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Hush 08-06-2020 05:20 PM

FINALS: Resin vs Wanderer - OPEN FOR VOTES
 
@Resin M-I-C
@Wanderer



Anything you guys want . Decide here. Gluck

Resin M-I-C 08-06-2020 10:27 PM

16. pics or reg?

Wanderer 08-07-2020 03:58 AM

Let’s just go reg. I’m just gonna write might end up with more but won’t go more than 20. If you drop first I’ll match

Hush 08-07-2020 02:08 PM

@Resin M-I-C I got 18 from Wand

Resin M-I-C 08-10-2020 10:03 PM

gonna drop tomorrow chief, my b

Wanderer 08-10-2020 10:10 PM

It’s all good

Zaddy 08-12-2020 07:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer (Post 784044)
It’s all good

This is a disgrace


Take the win.

Wanderer 08-12-2020 07:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zaddy (Post 784276)
This is a disgrace


Take the win.

You’ve got a point but I wouldn’t wanna win a final off a no show ...

@Hush can we say deadline tomorrow or I take this

Hush 08-13-2020 09:56 AM

I guess

Resin M-I-C 08-13-2020 11:24 PM

Hold up.. 20
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Aiyyo
Wanderer rollin? Pfft. Pure luck is the only traction I see..
I’m puttn up Arcade numbers.. so the Top spot here is just an Initial reaction to me.
I’m takin the AK and firinggg. When I pop shit it’s simple..
Unloading the clip. It’s gonna be Ring over Ring like the olympic symbol.
Yeah I’ma gut you. My knife game rude and vicious..
Blade across the belly.. he’ll be wearing his Insides Out like he fuckin superstitious.
Listen faggot, take a lesson in life. Your regression’s a site..
cuz your confusion is as Broad as day.. but u strolling as a transgender at night.
He a transitioning pussy. Yeah I’m gonna hurt your maker..
Surgeon gave u a fuse-box. But you def blowing more than a circuit breaker.
How is this the finals? You gotta be regretting the setting
Cuz I’m better than you in all Walks of life & i’m just here gettin my steps in.
Dressin like a hobo. I can start tracing ya stench..
This bum’s like a real estate agent.. you can always find his face on a bench.
Your life? It’s gonna cease. Open up ya chest, hear alotta wheeze..
Headshot, now u got a crease. Junkyard: Doggg ur gonna see this fuckn Auto squeeze.
u gotta reason to book, punch yo face innn.. have u bleedin & shook..
when we throw hands, i’m Maui.. i turn into a fuckin beast with the hook.
Treat you like college pussy. Watch me just start rippin this poon..
don’t need a sock on the doorknob to know I got this lil bitch in the room.
Mahfucka.
.
.
.

Wanderer 08-14-2020 07:55 AM

Resting from the NPL is weak. I ain’t waste a bullet on this creep
Blade’s the rocking chair.. it move forward & back before putting u to sleep
Celebrated wins til u signed out but sometimes it’s fine staying quieter
For real. next time a bottle pop for u I’m in ur crib with a makeshift silencer
Predict ur reaction when u take this L. shit kid we know
That face’ll be looking confused.. cos we can’t tell if ur Chinese or Filipino
Enemies in the morgue so u know I ain’t scared of a hater
If u leave anything wrapped in a sheet it’s just the wontons u prepared for later
Test.. I’ll empty the mag on this faggot til he don’t compute
9 is strapped. itunes app; if u wanna dance then I’m clicking on a fruit
Catch an uppercut & u pondering not progressing
Knuckles to ur chin make u look deep in thought, this a proper philosophy lesson
Went off the grid but why change ur mind? fatso still not damaging shit
Something musta snapped.. my money’s on the rope u tried to hang urself with
but u a motivated writer if ur not eating cheese when sad
The passion, the drive, the hunger.. well, 1 out of 3 ain’t bad
Try n protect ur fam & I don’t give a fuck, ur a clown
The guns I’m totin. Bubble blowing; ur kids in the yard wet up from the rounds
Real or not? I’ll solve the mystery & wack this liar
Rifle aimed, call me Sherlock Holmes. I’m at the crime scene with the magnifier

