Zuo vs. Blue Bayou - BLUE WINS
 

10 lines
Due tonight
No recycling
Wordplay is allowed and encouraged

@Blue Bayou

I'm here friend

Best of luck in the upcoming battle

Ur wife’s a bitch & ur daughters wack. Drop em off like “ur whores r back”
U’ll hear a click, u alarmed @ that? Cuz I keep a shotgun in the pocket like a quarterback
Ur mom is dead & ur dads a bitch. Y’all say he’s tough but I laugh at it
I’ll either meet you w/ hands or put the nickel behind ur ear like a magic trick
We always battle, u never get far. Ask about me, I pop guns & deck broads
So if u wna act hardddd.. I’ll have a toy roarin’ at ur lil Rugrats like reptar
HEADSHOT! If I happen to miss I’ll let the crowd ding em
Cuz boyyyy I cant wait to let this shit go.. irritable BOW syndrome!
Split u in the face, it’ll have ur mouth bleedin & ur nose hurtin
U been here since 03’ so it’s only right I leave ur memory shot like an old person

@Blue Bayou


@Cred run that NBL bro!!!!

Lmaooo at you editing out & PMing your verse in a fucking Battle Arena battle...

I saw it man... Edit it back in...of course I'll whip up 10... Gluck, pleasure as always




been following me for YEARS in threads. but i don’t mind all the hate & envy
the whole time not a single fucks been given...sounds like all your dates with Eddie
what’s your favorite movie Zelph?! wait hold up.. i’ve got a hunch it’s Click
mine’s Gone in 60 Seconds...like ur career was when you failed all those crunches bitch
he’s never wheeled a decent broad. can someone tell me why this guy is so cocky?!
if he even pulled a Secretariat would be impressive...considering he’s the size of a jockey
he references arms & dealin’ drugs from his crib but that talk is hella wrong
if Zelph mentions a Machine & that he peddles in the house.. he bought a Peloton
so quit claimin you’re a felon that always keeps a beam in ya coupe..
u’ve only seen ‘charges from clips’ cuz ur Honda broke down again & u needed a boost

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Quarterback/shotgun felt old to me. Rugrats and nickle was decent. Ibs line didnt do it for me..closer was ok.
Blue had jocky line. First to bars were little to personal i guess cuz i didnt get it.. Crunches i get the jist of it. Peleton was a nice flip closer was cool to

I got to go w blue. Harsher lines

Ngl I didn’t like the battle. Thought bow syndrome was a little creative in the execution, other than that basic structures and simple wordings.

For less misses, V blue

zuo:
Ur wife’s a bitch & ur daughters wack. Drop em off like “ur whores r back”
U’ll hear a click, u alarmed @ that? Cuz I keep a shotgun in the pocket like a quarterback

dope the set up first line was cool but the punch itself in the second was very punchy.. and attractive..

Ur mom is dead & ur dads a bitch. Y’all say he’s tough but I laugh at it
I’ll either meet you w/ hands or put the nickel behind ur ear like a magic trick

much like the first two lines you followed the style perfectly.. so kudos

We always battle, u never get far. Ask about me, I pop guns & deck broads
So if u wna act hardddd.. I’ll have a toy roarin’ at ur lil Rugrats like reptar

a bit shakey compared to the last four lines but it did have potential..

HEADSHOT! If I happen to miss I’ll let the crowd ding em
Cuz boyyyy I cant wait to let this shit go.. irritable BOW syndrome!

you brought it back on this one and save a lil grace.. so far pretty good wordplay..

Split u in the face, it’ll have ur mouth bleedin & ur nose hurtin
U been here since 03’ so it’s only right I leave ur memory shot like an old person

not that cool of a closer, i see what you were going for some sort alzheimers mention/flip but it went too deep..

blue:

been following me for YEARS in threads. but i don’t mind all the hate & envy
the whole time not a single fucks been given...sounds like all your dates with Eddie

nice bar your writers voice is very personal, i def like your style..

what’s your favorite movie Zelph?! wait hold up.. i’ve got a hunch it’s Click
mine’s Gone in 60 Seconds...like ur career was when you failed all those crunches bitch

you have good flow and structure on this one..

he’s never wheeled a decent broad. can someone tell me why this guy is so cocky?!
if he even pulled a Secretariat would be impressive...considering he’s the size of a jockey

def harder punches..

he references arms & dealin’ drugs from his crib but that talk is hella wrong
if Zelph mentions a Machine & that he peddles in the house.. he bought a Peloton

still flipping nice..

so quit claimin you’re a felon that always keeps a beam in ya coupe..
u’ve only seen ‘charges from clips’ cuz ur Honda broke down again & u needed a boost

dope closer..

vote = zuo

it came down to who worked the words better.. i think even though as a whole verse isnt as sound he had tigher wordplay in some really nice lines.. but dope battle thanks guys

I enjoy reading both verse
vote- BB
reason he came out more deeper with bars

HEADSHOT! If I happen to miss I’ll let the crowd ding em
Cuz boyyyy I cant wait to let this shit go.. irritable BOW syndrome!

Jesus


Vote blue