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Final Stage Boss 11-01-2021 06:57 PM

Ryno vs. FSB - FSB WINS!
 
16 lines/8 bars due Friday
@Ryno

Ryno 11-01-2021 09:44 PM

Better forfeit cuz I’m bringing the missile, U should be fleeing the issue
If me warning u to quit is such an arm twister, I’ll leave em both bloody & swinging from gristle
Girls think ur weird huh? shit I’m blazin this kid pawn
Only way a chick acknowledges ‘Final Call’, is if she’s a member of the Nation of Islam
See what u birth is just feeble, nothin u cook up swerving the needle
I mean it makes sense u suck at line prep, the way u constantly suck at serving up people
& I’m bout all that action kid, kidnap u while I’m flooring through traffic, shit
I can’t predict Final Destination, but I bet it ends w/ him dying a horrible accident
Get hurt or put in the dirt, I’ll ascend once u & ya factions popped
I’ve BEEN ‘levels above of u’, only difference now is I’ll be watching ya casket drop
This dude ain’t regulatin’, as far as his tool play? never slayin’
Homie the last time u had ‘cans on standby’, was doing doomsday preparations
Can’t test me or take me to school, it gets loud when macs frying
Cuz once I pass Final, the end result usually ends w/ a crowd of multiple caps flying
Listen fam I’ll hurt u, all these instruments? Man…I’ll MERK u
The way I keep bringing the sticks & drums to Stage, u’d think I was rushing to band rehearsal

Final Stage Boss 11-04-2021 06:27 PM

i'll poach ryno til peta steps in protesting the maim
praying Peace remains together, while coroners hope for the same
dude a perv.. never been truer words from the news
how you rape that innocent girl once you Sodomize looking up at you
poof that's it! gonna disappear soon as I pull the stick
but if I'm not getting my Point across, this blade'll do the trick
can't hang with the top tier here, everyone rag-dolling this quitter
if Ryne Stanek to neck with the best, he gets bounced around the league like a journeyman pitcher
yo moms a warrior, her pussy defies all logical force
that's one Tough Mudder, how everyone running thru her like an obstacle course
12 wins & 10 losses in battles? lemme even them twos
bring you one step closer to Records matching.. for dental forensics use
hope your deductible covers a teeth fix from these hits
pay a Kofi, just to get your chest caved in on some wwe shit
can't stand on your own now, this nigga ain't ten toes down
one swing & your Feet'll Position inward while your folded like that on the ground

Sinacog 08-05-2022 09:04 AM

This is a good battle..

BOTH HAD GOOD PUNCHESLINES --..

GOOD MATERIAL FROM RYNO..

THE SODOMIZE LINE WAS BAR OF THE BATTLE..

V. FINAL STAGE BOSS..

MAS GRĀV 09-06-2022 05:50 PM

It’s been almost a year lmao wrap it up

This was somewhat close for me
I feel like the winner edged w/harder hitting punches
Just by a bit a photo finish win

V/ Final Boss

Dimand Emreld 09-17-2022 10:08 PM

My Vote Goes To.....
 
Ryno's hot lines
Line 1: Better forfeit cuz I’m bringing the missile, U should be fleeing the issue
Line 5: See what u birth is just feeble, nothin u cook up swerving the needle


Final Stage Boss hot lines
Line 1: i'll poach ryno til peta steps in protesting the maim
Line 2:praying Peace remains together, while coroners hope for the same
Line 9 : yo moms a warrior, her pussy defies all logical force
Line 10 : that's one Tough Mudder, how everyone running thru her like an obstacle course


My Vote Goes To Final Stage Boss

Dope girl 09-23-2022 09:11 AM

This battle so amazing
Both had spectacular bars
Punchlines so sick
Vote-Ryno

Aero 09-29-2022 02:23 PM

Ryno:

Better forfeit cuz I’m bringing the missile, U should be fleeing the issue
If me warning u to quit is such an arm twister, I’ll leave em both bloody & swinging from gristle
What was this?
Girls think ur weird huh? shit I’m blazin this kid pawn
Only way a chick acknowledges ‘Final Call’, is if she’s a member of the Nation of Islam
Alright
See what u birth is just feeble, nothin u cook up swerving the needle
I mean it makes sense u suck at line prep, the way u constantly suck at serving up people
Terrible
& I’m bout all that action kid, kidnap u while I’m flooring through traffic, shit
I can’t predict Final Destination, but I bet it ends w/ him dying a horrible accident
Lol, predictable but cool
Get hurt or put in the dirt, I’ll ascend once u & ya factions popped
I’ve BEEN ‘levels above of u’, only difference now is I’ll be watching ya casket drop
Need a better set up bar.
This dude ain’t regulatin’, as far as his tool play? never slayin’
Homie the last time u had ‘cans on standby’, was doing doomsday preparations
No one says I've got the cans on standby
Can’t test me or take me to school, it gets loud when macs frying
Cuz once I pass Final, the end result usually ends w/ a crowd of multiple caps flying
Almost, just needed tighter wording
Listen fam I’ll hurt u, all these instruments? Man…I’ll MERK u
The way I keep bringing the sticks & drums to Stage, u’d think I was rushing to band rehearsal
Like the idea I feel like this could've been done better

Cool verse but felt rushed


FSB:

i'll poach ryno til peta steps in protesting the maim
praying Peace remains together, while coroners hope for the same
What?
dude a perv.. never been truer words from the news
how you rape that innocent girl once you Sodomize looking up at you
this was hilarious but not in a good bar way haha.. LOL accused this man of rape lol wow
poof that's it! gonna disappear soon as I pull the stick
but if I'm not getting my Point across, this blade'll do the trick
this was nice, love the concept.. better setup would help
can't hang with the top tier here, everyone rag-dolling this quitter
if Ryne Stanek to neck with the best, he gets bounced around the league like a journeyman pitcher
took too long
yo moms a warrior, her pussy defies all logical force
that's one Tough Mudder, how everyone running thru her like an obstacle course
LOL at her pussy defies all logical force... LOL yo this bar is good hahaha
12 wins & 10 losses in battles? lemme even them twos
bring you one step closer to Records matching.. for dental forensics use
Nice!
hope your deductible covers a teeth fix from these hits
pay a Kofi, just to get your chest caved in on some wwe shit
Liked the wp, punch fizzled
can't stand on your own now, this nigga ain't ten toes down
one swing & your Feet'll Position inward while your folded like that on the ground
Reach

I like your delivery, makes for an enjoyable read



Good entertaining battle here fellas. Keep this up. MVGT FSB he was cleaner, more entertaining, had less misses and did enough to take this.


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