WEEK 6: Wanderer 3-2 VS INF 3-2 WANDERER WINS
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ok ok
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10/12
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12 sent brother
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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...hlight=Cashius
Cash is on standby. showinup would've left u badly disfigured Klans in the picture; we all know Wands get a cast in the hands of a Wizard Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus Your wife loves her beef tender. fresh cattle raised & hung.. She's no AC/DC fanatic but would die for a shred of that Angus Young I'm DAD, practically. last lesson learned from these gunshots.. Fuck covid, if a Corona'll Spike it's from allll the heat I eject at my sunspot Ya writtens are worth shit, voting is doing you the bigger favor Can't manage to 'Ship; Packing Slip.. ya basic content only gets little paper His only chance now's to forfeit & take drastic ass measures.. Chucky problems... NEEDS to get out a body fast or end up in plastic forever |
Ur verses at best are riddles.. we give 0 props & no thanks
With a style so hard to grasp it’s no wonder u’ve been dropped from the ranks & they call ME wanderer?? grab this cunt a chair.. Ur the one who’s text credentials have gone on a walk to fuck knows where still winning in a way despite putting up a harmless fight Ur shit well & truly beats me... I can’t understand a damn bar u write Still play textee on ur phone but nobodies headache on the scene Check my 9 fam. MRI scan; when the slide move it puts ur brains on the screen I’ll say gluck but won’t mean it then ghost after the dub bruh u only exit with a hint of sarcasm when a chick says sureee u can have my number Wouldn’t say I’m certain but I’ll grant a heavy hunch If Informal the best concepts we’d be using slang in every punch |
Cash is on standby. showinup would've left u badly disfigured
Klans in the picture; we all know Wands get a cast in the hands of a Wizard dope Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus lmfao Your wife loves her beef tender. fresh cattle raised & hung.. She's no AC/DC fanatic but would die for a shred of that Angus Young gone. So obscure but it’s good still I'm DAD, practically. last lesson learned from these gunshots.. Fuck covid, if a Corona'll Spike it's from allll the heat I eject at my sunspot no Ya writtens are worth shit, voting is doing you the bigger favor Can't manage to 'Ship; Packing Slip.. ya basic content only gets little paper really wordy here, decent His only chance now's to forfeit & take drastic ass measures.. Chucky problems... NEEDS to get out a body fast or end up in plastic forever had potential to be so dope, setup was bad and overall it just didn’t hit as is 3 good 1 decent 2 misses Vs Ur verses at best are riddles.. we give 0 props & no thanks With a style so hard to grasp it’s no wonder u’ve been dropped from the ranks I thought you were going somewhere else with this, didn’t like how you finished & they call ME wanderer?? grab this cunt a chair.. Ur the one who’s text credentials have gone on a walk to fuck knows where lmao I liked this still winning in a way despite putting up a harmless fight Ur shit well & truly beats me... I can’t understand a damn bar u write lol good personal Still play textee on ur phone but nobodies headache on the scene Check my 9 fam. MRI scan; when the slide move it puts ur brains on the screen pretty cool, I like how you used the barcotic style for this gun line lol I’ll say gluck but won’t mean it then ghost after the dub bruh u only exit with a hint of sarcasm when a chick says sureee u can have my number nah Wouldn’t say I’m certain but I’ll grant a heavy hunch If Informal the best concepts we’d be using slang in every punch is this wordplay? In for mull, idk. I’m even trying to say it like you British people but it’s not coming out good. A miss here 3 good 3 misses Really close battle here, for a second I thought wanderer might have taken it but he had 1 too many misses. It was almost tied but that third miss took the W away from wanderer and gave it to Inf. INF |
Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it
Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus I can’t deal with this shitttttt |
Need votes here
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This was effectively a toss up to me. Both had some clever stuff and some lines that were either stretched or just didn’t appeal to me personally (gun bars, odd wordplay, etc). But, there was enough entertaining stuff there to make it a fun read... it’s just really hard to call.
