SC Round 3: Body Snatcher vs Allen Knight -[AK Wins]
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@BodySnatcher @Allen Knight |
16?
I don't care how many honestly... |
Ight.
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@BodySnatcher might be droppin 2morrow if thats cool, idk when i'll be home tonight.
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All good.
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aka lost to snitching is gangsta aka in the stick clique..
this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation |
Dead. Again.
I respect ur heritage but... Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over... Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower, I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears... Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs! Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco... I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco, Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin... & we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children, I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled... The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World, U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods... I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas, Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast... Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask! U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin... Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season. |
this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit mmm decent at best, the drug habit part was too random and there’s no tie in for it try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky nah lol im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground pretty cool ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package lol ok u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors pigment wp is too played, a miss here i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds not feelin it ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit nice I liked it SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation solid closer 3 good 1 ok 1 Decent 3 misses Vs Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over... Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower, mmm decent I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears... Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs! lol nice Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco... I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco, pretty cool here Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin... & we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children, didnt like this one I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled... The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World, alright U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods... I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas, this one was pretty wordy, decent at best Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast... Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask! alright U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin... Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season. nah lol 2 good 2 ok 2 decent 2 misses This one was really tough to decide. Allen had 1 more strong hit than body but body had a more consistent verse with 1 less miss. Allen had some cool wordplay and some nice bars like the click bait one I really liked. Body had a lot of cool concepts but were sometimes wordy which took away from the impact, however, I feel Body was more creative and had less played lines than Allen. Allen had some bad ones like pigment and catapult was very forced. Again, close one but I have body edging it in the end. Vote BodySnatcher |
this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit I know I did a purse bar in a previous round and got plenty of shit for it but this is ok try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky i can't rectify trying to make pull/pult sound passable as wordplay. Maybe "'ta gun" and "the gun" works more phonetically but it's still a reach im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground I like the concept but the execution is off. From the context of talking about a skilled gardner, nobody says they've got a "Green Thumbs me up" the interpretation of this wordplay only works on one side ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package ok u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors dope i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds I'll be honest, I'm not sure what "vit" or "vitil" is supposed to represent and the "vitil" in vitiligo isn't pronounced vital ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit this is dope SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation solid closer, i like the overall concept body Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over... Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower this is cool but the general concept isn't super fresh I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears... Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs! I didn't understand wtf bananas in pyjamas was so I looked it up on youtube and after about 3 seconds of watching this intro clip, I hate you for writing this bar and making me read it. It's solid though Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco... I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco, Again, don't really know the reference but I can understand what's going on without looking it up. That being said, it's still kind of a stale concept Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin... & we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children, Nah im not a fan of just connecting various sitcoms with no solid relationship to each other I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled... The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World lol I wouldn't classify a tricycle as a toy, and I double checked the intro to bobby's world to make sure that he doesn't actually have a toy in his hand. That being said I kinda like this because of the nostalgic factor, but it could've been executed better U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods... I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas, I'm not a huge fan of associative song-title bars, but also the idea of saying I'll knock you out and you'll have street dreams is a bit of a stretch Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast... Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask! I really like this concept, I could nitpick it a bit but this is solid. U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin... Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season. kinda funny, ok closer overall this is close, I got clickbait as botb and I think AK just overall had more punches that landed for me mvgt AK |
The pigment wordplay and the click bait line gave AK my vote if you guys want to count it. I know I should probably leave more of an expo but honestly I just feel like AK won with those couple lines so MVGT AK
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this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit Ok try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky slightly forced to me. Decent flip. im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground Cool concept so so execution... ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package light here u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors seen it. cool flip straight & simple i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds didn't like this one nor wording. ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit dope concept...lotv probly SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation didn't like the partial np but not a miss Quote:
I respect ur heritage but... Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over... Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower, nah here not a great concept I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears... Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs! eh ok but kinda cheesy tbh Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco... I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco, Cool.. Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin... & we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children, associative stuff better live. not feeling I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled... The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World, This cool too not a Haymaker but decent U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods... I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas, eh.. too basic Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast... Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask! this is decent. the double simile helped it U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin... Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season. nah fam V AK, his misses were better w/ about equal good hits |
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