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Sinacog 02-01-2019 01:35 PM

Sinacog vs. DMS Pt.2 - SIN WINS
 
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Let's vote nicely..and done..

Let's go!

DMS 02-01-2019 01:38 PM

Yo yo yo

I got mine

DMS 02-01-2019 01:39 PM

You’re walking a fine line, rock the boat and you will be capsized.
‘Cause with his bars, I don’t ‘see any original Sin’, I got the whole community baptized.
And still if ‘Cog’s mob comes around, I’m getting rid of Sin’s like a parish priest.
I’ll ‘burn Sina’ with lines’ like he committed heresy.
He Raps like an insane zealot, so he’ll get part of the tools flame.
‘The stick sends a round to this screwball’ like the start of a pool game.
I’ll fucking ‘shoot 8’ then this foe is done.
I’ll make sure to ‘put the 9 in my pocket’ so you know that Dope just won.
I’ll be cold n blunt, consider stopping, you rather should.
Because the definition of Sin’ literally is a lack of good.

Sinacog 02-01-2019 01:54 PM

You don't get vagina; I got the apple juice..you got the floopie, queering kid
Your bars are like your sex life; if you 'make a splash on the net'..you're probably not getting pussy, period
When it comes to your raps; I have to 'give you Cred' your a loser, idol
When it comes to rhymes; you have 'no bars'..like a unicycle..
Yeah I watch anime; and my sword will slice this whore twice
You think your giving out 1000 cuts? But I'll give you more 'Death Notes' than Ryuk being bored twice
Your 20 years old? No wonder I'm about to slice you in duels
At the end of 'Engine's All Go' the Mystery is why your parents don't drag you from a car to your school..
Angels love me; they tell me they love my bars with my words mate
Funny, how I haven't used 'one name flip' but this blasphemous idiot would probably 'flip shit for Sin' in the first place...

Lol...niice..

DMS 03-09-2019 12:21 AM

Someone open this for votes already

Zaddy 03-09-2019 03:00 AM

@bleak @Incredible umm hello mods?

DMS 04-26-2019 10:53 PM

clearly no one can do there job here, I smoked his boots someone vote n make it official

Sinacog 04-27-2019 12:58 AM

You couldn’t smoke a joint little kid..lmao..I thought I win..

Sharp 05-09-2019 05:30 PM

Original sin was an okay idea with less than stellar execution
Not a fan of most partial name flips. Burn Sina was crazy basic
The setup on screwball is worded terribly, but the punch is good
I get the extended pool scheme and like that you're going for something, but nine in your pocket wasn't much of a punch. Okay wp, swaggy, but lacking sting
Definition of sin is an okay idea but this verse was almost all sin flips already


Aight gawd I love the setup but the punch is a little awkward
Setup was mad awkward and punch was mad basic, appreciate that you mentioned cred (I know this is around that battle cred won) but there's not much of a connection/punch in a reference
The rhyme really lame... Whore twice/bored twice... But after that death by 1000 cuts meltdown Im cool with this bar
I outright don't get the engine all go thing
That closer is my lotb after the verse that was 60% sin flips

I legit have sin with the closer being lotb. DMS got lazy with this one and sinacog thought his concepts out

For real

V/Sinacog

Dope girl 12-18-2019 08:45 PM

DMS bars need more work
Sin had a better verse compare to DMS
Vote Sin

FGR 01-10-2020 02:27 PM

Peeping dms verse. 3 of your bars were a 'sin' nameplay..change the topic already.. 1 is the most after that get a new topic...a pool line? The shooting 8..nine in my pocket..not fresh enough.
You had like ok jabs shit wasnt terrible but def not enough to be getting any W's ...
Sin didnt come much better.. Alot of bars stretched like fuck n it killed the punch... Dude also used a no bars/unicycle line which should be a automatic loss. Ur closer was stretched but was decent.. I guess sin gets the win for being a tiny bit more creative.. If dms didnt use all.the sin flips i would of gave him the win.

Vote ain

Sinacog 01-12-2020 01:32 AM

I won

Close this battle.


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