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i single 08-11-2016 01:24 PM

Friendship Whoa's
 
We used to talk, eat, and love to be together
Now all you do is stalk, cheat, and monitor the screen forever
Wishing upon my next move, stfu man you don't even let me text you!
Somethin I need to get off my chest dude, techs groove..u can get sumthn off ur chest too!
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Giggle, laugh, jump around, hands in the air.....s'what we used to do
I used to root, cheer...ask for you. Now a 9 to ur heads the only way I'll ever clap for you
I've slept on your air matress, thank god it was waterproof
Even sonned you in the bed to make sure it would forever be daughter proof
You had a smile like Wayne Brady, until you put me on trial like Tom Brady
I peeped you peepin her! Twas way shady, you even lied about it & said ur eyes lazy
You were my protector, mentor, always came prepared for "shh"...if it ever came to that
Bro you even named yourself AK cuz I know ur stay in strapped, shawty I'm just statin #facts....



~1~


Links coming up

i single 08-11-2016 02:34 PM

This is open for feed btw

PancakeBrah 08-11-2016 04:37 PM

Did not like much, if any, of this at all.

Thanks for the read!

i single 08-11-2016 04:50 PM

That's bullsht and ou know it @PancakeBrah

Amen 08-12-2016 08:01 AM

Utterly gay. Don't ever tag me again.

Nobody 08-18-2016 01:40 AM

Wow, this was mad okayish. Keep writing

Mr. J 08-24-2016 06:35 PM

literally lold when you said that your eyes lazy.
this was an interesting take on a piece for around here.
pretty cool introduction, the lines seemed well crafted
thought you could have fared better with more lines.
kind of reminded me of something.....especially after the ~1~...
that seems ....odd

Dope girl 04-12-2020 08:18 PM

This was alright to me, it could have been better

add more spice would be cool

Exis 04-15-2020 04:26 AM

It's better than what Robranda would write...

Adverse 04-15-2020 01:16 PM

Leave it to Roro to sniff out a 4 year old post from someone named "I <3 dick"


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