Sharp 08-16-2020 01:59 PM

Didn't vote yet will finish it in a bit




Aiyyo
Wanderer rollin? Pfft. Pure luck is the only traction I see..
I’m puttn up Arcade numbers.. so the Top spot here is just an Initial reaction to me.
cool
I’m takin the AK and firinggg. When I pop shit it’s simple..
Unloading the clip. It’s gonna be Ring over Ring like the olympic symbol.
dope
Yeah I’ma gut you. My knife game rude and vicious..
Blade across the belly.. he’ll be wearing his Insides Out like he fuckin superstitious.
solid
Listen faggot, take a lesson in life. Your regression’s a site..
cuz your confusion is as Broad as day.. but u strolling as a transgender at night.
funny
He a transitioning pussy. Yeah I’m gonna hurt your maker..
Surgeon gave u a fuse-box. But you def blowing more than a circuit breaker.
light, liked the last one more
How is this the finals? You gotta be regretting the setting
Cuz I’m better than you in all Walks of life & i’m just here gettin my steps in.
okay
Dressin like a hobo. I can start tracing ya stench..
This bum’s like a real estate agent.. you can always find his face on a bench.
lol nice
Your life? It’s gonna cease. Open up ya chest, hear alotta wheeze..
Headshot, now u got a crease. Junkyard: Doggg ur gonna see this fuckn Auto squeeze.
okay
u gotta reason to book, punch yo face innn.. have u bleedin & shook..
when we throw hands, i’m Maui.. i turn into a fuckin beast with the hook.
had to google it. Not a huge fan
Treat you like college pussy. Watch me just start rippin this poon..
don’t need a sock on the doorknob to know I got this lil bitch in the room.
alright


Resting from the NPL is weak. I ain’t waste a bullet on this creep
Blade’s the rocking chair.. it move forward & back before putting u to sleep
okay
Celebrated wins til u signed out but sometimes it’s fine staying quieter
For real. next time a bottle pop for u I’m in ur crib with a makeshift silencer
punch is solid. Setup is weird
Predict ur reaction when u take this L. shit kid we know
That face’ll be looking confused.. cos we can’t tell if ur Chinese or Filipino
lol nice
Enemies in the morgue so u know I ain’t scared of a hater
If u leave anything wrapped in a sheet it’s just the wontons u prepared for later
not feeling it
Test.. I’ll empty the mag on this faggot til he don’t compute
9 is strapped. itunes app; if u wanna dance then I’m clicking on a fruit
okay I don't get it. Thought the app's icon was the note in a circle. Cool idea and I might have to come back to it after really looking it up

Googled, couldn't find anything another than it being owned by apple, which isn't terrible, but isn't bad

Catch an uppercut & u pondering not progressing
Knuckles to ur chin make u look deep in thought, this a proper philosophy lesson
knuckles to chin/the thinker is such a dope connection but the setup and the 'look deep in thought' parts hold this bar back from me
Went off the grid but why change ur mind? fatso still not damaging shit
Something musta snapped.. my money’s on the rope u tried to hang urself with
lol okay
but u a motivated writer if ur not eating cheese when sad
The passion, the drive, the hunger.. well, 1 out of 3 ain’t bad
gone
Try n protect ur fam & I don’t give a fuck, ur a clown
The guns I’m totin. Bubble blowing; ur kids in the yard wet up from the rounds
not in love with this one
Real or not? I’ll solve the mystery & wack this liar
Rifle aimed, call me Sherlock Holmes. I’m at the crime scene with the magnifier
this is the most British gunbar I've ever read



Yo, this was solid. Resins verse felt like he had some shadowboxing bars to spare tbh. They were still generally strong but lacked the personal side I really mess with. Wanderer shined when he was personal but his generics I could take or leave. Sorry to drop 95% of a vote but I'm gonna Google that iTunes shit and come back to it.


EDIT:
I got Resin on consistency. Wanderer kept it close but Resin's wording is cleaner pushed his best bars into the hardest hits of the battle (and made sure his worst bars still hit). Wanderer def made a case for himself here. Deserves to be in contention for sure.

V/Resin

evaD 08-16-2020 04:17 PM

Wanderer rollin? Pfft. Pure luck is the only traction I see..
I’m puttn up Arcade numbers.. so the Top spot here is just an Initial reaction to me.
Not really a diss and reaction doesn’t really tie with arcade
I’m takin the AK and firinggg. When I pop shit it’s simple..
Unloading the clip. It’s gonna be Ring over Ring like the olympic symbol.
Cool
Yeah I’ma gut you. My knife game rude and vicious..
Blade across the belly.. he’ll be wearing his Insides Out like he fuckin superstitious.
Fire
Listen faggot, take a lesson in life. Your regression’s a site..
cuz your confusion is as Broad as day.. but u strolling as a transgender at night.
Fire
He a transitioning pussy. Yeah I’m gonna hurt your maker..
Surgeon gave u a fuse-box. But you def blowing more than a circuit breaker.
Cool
How is this the finals? You gotta be regretting the setting
Cuz I’m better than you in all Walks of life & i’m just here gettin my steps in.
Fire
Dressin like a hobo. I can start tracing ya stench..
This bum’s like a real estate agent.. you can always find his face on a bench.
Ok
Your life? It’s gonna cease. Open up ya chest, hear alotta wheeze..
Headshot, now u got a crease. Junkyard: Doggg ur gonna see this fuckn Auto squeeze.
Cool
u gotta reason to book, punch yo face innn.. have u bleedin & shook..
when we throw hands, i’m Maui.. i turn into a fuckin beast with the hook.
Standard resin movie reference Haha. It’s cool
Treat you like college pussy. Watch me just start rippin this poon..
don’t need a sock on the doorknob to know I got this lil bitch in the room.
Don’t get this? Why in the room? Sounds a bit weird to me


