Erron Black vs. 2tripple0
 

12 lines battle.

Not really sure how the rest of it works.

I don't care when the deadline is. I can do something real quick.

@2tripple0

yeah I was thinking like an hour or two...

I'll get it done now then @2tripple0

Check.

Lopsided record and all, but you're acting so cocky.
Funny you say death warmed over, but I'll be seeing a cold body.
Your name means 2000, you can't deny that the shit is true.
Like many folks in '99, I'm predicting the end for you.
Claim you're with the crew? Yo this guy is fake.
6 and 21? Sounds like you and your victim's age for child rape.
Everything you spit sounds bad. You have guns? You don't grip the pound fast.
Named himself 2000 cause he's like a discount OutKast.
Ole' clown ass thinking he's got sicker rhymes than Erron?
I sonned 'em, it's quite apparent. Plus you give crack to your kids, you're quite a parent.
Your girl's pussy just something that I devour.
Me and my homie fucked the bitch in Paris. Gave the hoe the Eiffel Tower.

wow


that was simple and written in a bit of a rush
im guessing ya wording is tight except it aint filled with no punch
yo i'm not the best I admit but trip'll have you seeing stars
i'll have you like the American flag way i'm way past your simple bars
ya shit aint worth spit and every rapper got a theme song
ya lines are so stupid though and I coulda drowned ya style in a pond
for real with rhymes like that you'll never evade my flow
you spit that shit so fast I already beat you like an hour ago
you too quick on the draw i'll quickly outline you like I was writing an essay
erron like a quick game of ball on the court guess so way he just be sumn i just played
I aint even edit these lines it was too easy way he keystyled that shit up
you getting fucked son I couldn't comb through ya verse for skill with a brush

@2tripple0 Good verse, man. Good luck.

thanks bro you too

Urgh, dont enjoy doing this at this point mate i really dont. Vote not trip.an here is why

Alias/new man had punches. Nothing wss epic to me 99 predicting end of you.. i mean millenial plays 18 years old. That bar old enough to have a kid an drink in the uk bro. But even now its a jab. 6 and 21.. your using win loss counts which is meh but benefit of the doubt cus your new 'supposedly' an dont have personals etc to use. Anywya i was boredby this point but you won so fuck it.

2trip.id rather see you explain hoe an why you should win. Clearly my feedback in nbl wasnt listened to. Your second bar nearly was summin then wasnt. Everything was going somewhere an then nose dived. Everything else was just ridiculously retarded.

Just. Ugh.

Vote zelph

Bump.

Soooo how do we get more votes on this? Do I just tag random people to look at this battle?

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Mvgt @2tripple0

Good job explaining your vote, dude.

Also, bump.

Vote Erron, for having actual punches. With varying quality of concepts, but he worded the punches clear and easy to read. Rhymes and flow could a have been bit tighter but overall a good verse. Tripple, you need go beyond just making statements, add some wordplay or other tricks in the mix to make your verse hit harder. Also, you should trim your lines, remove all excessive words.

Erron got.the win
His shit was old school but it was actually disses. 2trip.still trying to figure out how to put punches togethdr. I aint much of a battle writer either. Thats why i dont do it.

V/erron