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Bad Lieutenant 10-25-2021 09:20 AM

Allure
 
Tangibles on our minds, we strive for it
When we die we can’t have it
But we still scramble, even when it contradicts
Nothing to worry bout when you ignorant
Giving up a part of yourself just to look a little different
Searching for interest on the gram
Women, money and grams
The pleasures of our generation, we still sleeping
We probably gon fall if that’s what we still speaking
There’s not much value in these tangibles
Nothing actual, only material
Cause you can’t buy love or happiness
Those elements are priceless
7 digits on the price tag
Gucci handbag, Rollies
Double story mansion, Mercedes
Is sure to please
But the feeling is only temporary
Cause really they not that extraordinary
Some people wealthy but empty
It’s not the plenty objects that matter
It’s the self rather
People don’t work on that enough
Too occupied with accessories and stuff
Personal growth is trivial
Only goal is the material

Pakistani Hand Cannon 12-13-2021 07:40 PM

Quote:

Some people wealthy but empty
It’s not the plenty objects that matter
It’s the self rather
People don’t work on that enough
Too occupied with accessories and stuff
aiiiiiite then

Spoken 12-16-2021 11:57 PM

Sprinkle of raw potential here and there overall this was just an open mind freeverse flexing the rhymes and content buuut you had some jabs in there gotta give love qnd credit where it is deserved and i liked this read no matter the simplicity in it. Cool stuff man.


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