Resting from the NPL is weak. I ain’t waste a bullet on this creep
Blade’s the rocking chair.. it move forward & back before putting u to sleep
Cool
Celebrated wins til u signed out but sometimes it’s fine staying quieter
For real. next time a bottle pop for u I’m in ur crib with a makeshift silencer
Nice
Predict ur reaction when u take this L. shit kid we know
That face’ll be looking confused.. cos we can’t tell if ur Chinese or Filipino
The wording of this is off - to be confused is different to being confusing
Enemies in the morgue so u know I ain’t scared of a hater
If u leave anything wrapped in a sheet it’s just the wontons u prepared for later
Haha nice
Test.. I’ll empty the mag on this faggot til he don’t compute
9 is strapped. itunes app; if u wanna dance then I’m clicking on a fruit
Nice
Catch an uppercut & u pondering not progressing
Knuckles to ur chin make u look deep in thought, this a proper philosophy lesson
Niice
Went off the grid but why change ur mind? fatso still not damaging shit
Something musta snapped.. my money’s on the rope u tried to hang urself with
Ok
but u a motivated writer if ur not eating cheese when sad
The passion, the drive, the hunger.. well, 1 out of 3 ain’t bad
Lol the most random set up of all time
Try n protect ur fam & I don’t give a fuck, ur a clown
The guns I’m totin. Bubble blowing; ur kids in the yard wet up from the rounds
Decent
Real or not? I’ll solve the mystery & wack this liar
Rifle aimed, call me Sherlock Holmes. I’m at the crime scene with the magnifier
Cool


This is pretty close to me. Both had a couple misses. I think Wanderer has a lot of those bubble type of bars which stylistically aren’t my thing but I appreciate the concepts. Didn’t like Resons opener but he picked up after that and had a couple lotb contenders. Wands cheese bar was a real wtf moment for me. Props to both for reaching the final but I’m leaning towards Resin here just for Slightly more and better standouts

Vote - resin

Answer 08-16-2020 09:17 PM

Wanderer rollin? Pfft. Pure luck is the only traction I see..
I’m puttn up Arcade numbers.. so the Top spot here is just an Initial reaction to me.

nah not really feeling this

I’m takin the AK and firinggg. When I pop shit it’s simple..
Unloading the clip. It’s gonna be Ring over Ring like the olympic symbol.

cool idea, maybe couldve been executed better but solid

Yeah I’ma gut you. My knife game rude and vicious..
Blade across the belly.. he’ll be wearing his Insides Out like he fuckin superstitious.

nah

Listen faggot, take a lesson in life. Your regression’s a site..
cuz your confusion is as Broad as day.. but u strolling as a transgender at night.

a little funny but meh from a lyrical standpoint

He a transitioning pussy. Yeah I’m gonna hurt your maker..
Surgeon gave u a fuse-box. But you def blowing more than a circuit breaker.

i like the idea but it just doesnt come together well

How is this the finals? You gotta be regretting the setting
Cuz I’m better than you in all Walks of life & i’m just here gettin my steps in.

same comment as above

Dressin like a hobo. I can start tracing ya stench..
This bum’s like a real estate agent.. you can always find his face on a bench.

eh again the idea's cool but im not loving the execution, but this is a slight step above the last 2 punches

Your life? It’s gonna cease. Open up ya chest, hear alotta wheeze..
Headshot, now u got a crease. Junkyard: Doggg ur gonna see this fuckn Auto squeeze.

wasn't feeling this

u gotta reason to book, punch yo face innn.. have u bleedin & shook..
when we throw hands, i’m Maui.. i turn into a fuckin beast with the hook.

this is fire, this bar looks like something i'd write with the Disney reference

Treat you like college pussy. Watch me just start rippin this poon..
don’t need a sock on the doorknob to know I got this lil bitch in the room.

