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Incredible 07-03-2018 05:48 PM

WK 9: Cereal 1-2 vs GUDELJ 3-1 - GUDELJ WINS!!
 
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@Cereal @GUDELJ

Cereal 07-03-2018 09:16 PM

in like flin

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128609
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128607
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128606

GUDELJ 07-03-2018 09:49 PM

“i Get the strap, this dude is wack, I stole this whole style...u best remember that”
Shittt I can’t think of a good punch so I’ll just turn everything into a gunbar - I’m jabari black
Or get DynamiC wit it. Dropping trash lines won’t get me far
“Boy I grip the metal, then I’m swinging from pole to pole-playground monkey bars”
Idek if you’re a man or a woman, fuck it ur just a stank whore bitch
Get barcotic wit it. Soon as I pop, shove it in his mouth like a skateboard trick
GUN AFTER GUN, if I ain’t BodySnatcher then I’m his son & im fuckin wack
Ain’t w/ the wordplay, but ima tell u that churro I need in life like a delicious snack
Your shits trash. You wanna make it taste better? I got the potion
GUN BAR. I get to totin’..everybody knows cereal needs milk like he’s overdosin




He need milk!

Cereal 07-05-2018 12:17 AM

Ima need a GED to coach this co-ed
putting cereal in his tail just to be in turn with this cock-head
getcha/getcha rocks off homie..
for god sake at-least is the only way this dog will have improvement to show me
blow me-you aint passing this jab..
Baaa.. leave him in wonder spitting more then the sound of a WOCK/KEY attack..
all eyes ill stare you down..
put you in a paradox of four figures from rick flares one pound..
money you aint ish but doody dude
Beyonce and Jay Z toilet gets less strain then this mindless prune..

Twodrop 07-06-2018 03:32 PM

Zelph got it. Even tho he didn't really diss cereal. I have to give it to him... His bars were more polished, and the punches connected.

Keep at it cereal, I don't get the WOCK/KEY style u always do, but I see improvement for sure.

v/ GUDELJ

DMS 07-06-2018 06:35 PM

V/ Gudejl

Gudejl
“Boy I grip the metal, then I’m swinging from pole to pole- playground monkey bars”

Cereal

Basically nothing

DynamiCz 07-07-2018 12:46 PM

“i Get the strap, this dude is wack, I stole this whole style...u best remember that”
Shittt I can’t think of a good punch so I’ll just turn everything into a gunbar - I’m jabari black

Lmao

Or get DynamiC wit it. Dropping trash lines won’t get me far
“Boy I grip the metal, then I’m swinging from pole to pole-playground monkey bars”

Lol see while dissing me you actually made up a fiya bar! Props

Idek if you’re a man or a woman, fuck it ur just a stank whore bitch
Get barcotic wit it. Soon as I pop, shove it in his mouth like a skateboard trick

This was ok here

GUN AFTER GUN, if I ain’t BodySnatcher then I’m his son & im fuckin wack
Ain’t w/ the wordplay, but ima tell u that churro I need in life like a delicious snack

Lol Light, but decent

Your shits trash. You wanna make it taste better? I got the potion
GUN BAR. I get to totin’..everybody knows cereal needs milk like he’s overdosin

Nice closer here


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Ima need a GED to coach this co-ed
putting cereal in his tail just to be in turn with this cock-head

Nahhh Fam


getcha/getcha rocks off homie..
for god sake at-least is the only way this dog will have improvement to show me

??

blow me-you aint passing this jab..
Baaa.. leave him in wonder spitting more then the sound of a WOCK/KEY attack..

Ok here

all eyes ill stare you down..
put you in a paradox of four figures from rick flares one pound..

Wording was bad, could have been a ok concept

money you aint ish but doody dude
Beyonce and Jay Z toilet gets less strain then this mindless prune..

Nahhh b


Props to both verses tho! Zelph gets this one rather easily with a 5 minute keystyle lol, how disrespectful.


V-Zelph

Bongo Bear 07-07-2018 11:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GUDELJ (Post 680429)
“i Get the strap, this dude is wack, I stole this whole style...u best remember that”
Shittt I can’t think of a good punch so I’ll just turn everything into a gunbar - I’m jabari black

True but light

Or get DynamiC wit it. Dropping trash lines won’t get me far
“Boy I grip the metal, then I’m swinging from pole to pole-playground monkey bars”

Alright.

Idek if you’re a man or a woman, fuck it ur just a stank whore bitch
Get barcotic wit it. Soon as I pop, shove it in his mouth like a skateboard trick

I kind of like this. The whole thing is pretty creative; just lacking hard punches to the actual opponent.

GUN AFTER GUN, if I ain’t BodySnatcher then I’m his son & im fuckin wack
Ain’t w/ the wordplay, but ima tell u that churro I need in life like a delicious snack

I don't understand this at all tbh.

Your shits trash. You wanna make it taste better? I got the potion
GUN BAR. I get to totin’..everybody knows cereal needs milk like he’s overdosin

Ok


He need milk!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cereal (Post 680919)
Ima need a GED to coach this co-ed
putting cereal in his tail just to be in turn with this cock-head

What the fuck?

getcha/getcha rocks off homie..
for god sake at-least is the only way this dog will have improvement to show me

I don't understand this.

blow me-you aint passing this jab..
Baaa.. leave him in wonder spitting more then the sound of a WOCK/KEY attack..

I have no idea to be honest, I feel like this might be something over the head or just trolling

all eyes ill stare you down..
put you in a paradox of four figures from rick flares one pound..

Ok, I guess?

money you aint ish but doody dude
Beyonce and Jay Z toilet gets less strain then this mindless prune..

Idek.

One was very creative although the punches weren't as directed at the opponent as it should've been. The other just didn't make alot of sense to me tbh. LJ takes this pretty comfortably.
V/GUDELJ

BodySnatcher 07-08-2018 03:10 AM

“i Get the strap, this dude is wack, I stole this whole style...u best remember that”
Shittt I can’t think of a good punch so I’ll just turn everything into a gunbar - I’m jabari black
lolol
Or get DynamiC wit it. Dropping trash lines won’t get me far
“Boy I grip the metal, then I’m swinging from pole to pole-playground monkey bars”
bars
Idek if you’re a man or a woman, fuck it ur just a stank whore bitch
Get barcotic wit it. Soon as I pop, shove it in his mouth like a skateboard trick
st8
GUN AFTER GUN, if I ain’t BodySnatcher then I’m his son & im fuckin wack
Ain’t w/ the wordplay, but ima tell u that churro I need in life like a delicious snack
lol on the s/o
Your shits trash. You wanna make it taste better? I got the potion
GUN BAR. I get to totin’..everybody knows cereal needs milk like he’s overdosin
cool close




Ima need a GED to coach this co-ed
putting cereal in his tail just to be in turn with this cock-head
whhhooaaa!
getcha/getcha rocks off homie..
for god sake at-least is the only way this dog will have improvement to show me
classic
blow me-you aint passing this jab..
Baaa.. leave him in wonder spitting more then the sound of a WOCK/KEY attack..
fire
all eyes ill stare you down..
put you in a paradox of four figures from rick flares one pound..
why you do him like that?
money you aint ish but doody dude
Beyonce and Jay Z toilet gets less strain then this mindless prune..
prune bars! You Raisin the bar sun!

This was a close call, tight inside and out, could go either way in my eyes but I think I'ma give to Zelph by a hair. Props on the dope battle fellas


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