CRED vs Big Bolo[OPEN]
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@Cred vs @Big Bolo |
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“I get a bond, not givin' them property, no, I can't tell, that's part of the policy
If you don't fuck with me, nigga, then fuck you, but I show love for niggas apart of me I went from Margielas to state shoes, Amiri denims to jump suits Locked in a cell with a curfew, in population, they can hurt you No PC, commissary and receipts, all this mail, I gotta reread New rappers wanna be, can't be me...... I'm gangsta Yea yea yeah God can u hear me?” Cash. Going 12 |
It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly .357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session You’re dead, bitch ass nigga. |
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Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua |
It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly .357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat vs Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with all right batle here. Nice battle to start with it. Cred showed his experience by pulling some back to back punches there. BB was ight, noticed he's a bit new to the game, but definitely doing his thing.Posted that quotable there. wording can get better. stay up vote - el credo. |
Cred:
It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly ok. wording issues .357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism cool I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat I like that the setup was connected but again, could've been worded stronger Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street ok Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session cool Bolo: Dudes a fkn nerd actin like a IG makin connections in his city Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty nah. choppy too Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure ok Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with I liked the setup more than the punch Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL hmm.. played Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua ok Cred had slightly better concepts and did enough to win here. Bolo just needs to develop concept wise. MVGT: Cred |
It takes money to go war. n bitch u’re nowhere near ready
S’nothin to even the score. strap come off the waist faster than a beer belly ok .357 fresh out the box n it needs new victims Long nose got u ready to see God like the elephant in Hinduism solid I’ll fill this Square wit holes. 2 pistols loaded lurking for combat Fall back or a can on each side of ur head like Spongebob wit the straw hat ok. the can thing is a bit overdone imo Anytime any place. Bitch we cud meet Tow truck service.. 2 hooks ‘ll lift ur ass clean off the street wasnt feeling this one. i think it would've been smoother if you just said lift you clean off the street Ur crew is a joke. I’ll let it blow if u resort to these weapons Bitch ur whole circle gettin smoked like a That 70’s Show session eh nah, im pretty sure I've seen this concept done before Dudes a fkn nerd actin like a IG makin connections in his city Helpin hands was NC pitty, career broken&removed so much it reminds me of Geno & Witty nah Weed or text I got the gas for life sunoco bumper sticker Talk guns my thumper bigger peal ur head back face lookin like the MIB edgar figure ok Tommy drum big like a full toilet paper roll get ya shit cleaned out real quick Make ya innards exit out ya ass now the coroner crew got 2 things to deal with nah Hush lil brother gun bar wannabe quit flexin mfer u need to chill Sit down or I'll put a real mag in ur face chopper size readin XXL played Bars got obesity big punch bounce a nigga back wit a belly bump Wat he on Wilder? Naw! really bruh u about to lose all ur rep like Anthony, Joshua nah v/ cred |
Cred- Felt like this wasn’t quite up to your normal standard. Spongebob was a standout. I also liked Hinduism. 70’s show and hooks were ok. Good wording and structure as usual.
Bolo- The wording is really bad. The concepts weren’t there for me either. Nothing impactful or creative. Like the Peel his face back like Edgar from MIB...your comparing peeling his face back to someone literally peeling their face back. There’s no misdirection. The simile is just too easy. I think the Tommy gun line was the best of the verse and it swas a setup. Sorry, just not feeling it. Vote-Cred |
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