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Dope girl 08-08-2019 08:25 PM

A poem for kids
 
The sky is blue
Clouds are grey
The Sun is yellow
Stars is twinkling
Light in Daytime
Dark at nighttime
Ice Cold during the winter
Rain in spring time
Cool in Fall time
Hot in the Summer time

Suppose to kids friendly poem

Exis 08-09-2019 07:30 AM

I know I've been extremely harsh on you in the past, For that I apologize...Can you please work on your multies?

Aero 08-09-2019 08:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver (Post 745751)
The sky is blue
Clouds are grey
The Sun is yellow
Stars is twinkling
Light in Daytime
Dark at nighttime
Ice Cold during the winter
Rain in spring time
Cool in Fall time
Hot in the Summer time

Suppose to kids friendly poem



This isn’t a poem this is a bunch of descriptions. Don’t post in the open mic anymore.

Blue Bayou 08-09-2019 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 745764)
This isn’t a poem this is a bunch of descriptions. Don’t post in the open mic anymore.

Damn man

Eŋg 08-09-2019 02:40 PM

personally, i would like to see you write a poem for adolescents, and maybe eventually adults if you're up to the task

thanks


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