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i have so much to say, and nothings suffice
the honest truth is, i just want to cry
enough violence of my energy marks being assaulted
my silence comes from expecting nothing less than the obvious
misunderstanding. awkwardness. overall shyness.
i acquiesce solely out of exhaustion.
closed captions underneath both of our eyelids
touch my cheek with your hands as i squeeze them as tight
as me clinching onto my blade, cause’ paranoia has taught me to fight
slightly understand the plight of women walking at night
i want to enjoy the things that so many like
tired of looking into your eyes without me inside
of you
i drift off into codependency, where i’m rarely absolved
connected. i disassociate and stare off into space
finding it odd – an atheist when i’m alone in the dark
interrogations with god. asking them who sent you
my disposition to avoid pain has rendered me recluse
my character arc is a biblical miscue
noah memory thoughts. flooded with pairs of ‘i love you’ & ‘miss yous’
we’re barely a speck. a floating rock in oblivion
we’re literally looking for something on the cusp of existence
most of what my therapist says, i think is a trick
when i’m writing in my journal i can feel you touching my wrist
i don’t know if i’m supposed to be thinking like this
my first poem titled:
my last healthy relationship doesn’t exist

Really good. The therapist trick line made me smile and feel defensive simultaneously. Also the bit of human nature you exposed in the codependency was stellar

This is good. I really liked the “codependency” and character arc parts. Loved the “noah memory thoughts” section, thought you included that in a clever way. The ending wasn’t too abstract and brought your train of thoughts to a decent end.

Understand that all too well. Nasty work here man. #bigbabyforpresident

Loved this..

i drift off into codependency, where i’m rarely absolved
connected. i disassociate and stare off into space

Best thing on page one. If I was young & cared I would give good feed.

Ur hella good

What blade you got?

bb rattle

Lol...If the site's truly being semi-roasted....gotta UP THIS realll quick
OH YESAH THIS
CLASSSSIC,
Of course BB would layyy it on thiiiick yeah. he lay it on thick lol.

up
non-pharaohs

oh yeah UP for Aero's last site diss practice laughter
lol chokes on a fucking chicken wing of Ghosts dick.,..jk he just likez the pic.
chokes on Ghosts Pysch Major i meant, while I failed out of Top School before the Psych minor haha.
NEXT thx i'll vote short lol