the room? not feeling the closer






Resting from the NPL is weak. I ain’t waste a bullet on this creep
Blade’s the rocking chair.. it move forward & back before putting u to sleep

i dig it

Celebrated wins til u signed out but sometimes it’s fine staying quieter
For real. next time a bottle pop for u I’m in ur crib with a makeshift silencer

eh not really feeling this

Predict ur reaction when u take this L. shit kid we know
That face’ll be looking confused.. cos we can’t tell if ur Chinese or Filipino

i like the idea, but the execution is a miss for me

Enemies in the morgue so u know I ain’t scared of a hater
If u leave anything wrapped in a sheet it’s just the wontons u prepared for later

kinda funny but a bit simple, overall its a decent jab but not a haymaker

Test.. I’ll empty the mag on this faggot til he don’t compute
9 is strapped. itunes app; if u wanna dance then I’m clicking on a fruit

dont love the whole "clicking/pulling trigger" comparison but its ok

Catch an uppercut & u pondering not progressing
Knuckles to ur chin make u look deep in thought, this a proper philosophy lesson

pretty sure ive seen the idea done before, i know fresco had a knuckles to your chin like picture day bar, but i'll just give you the benefit of the doubt and say this is cool

Went off the grid but why change ur mind? fatso still not damaging shit
Something musta snapped.. my money’s on the rope u tried to hang urself with

ok

but u a motivated writer if ur not eating cheese when sad
The passion, the drive, the hunger.. well, 1 out of 3 ain’t bad

not really feeling this

Try n protect ur fam & I don’t give a fuck, ur a clown
The guns I’m totin. Bubble blowing; ur kids in the yard wet up from the rounds

nahh this concept is a reach

Real or not? I’ll solve the mystery & wack this liar
Rifle aimed, call me Sherlock Holmes. I’m at the crime scene with the magnifier

"mag n i fire" is a reach phonetically



highlights

res -
I’m takin the AK and firinggg. When I pop shit it’s simple..
Unloading the clip. It’s gonna be Ring over Ring like the olympic symbol.
Dressin like a hobo. I can start tracing ya stench..
This bum’s like a real estate agent.. you can always find his face on a bench.
u gotta reason to book, punch yo face innn.. have u bleedin & shook..
when we throw hands, i’m Maui.. i turn into a fuckin beast with the hook.


vs

wand -
Resting from the NPL is weak. I ain’t waste a bullet on this creep
Blade’s the rocking chair.. it move forward & back before putting u to sleep
Test.. I’ll empty the mag on this faggot til he don’t compute
9 is strapped. itunes app; if u wanna dance then I’m clicking on a fruit

Toward the beginning I felt like Wand had a shot of winning this, but he sort of fell off as his verse continued on. Res had some ups and downs throughout. Maui was easily lotb for me, olympic rings probably a distant second with the rocking chair slightly behind that for 3rd.


v/ Resin

Ouch 08-17-2020 07:17 AM

gimme like 8 hours, going to take out a dock... and then i'll vote... read half of Res and even though I lik ehim wasnt feeling it but.. be back.. sorry

Bomb Bard 08-17-2020 06:12 PM

I got res taking this with more quotables. Wand had a few bars I liked but his misses were rough. If you want a better breakdown call me tomorrow

Resin M-I-C 08-21-2020 06:40 PM

thanks for the votes boys.. will be remembered and will reciprocate on ur battles .. good shit Wand.. can we wrap this up?

Barcotic 08-21-2020 07:10 PM

This was not good for a finals

Res got it, easy. With one of his lesser verses
Maui & ring over ring being my only quotables

Rocking chair had potential

Aero 08-21-2020 07:15 PM

Wanderer- bottle pop line was nice, iTunes app, knuckles to your chin, wontons was lol, sherlock Holmes was fire...

Sinacog 08-23-2020 01:45 AM

Resin MC -

Pretty good battle verse; I enjoyed this battle verse a lot. I really enjoyed this battle verse. It was quite good and accessible. I do enjoy the multi-syllabic rhymes and flow. And I enjoy the rhyme scheme and multi-syllabic rhymes. I enjoy a lot about this verse. I enjoyed this circuit breaker line and the junkyard dog line. Everything was really well done here. There wasn't many flaws. Good work on this. Good work, man. Keep writing!

Wanderer -

I really enjoyed this verse, it was quite good. I really enjoyed this verse, it was quite good. I enjoyed this verse quite a bit. Good work, on everything. I enjoyed a lot about this verse. My favorite lines were the 'clicking on fruit' and the philosophy line. Good work on this piece. Good work, Wanderer.

I really good battle here, I have to go with Wanderer.

V/ Wanderer.


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