a hospital bed w/ a head concussion
docs givin u bad Prague Noses like Nazi's pickin out Jews in the Czech Republic
ehhhh
ya can't match me player. punches, wording - I have dynamic framework
keep your distance blue cuz truust a pole'll lay a square out - that's a land surveyor
aight
biggg weapons break armor & skin homie - turn u to fractions
i'll point the Substrate at you to pierce layers til u feel an internal reaction
pretty dope

Overall: blue had a lot of cool shit & came very consistent, infiltrate only had a couple hits to me and also had one less bar? Regardless of that I just felt blue had the better overall verse although both clearly had solid concepts overall.

v/ Blue

Prozac 02-26-2019 03:02 AM

Blue didn't really have anything poppin' until the last 2 bars. Plug through the wall was line of the battle, tbh.

Felt Inf was more consistent, although that Prague Noses bar was ass.

V/Inf

Sinacog 03-06-2019 09:20 PM

Blue Bayou -

boyyy you dyin. time to brace for a sub-machine outcome
on some Yellow-Tape shit.. youre The Beatles makin their Submarine Album

Not too shabby here..was a good hit..

he's an Asian faggit. i don’t need no hollows to blast
one Sake’s fallin over so fast u’d swear he chugged a bottle of that

lmao..pretty cool..

they say i pprewrite. but its garbage & ill have the last laugh
write n’ advance.?! yaa, thats what Resin's doin next week in the champ match

lol..cool..

i've peeped mad Inf battles and aint dug em at all
they say battlings my Outlet.. cool, im bout to put a plug thru a wall

Lol..simple wordplay..effective..

ur girls all over my stick tryna smash at the bar
ill get'er Altima self.. then make sure she gives me head in the back of ur car

This was cool..

Infiltrate -

i've seen the threads on RB talkin shit, allll the time y'all GOT to bitch
life starts at 40....but u'd take yours if that verse you worked night & day lost to Spit

lol..this was okay..

you're next to nothin! be layed up in a hospital bed w/ a head concussion
docs givin u bad Prague Noses like Nazi's pickin out Jews in the Czech Republic

LOL..this was nice..

ya can't match me player. punches, wording - I have dynamic framework
keep your distance blue cuz truust a pole'll lay a square out - that's a land surveyor

This was okay..

biggg weapons break armor & skin homie - turn u to fractions
i'll point the Substrate at you to pierce layers til u feel an internal reaction

This was nice..cool..

Overall -

Dope battle here. Inf had the bar of the battle with prague noses..but blue bayou was more consistent..have to go with him..

V/ Blue Bayou

Crash Carson 06-26-2019 05:57 PM

Rhymes/Multi/Inners - was so close, and I almost went blue until I saw last laugh/champ match. Came off a little forced. Inf set with Czech republic was nice here. Also inf opener had some inner work which was a nice touch.
Punches/Personals - both were quite consistent, but I've seen a lot better from blue tbh. Seeing how little time was put into these drop I suppose that's to be expected. I still have Inf edging here. I liked the Prague noses, and more so the land surveyor lines. Blues were good, but a bit less punchy for me.
Metaphors/Wordplay - one sock he's/write in advance/Altima. Inf had a lot but were better in a punch than standalone clever. Giving this part to blue.
Vocabulary/Technique - the setup with dynamic framework, the head concussion. I like the way inf approached and executed his bars on this. Good choices
Structure/Flow - probably gotta go with blue here. Both were very solid but obviously gotta pick the better and what stood out out was inf opener. Seemed the second line too a bit longer no matter how I approached it so I went blue.

Overall - gotta go with Inf. Good drop from both, esp considering the short time allotted. Both had some great high points and neither had any very low points. Great read.

VOTE - INF

Ouch 04-28-2021 11:55 PM

Yeah that’s thought you both sucked on this so it’s hard to say.. the yellow submarine line could’ve been nice.. he’s Asian.. so yellow etc.. wasn’t worded well but it could’ve been a dope idea. The outlet thing was a good concept too but the way you rushed it and wrote it... nah.

Same thing with INF with the Prague noses/prognosis...I don’t think I’ve heard that wordplay before so that’s new but the way it was worded didn’t do anything at all..

So yeah I’m not even going to vote, some good concepts on both sides but you both sucked on this one... so no vote.

Dope girl 07-01-2021 08:44 PM

Blue good but don't have stronger bars for the win
inf had stronger verse
Vote Inf

Quill 07-31-2021 10:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 726930)
boyyy you dyin. time to brace for a sub-machine outcome
on some Yellow-Tape shit.. youre The Beatles makin their Submarine Album
I see what you were going for, but Im not suoer keen on the execution of this concept.
he's an Asian faggit. i don’t need no hollows to blast
one Sake’s fallin over so fast u’d swear he chugged a bottle of that
This solid. Simple name flip.
they say i pprewrite. but its garbage & ill have the last laugh
write n’ advance.?! yaa, thats what Resin's doin next week in the champ match
Decent bar. I like how it it transitioned.
i've peeped mad Inf battles and aint dug em at all
they say battlings my Outlet.. cool, im bout to put a plug thru a wall
This was solid
ur girls all over my stick tryna smash at the bar
ill get'er Altima self.. then make sure she gives me head in the back of ur car
[B]Wasnt feeling this. The wordplsys passable, just had no sting.


Quote:

Originally Posted by INF (Post 726932)
i've seen the threads on RB talkin shit, allll the time y'all GOT to bitch
life starts at 40....but u'd take yours if that verse you worked night & day lost to Spit
Decent personal shot.
you're next to nothin! be layed up in a hospital bed w/ a head concussion
docs givin u bad Prague Noses like Nazi's pickin out Jews in the Czech Republic
Aight. I fucks with it.
ya can't match me player. punches, wording - I have dynamic framework
keep your distance blue cuz truust a pole'll lay a square out - that's a land surveyor
This was fire.
biggg weapons break armor & skin homie - turn u to fractions
i'll point the Substrate at you to pierce layers til u feel an internal reaction
Light closer, but it hits.

I got Inf taking this. Both had some solid bars, but if I were to put the bars head to head, Bayou only tajes the second bar.

Vote - Inf


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