Personal preference, I think Inf barely edged it out.. although I could see others liking Wanderer’s more. That’s how close it was. Cheers. |
Inf
Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus That was a banger right there, but most of your verse was overworded/trying too hard to make shit work. I thought your closer had potential but was botched. Angus young was just corny Wand they call ME wanderer?? grab this cunt a chair.. Ur the one who’s text credentials have gone on a walk to fuck knows where still winning in a way despite putting up a harmless fight Ur shit well & truly beats me... I can’t understand a damn bar u write Still play textee on ur phone but nobodies headache on the scene Check my 9 fam. MRI scan; when the slide move it puts ur brains on the screen This is kind of close, and hard to interpret. I can understand the lack of votes, unlike some battles... But I did my research, did my re-reading, and I feel confident I didn't miss an idea. Just wasn't feeling most from Inf. Kudos for creativity, but Voting Wanderer |
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Cash is on standby. showinup would've left u badly disfigured Klans in the picture; we all know Wands get a cast in the hands of a Wizard Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus Your wife loves her beef tender. fresh cattle raised & hung.. She's no AC/DC fanatic but would die for a shred of that Angus Young His only chance now's to forfeit & take drastic ass measures.. Chucky problems... NEEDS to get out a body fast or end up in plastic forever Wand - they call ME wanderer?? grab this cunt a chair.. Ur the one who’s text credentials have gone on a walk to fuck knows where still winning in a way despite putting up a harmless fight Ur shit well & truly beats me... I can’t understand a damn bar u write Still play textee on ur phone but nobodies headache on the scene Check my 9 fam. MRI scan; when the slide move it puts ur brains on the screen Cool battle guys, I really fucked with INF's verse this week. I didn't think I'd like another Wand/Wizard line in my lifetime, but that was a fresh flip. The fetus line was maybe LOTB and the Chucky and AC/DC lines were dope to me as well. Overall very consistent. Wand had some shit too, and I dug the more lackadaisical straightforward diss style, in the opening bunch - but overall I dug Inf's concepts and wording a bit more. This DESERVES more votes though, I could see people leaning the other way based on which style they prefer. V - INF. |
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Wanderer had a nice drop over all. hard to grasp, truly beats, and MRI were all nice. Consistently good wording through the verse even in most of the misses. Vote: Wanderer |
INF’s cord line was a banger but didn’t make sense as wanderer isn’t in the cord. Both were inconsistent here. Wanderer has two bangers in beats me and MRI. I like just one gun bar in a verse and this one was cool. INF your Angus bar was clever but also I don’t really see the diss angle. It’s like clever conceptually but his wife likes young beef? Beef doesn’t work in this concept, to me anyway. Wand I’ve seen you come better but you had the higher highs and just edged it.
Vote - wanderer |
I have wanderer taking this pretty handily as he cleaned up his wording and I thought his verse was pretty mean
Beats me was lotb easy Inf, opener was almost there. Angus young was ok V/wand |
Cash is on standby. showinup would've left u badly disfigured
Klans in the picture; we all know Wands get a cast in the hands of a Wizard not getting this Huge head, emaciated body.. fuck life abort & just cease it Of course u'd let shit in the 'cord come between us you're a proportionate fetus this sounds good but not feelign the concept Your wife loves her beef tender. fresh cattle raised & hung.. She's no AC/DC fanatic but would die for a shred of that Angus Young lol I'm DAD, practically. last lesson learned from these gunshots.. Fuck covid, if a Corona'll Spike it's from allll the heat I eject at my sunspot okk Ya writtens are worth shit, voting is doing you the bigger favor Can't manage to 'Ship; Packing Slip.. ya basic content only gets little paper eh His only chance now's to forfeit & take drastic ass measures.. Chucky problems... NEEDS to get out a body fast or end up in plastic forever okk vs. Ur verses at best are riddles.. we give 0 props & no thanks With a style so hard to grasp it’s no wonder u’ve been dropped from the ranks ok & they call ME wanderer?? grab this cunt a chair.. Ur the one who’s text credentials have gone on a walk to fuck knows where eh still winning in a way despite putting up a harmless fight Ur shit well & truly beats me... I can’t understand a damn bar u write statemnt Still play textee on ur phone but nobodies headache on the scene Check my 9 fam. MRI scan; when the slide move it puts ur brains on the screen decent I’ll say gluck but won’t mean it then ghost after the dub bruh u only exit with a hint of sarcasm when a chick says sureee u can have my number okk Wouldn’t say I’m certain but I’ll grant a heavy hunch If Informal the best concepts we’d be using slang in every punch lol got wanderer here.. didnt understand much of inf verse even though it was pretty smooth flow wise. not so bad though |
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