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Inno 07-10-2019 06:23 PM

SC Round 3: Blue Bayou vs Destroyer -[ Blue Wins]
 

Rules

  • Due Dates:
    Verses are due SUNDAY
    JULY 14TH, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
    Check Ins are not due this round, as there are officially no more replacements.

    Battles that lack votes may close later.
    One sided battles may get closed early.
    Extensions are normally 24 hours
    (unless requested otherwise, that is),
    can be no longer than 48 hours
    and have to be granted by your opponent.


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    Max. = 20 lines
    The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 20 lines

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    1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
    2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
    Feeding = DQ.
    Recycling = DQ.
    Biting = DQ.
    No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
    Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
    linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
    means you will disqualified.
    Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
    If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
    must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Blue Bayou @Destroyer

Blue Bayou 07-10-2019 07:20 PM

Hey there fella

Max.

Destroyer 07-10-2019 08:15 PM

Come on man
I’m not as invested in this as you
Let’s go 12

Blue Bayou 07-14-2019 08:52 PM

Ext requested

Destroyer 07-14-2019 09:11 PM

saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did
ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it
wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box
how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse
always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words
so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read

Blue Bayou 07-15-2019 02:17 PM

“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen
dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife
bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon
it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney
if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw
& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army

DMS 07-15-2019 04:20 PM

v/blue for better concpets and wording. he had less misses and more good lines.


@DMS thanks for voting, but please provide a more thorough vote for your vote to count. It's been mentioned that one line votes aren't going to count. Please elaborate and provide more detail.

Zuo 07-16-2019 06:18 PM

saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did
cool opener
ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it
no
wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box
noooo
how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse
nice
always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words
thats ancient wordplay and you know that. The flip was decent at best
so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read
nah


2 good
1 Decent
3 misses


Vs


“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen
dope lol
dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife
no
bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon
nah
it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney
ok
if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw
decent
& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army
no


1 good
1 ok
1 Decent
3 misses


Decent battle here, both came with a pretty basic style verse with some old school punching. Blue had LOTB with amen line but Des was more consistent throughout.


Vote Destroyer

DMS 07-16-2019 07:45 PM

im just gonna alter this vote cuz im lazy


Quote:

Originally Posted by Zuo (Post 744363)
saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did

okay

ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it
[b]no[b]
wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box
okay
how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse
meh
always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words
thats ancient wordplay and you know that. The flip was meh at best
so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read
nah


2 okay
2 meh
2 misses


Vs


“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen
dope lol
dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife
okay
bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon
nah
it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney
ok
if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw
decent
& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army
meh


1 good
2 ok
1 Decent

1 meh
1 miss


Decent battle here, both came with a pretty basic style with some underdeveloped concepts, particularly on Destroyer. Blue had better wording and less misses


Vote blue


Cashius 07-16-2019 08:10 PM

Lol gone.

Clout 07-17-2019 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 744215)
saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did

Nah

ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it

LOL i liked this one

wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box

played name flip and this was just a badly worded bar with an outdated concept.

how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse

FIRE

always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words

Medicine ehh kinda corny to me,

so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read

Lol cool closer right here, im vibing with it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 744256)
“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen

Lol cool

dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife

This is a case of a well worded punch but a corny concept. Like the medicine bar from des but u worded ur corny bar better.

bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon

lol ok

it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney

FIRE

if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw

this is eh i like the idea not really seeing heavy impact on it.

& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army

Ok


i got 3 solid lands from blue and two from destro, i got blue edging this one out. Seen better from both guys. Was hoping to see the destro from the hush battle-esque kind of drop. Both had a really corny bar that was a blatant miss and the others were light shots. I liked destros Lars/answer bar and Blues never place in a tourney. Its just a matter of preference. I felt Blue has a better way of wording punches to attack then des does. Might be because its his life legacy writing Ballads in punchline format.

