Swerve vs. King Ra. {Swerve wins 11-0}
 

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@Swerve @King Ra.

Whattup girl.

Here.

@Swerve @King Ra.

You'll leave beaten and battered, burn your body and leave your place charred,
Only way you'll be looking like diamonds, king is after I lay you flatter than a face card.

You're no longer ill. Wrote ya off. One punch'll leave you with a broken jaw,
every line you drop is a display of weakness when I expose your flaws.

This wasnt even close lol

Ra came mad simplee and I liked swerves card concept .

V/ swerve

King ra`s execution was good...just wasn't much behind the punch


Swerves bar was pretty cool..great wording on a avg concept

V swerve

I feel King Ra probably had to key something real quick & mayb didn't have time go as hard as he could've, so Swerve pulled this out since he went harder & included a metaphor that landed.

V/Swerve

Jah you didn't really have a dis Imo bro. Was more gloating and saying he's old. Swerve had a decent concept and nice word play with the laying flat. But the flow was a bit muddled do to wording of closing sentence. Doesn't matter though

V swerve

swerve got this easy with having a concept
Ra kind of just came statementish

Guess This One Obvious .. v/Swerve

Swerves concept was cool, kinda poorly worded at the end tho. King was a little basic with display/expose. kinda seemed like a setup to something more.

Vote - Swerve

Swerve v

Good wp.

Ra. No wp.

I feel the same way about card bars as I so about chess bars. Unless it's sick it won't be better than average. You had a few diff wp elements in there but none of them were fresh and combining them didn't improve it much.

Ra you had a cool swaggyness, esp in the opening line, but punch and/or wp content was lacking sorely.

V/ Swerve

swerve got this with a creative nameflip
Ra lacked sting and was more of a statement than punch

Kingra like your shit flowed very well, and then wording kinda made me think a dope ass punch was coming but there wasn't one. Word all u gotta do is have a punch in your next match, I bet you'll win

Vote swerve his shit was kinda ill

11-0 Swerve wins