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virtue of calm. Solomonic, worshipping palms ask whats the purpose of it all aside from murder and law cruise 30 or 40 every morning over birds to the slaughter skulls on burning asphalt like a funeral alter to kneel and pray another service to offer, purchasing coffers worms absolving both our princes and paupers. lynch these officers, quick outworld fringe of apartment, sloth-like drawn to his forests heartstring orchestra slow waltzing via carbon assortment remark, was it more of the same? another entendre my declarative statements are truly like one of a kinda it troubles the mind. truly my perception is dark handing out my gratitude for sympathy karma 20 bucks at the door, another 50 for culture plus whatever's left to kill my time / inhibit emotion our stories are similar but we never expose them mimicking social cues inside our physical hosts inventive / resourceful / primitive / defective / remorseful i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives pick your poison: be it victim or torturer, make your appointment it seems what mattered least to me was gravely important so it is, if it was to be. so vague in it's origin a Rorschach transforming if you stare for a moment let me breathe. i'll be reminiscing photos again regurgitating tragic til there's nobody left Silverstein's sidewalk edge we're only a step from soul ascendance posing as dead dm |
classic here.
plus whatever's left to kill my time / inhibit emotion our stories are similar but we never expose them mimicking social cues inside our physical hosts inventive / resourceful / primitive / defective / remorseful i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives pick your poison: be it victim or torturer, make your appointment it seems what mattered least to me was gravely important so it is, if it was to be. so vague in it's origin a Rorschach transforming if you stare for a moment |
Fire, this stood out to me for some reason..
i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives pick your poison: be it victim or torturer, make your appointment it seems what mattered least to me was gravely important Bars. Syl |
deserves proper feed. will repost in a bit, sir.
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Sick verse dead man. Bb wants to be you badly. 9/10 verse
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hell yeah i want to be! only writer i read on this entire site. i skip guys like nyc and lars. samurais and bragging in foreign accents just ain't cutting it for me. substance is what I'm after and dm writes beautifully. wish i could touch certain topics as confidently and with info as he does!
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I agree, dm is by far the most original and best writer here imho. Why do you imitate his style does it assuage your intense angst and bring you a secondary sort of catharsis? Kind of weird come up with your own style lol. Black sorry about that I'll feed this properly later...
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Hello, Dead Man.
I thought this was a good drop from you; you are assured in language arts and verbiage from writing. Good work, you are very talented. I enjoy your work. Keep writing! |
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I consider both of you friends so the mutual hatred ITT is a bit jarring
Hope you guys can work it out. Thanks for reading |
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worms absolving both our princes and paupers.
mimicking social cues inside our physical hosts inventive / resourceful / primitive / defective / remorseful i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives pick your poison: be it victim or torturer, make your appointment it seems what mattered least to me was gravely important Good grief this was nice. I’ll have to read more of your stuff. I saw all the hype but never paid attention. B.B. might want to write like you but I’m going to take a stab at it soon. |
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Well, considering NYC got robbed when it should have just been open for votes i think you should cut him a little slack. Just my opinion
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First four bars were nice, what everyone before me quoted yep...Best bars no doubt.This was a as
wesome read Black, really was... Stay uppity with it. |
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those lines I quoted might be the best I've ready from you, Dead.
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read this a couple times.
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