v/ Blue

Answer 07-19-2019 08:35 AM

saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did

solid opener, i fuck with it. 8/10

ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it

nah, too simple. kinda funny but not enough to justify the bar. 6/10

wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box

I think the idea of you wanting to collect his balls in a box is a bit weird, but this is solid overall. 7/10

how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse

ok, funny and super relevant to blue's ridiculous writing habits. Wall/Trump bars in general can feel underwhelming though. 7/10

always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words

think the wording toward the end could've had more of a sting to it but solid bar overall. 7/10

so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read

ok closer, fairly funny but I felt the wording on this could've been executed better 7/10



“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen

i think you could've done more to tie this into amen going to a minimum security prison. I think "doing 30" just has too broad of a scope. 7/10

dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife

I thought this was dope. Funny, something I haven't seen before, worded well. 9/10

bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon

I'm 100% sure I saw someone do a 3:10 to yuma bar on nc a few years back. If I recall, they went the gun route, so I think it's just a case of 2 people coming up with the same concept, but I can't really rate a bar highly when I can vividly recall seeing it before. 6/10

it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney

I like this. If I'm nitpicking, calling your 3rd child your number 3 seed is a bit of a reach, but I thought it was worded well and tied into the personal. It lands fairly effectively imo. 8/10

if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw

this is cool, I feel like there was a lot of ways you could've spun this and if you explored the concept more it could've been even more devastating. 7/10

& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army

I can tell you made a conscious effort wording this to work on both ways, but it comes off a bit clunky. It's like a car, it runs fine for getting from destination A to B, but it's not the smoothest thing in the world. 7/10


overall

Destro 42/60 - 70%
Blue 44/60 - 73.3%


v/ Blue

Ghost1 07-19-2019 09:13 AM

saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did

simple...kinda light...ghost1 da god tho...fire bar

ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it

LMAO big facts. capital punishment should be discussed tbc.

wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box

light

how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse

lol des/bag 2020

always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words

fire

so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read

to think he used to be my fav battler smfh


Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 744256)
“i don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen

lol good shit

dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife

trash lol gtfo

bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon

shes got a knack for spoons? yu MAH >?>!?! ....smfh

it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney

light

if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw

lmao the image of u punching his newborn son was funny....punch is eh

& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army

in a Harvey's ????? cant believe I ever thought u were dope. the second line is fragmented and clunky.

v destroyer for less misses. blue had a couple dece punches but the misses were too awful to ignore.

Inno 07-20-2019 10:23 PM

@Cashius

~RustyGunZ~ 07-22-2019 07:27 PM

saw that ghost video. whew. bet ur feeling way small kid
u should apologize for all them verses Blue, because in truth they all did

Nah

ur debt to text can never be paid. u have nothing to be proud of bitch
ur wordplays congealed to a stewy goo and cats like Barcotic crawled out of it

Lmao

wife is fly as fuck tho. & des keeps her gorging on cock
so if I EVER leave ur crib w/blue balls, it would be yours...in a box

Eh ok

how many lines will be enough for u? I fall asleep every two words...
conservatives would rethink all their wall views with one look at a blue verse

Preach

always doctoring ur bars for days. still every line I read stinks, nerd
I guess when u always put the metas in u just can’t end up with sick words

Easy cronus

so...should u kill urself now or continue to shit on ur own legacy?
just one answer. & I don’t mean dude who voted Lars in that battle no one else will ever read

Lmao word

Vs

don’t care about this Blue!” it shows faggit you’re wack with a pen
of course you went the min...you doin 30 would get met w/ more laughs then Amen

Cool

dude went in on Hush, might even say he crossed the line chuckin some rights
i’m not surprised the squirt went so far tho...it happens everytime i’m fuckin his wife

No


bitch hates country & western but maaaaan she’s got a knack for spoons
if u hear me say i’m comin ‘3:10 to Yuma’ it’s because she LOVES sex in the afternoon

Lmao

it’s not just the dad bod, you got mad flaws. i hope you know your crap isn’t worthy
just had ya number three seed but in 15 years textin u’ve never been that in a tourney

Eh

if your son wants to become a man the boy should never look to his Pa’
only thing he’ll take after his father.. is an equally painful hook to the jaw

Lol wut

& as for writing for the Feed.. nope! now the boy Destroys in a Harvey’s
one article in & Buzzcut - You Off so fast i swore you got deployed in the army

Fire

Vote blue in a barn burner


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