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Blue Bayou 05-18-2020 12:19 PM

Week 7: Sharp (0-0) vs. Sinacog (0-5) - SHARP WINS
 
NBL Season XIV

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@Sharp @Sinacog

Sinacog 05-18-2020 01:50 PM

Sinacog - AJ The Menace

I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife
I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain
I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny
I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice
I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry
I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik
I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring..

Sharp 05-18-2020 02:01 PM

Blue

I love you

Sharp 05-21-2020 10:26 PM

@dull boy I found it. and yeah, this bar's kind of stolen...
But your verses are @Aero after a night out. characterized by a semi-colon


cuz Aero gets fucked in the butt

get it

whatever fuck you

Sin da GAWD! Think that shit's genuine? You must be dumb or something
godamn tho, you're a rare breed... the kind that comes from cousins fucking
I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic
I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot
you're quantity over quality. a fuckin shill artist
youd 'DROP AND GIVE ME 20' at any moment. one of the voices in your head a drill sergeant?
My guy... I've been rating bars awhile. You gotta be one of the worst, kid
If the bible raped a thesaurus in @sraL playroom, the abortion might resemble one of your verses

UPN Zuch 05-21-2020 10:33 PM

Sharp I could tell you keyed this but I really like your style. The closer was the only bar that was a bust. The rest of your stuff was clever and witty.

SIN-GOD. Your verse was not as good as I had hoped. There was nothing there. I hate to vote against the better half of my crew, but you just didn’t bring it this week brother. Love you.

Vote- Sharp

UPN Zuch 05-21-2020 10:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinacog (Post 771320)
Sinacog - AJ The Menace

I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife
I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain
I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny
I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice
I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry
I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik
I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring..

Holy crap I just saw that cocaine bar. That was really bad Sin. We need to talk.

Ouch 05-21-2020 11:29 PM

Sin just ripped that shit... when he said he was the dark dragon and an author.... that took it for me.. vote sinacog

Answer 05-21-2020 11:56 PM

I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife

played concept

I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain
I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames

nah

I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny
I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy

be careful, you almost accidentally wrote a punch

I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice
I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry

nah

I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik
I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring..

nah



@dull boy I found it. and yeah, this bar's kind of stolen...
But your verses are @Aero after a night out. characterized by a semi-colon


nah not digging it

Sin da GAWD! Think that shit's genuine? You must be dumb or something
godamn tho, you're a rare breed... the kind that comes from cousins fucking

cool

I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic
I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot

kinda funny but simple

you're quantity over quality. a fuckin shill artist
youd 'DROP AND GIVE ME 20' at any moment. one of the voices in your head a drill sergeant?

think this wouldve hit harder if it was something he said

My guy... I've been rating bars awhile. You gotta be one of the worst, kid
If the bible raped a thesaurus in @sraL playroom, the abortion might resemble one of your verses

kinda funny, these types of lars bars do seem to come up a lot


rare breed lotb

mvgt sharp

Ouch 05-22-2020 12:05 AM

i'm not trying to sway or anything..


but cog said 'im the duke of revelries'.. I don't know how you could vote against that. If I could vote for Cog twice, I would.

I don't mean to downplay sharp here but sicog was clearly the winner here..

I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny


that is fire how he wrapped the whole world thing, and brought it back to the planet we were on, i'm not saying that shit was deep... but it was deep

hate votes against sincog imo

Wanderer 05-22-2020 02:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinacog (Post 771320)
Sinacog - AJ The Menace

I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife
I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain
I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny
I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice
I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry
I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik
I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring..

Sin, once again, cool multis. Interesting read.. just not not hitting hard as a battle verse. I like how the styles changing to fit tho... last weeks and this week’s verses are better than what you’ve previously dropped

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 772117)
@dull boy

Sin da GAWD! Think that shit's genuine? You must be dumb or something
godamn tho, you're a rare breed... the kind that comes from cousins fucking
Too simple for me but didn’t need to be anything special
I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic
I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot
Nah
you're quantity over quality. a fuckin shill artist
youd 'DROP AND GIVE ME 20' at any moment. one of the voices in your head a drill sergeant?
It’s ok
My guy... I've been rating bars awhile. You gotta be one of the worst, kid
If the bible raped a thesaurus in @sraL playroom, the abortion might resemble one of your verses
Lol it’s average

Sharp, nothing crazy but it didn’t need to be. A simple but smooth drop with humour wins this for you.

Vote - sharp

FGR 05-23-2020 12:58 AM

I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife
I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny
I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy
VS
I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic
I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot


What I quoted from sin wasn't good... But for him it is great... I can see you slightly getting better and trying to be more direct with your attacks.. but you still gotta get more creative n hit harder.. sharp I thought the bar I quoted was funny... Wasn't very good lol but made me laugh...rest of the verse was mild..light jabs..but I'm ur u wrote this quick . VOTE SHARP

evaD 05-23-2020 11:28 AM

Sinacog your verse wasn’t what I was expecting but it read quite well and flowed. Just needed some disses. Kind of like one of these t shirts with the grim reaper riding a Harley but in the form of a text verse

Sharp I liked the verse. Drill sergeant was nice and the first 4 were also funny. End felt rushed but you did more than enough to win.

Vote - Sharp


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