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CopyPat 02-13-2018 02:29 AM

Dead Wrong
 
There’s several different levels to text origins: more or less
Spewin rap devices, handle business, sampling records in em
Channeling Eminem, for fandom, angry, just savage
But I don’t get into that, I kicked the habit
I just speak you to death with sentences that leak through your head
And I never treat you unless the fuckin, speech looks fresh
I got a 9 in my pocket, I’m lyin
I got a rhyme in my noggin, and baby I'm just dyin to drop it
I’m ready for words, you’re ready for words
I got a bevy of terms for any faggot that said he was learned
My verse is as clever as yours, yeah you met me before
I just kick like martial artists when I get in the door
Smarter than ever before, I lay a set on the board
With my knowledge spread on the text messages, read on my wall
Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story
Let up a second, get up the courage, then I’m ready to record
I rep songs

sral 02-13-2018 05:00 AM

LOL I've done this before, I use it more as a flexercise than anything else just to get to scheming. It helps shake the rust off. I don't know if "martial artist/Marshall artist" was intentional but I'm kind enough to give you the benefit of the doubt that it was fully intentional. Only because I like you though. :)

@MMLP may enjoy seeing this and trying to rap it out loud

Keep that pen moving!

Geno 02-13-2018 07:06 AM

Fucking @CopyPat!!! I hopr u stick around a while bruh. This OM has had a little rebirth as of late with the influx of new dope writers. Its fucking greatnto see a copy post. This shit was dope. I havnt chexked the dates to see if its old or new but its dope either way. Fun flex. I think Geno needs to go on one of his collab sprees. Like i usednto back in the day. If your around then we need to flex. As i will with 10 other writers here.

Fucking syllable.playnis nasty as usual. Of course i aee its a verse paying homagento old and brilliant eminem. Awesome.

Shiw me a sign that ur still here. Holla at me Vua PM!

Vulgar 02-16-2018 08:05 PM

Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story

^my fave fragment. Your mind was working in this brief keystyle.

whatup Copy. How's Canada?

ROETHLISBERGER 02-16-2018 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CopyPat (Post 641877)
I just speak you to death with sentences that leak through your head
And I never treat you unless the fuckin, speech looks fresh
I got a 9 in my pocket, I’m lyin
I got a rhyme in my noggin, and baby I'm just dyin to drop it
I’m ready for words, you’re ready for words
I

So good. First line in the quote made the whole damn piece, for me.

The allusions to god tier poprap songs while simultaneously going scheme heavy was a cool motif.


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