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Inno 06-20-2019 10:06 PM

CRED vs Big Bolo[OPEN]
 

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  • Due Dates:
    Verses are due FRIDAY,
    June 28th, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
    Check Ins are due SUNDAY, June 22 , 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST
    Voting ends SUNDAY, June 30th, 11:59 PM PST.

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@Cred vs @Big Bolo

Big Bolo 06-20-2019 10:30 PM

Check...12-14...

Cred 06-21-2019 07:38 AM

“I get a bond, not givin' them property, no, I can't tell, that's part of the policy
If you don't fuck with me, nigga, then fuck you, but I show love for niggas apart of me
I went from Margielas to state shoes, Amiri denims to jump suits
Locked in a cell with a curfew, in population, they can hurt you
No PC, commissary and receipts, all this mail, I gotta reread
New rappers wanna be, can't be me...... I'm gangsta

Yea yea yeah God can u hear me?”


Cash. Going 12

Cred 06-26-2019 10:40 AM

It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly
.357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims
Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism
I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat
Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat
Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet
Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street
Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons
Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session


You’re dead, bitch ass nigga.

Big Bolo 06-26-2019 10:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 696991)
I fuck wit all my NCG’s and put a lot of time into the culture now I need som support from y’all!


www.instagram.com/takem2school

First official release on my page, link in my bio.


Follow me and I’ll follow y’all back. All my music updates and shit will be on my ig. We buzzin hard right now in the city, fuck wit me.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Instagram
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Dudes a fkn nerd actin like a IG makin connections in his city
Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty
Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker
Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure
Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick
Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with
Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill
Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL
Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump
Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua

slecht 06-29-2019 12:33 AM

It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly
.357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims
Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism
I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat
Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat


vs

Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick
Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with



all right batle here. Nice battle to start with it.

Cred showed his experience by pulling some back to back punches there. BB was ight, noticed he's a bit new to the game, but definitely doing his thing.Posted that quotable there.

wording can get better.

stay up


vote - el credo.

Aero 06-29-2019 09:21 AM

Cred:

It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly
ok. wording issues
.357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims
Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism
cool
I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat
Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat
I like that the setup was connected but again, could've been worded stronger
Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet
Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street
ok
Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons
Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session
cool


Bolo:

Dudes a fkn nerd actin like a IG makin connections in his city
Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty
nah. choppy too
Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker
Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure
ok
Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick
Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with
I liked the setup more than the punch
Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill
Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL
hmm.. played
Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump
Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua
ok


Cred had slightly better concepts and did enough to win here. Bolo just needs to develop concept wise.

MVGT: Cred

Answer 06-29-2019 10:02 AM

It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly

ok

.357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims
Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism

solid

I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat
Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat

ok. the can thing is a bit overdone imo

Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet
Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street

wasnt feeling this one. i think it would've been smoother if you just said lift you clean off the street

Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons
Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session

eh nah, im pretty sure I've seen this concept done before

Dudes a fkn nerd actin like a IG makin connections in his city
Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty

nah

Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker
Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure

ok

Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick
Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with

nah

Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill
Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL

played

Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump
Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua

nah

v/ cred

Cashius 06-30-2019 09:38 PM

Cred- Felt like this wasn’t quite up to your normal standard. Spongebob was a standout. I also liked Hinduism. 70’s show and hooks were ok. Good wording and structure as usual.

Bolo- The wording is really bad. The concepts weren’t there for me either. Nothing impactful or creative. Like the Peel his face back like Edgar from MIB...your comparing peeling his face back to someone literally peeling their face back. There’s no misdirection. The simile is just too easy. I think the Tommy gun line was the best of the verse and it swas a setup. Sorry, just not feeling it.

Vote-Cred

BodySnatcher 06-30-2019 10:13 PM

Vote Cred


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