WEEK 9: Fracture 3-1 VS Wanderer 5-3 FRAC WINS
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Ok..
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14 cool?
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Sure dude.. this should be good
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ended up with 16.. sent @Fracture
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O Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered & now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here You dont have bad ideas but youre sorry with words A good wand verse is a needle in a haystack, that a junkie already searched Keep you alive until everyone you knows souls vanquished Bury ya crew.. Now u like garth, got friends in low places He a pussy whos forever inside and never wins fights You aint about the hard knocks.. This rapist prefers the element of surprise Ill break ya ribs in, make your chin split An uppercut will have this challenger mid air exploding on some '86 shit Ya chicks clit looks like a portal. Shes had many dicks Lost my rubber in her.. Hoffa will be found before that jimmy is After one sniff you can tell that bitch is just spoilin Yea I still piped her down, at least the pieces of her that fit in the toilet Its so sad... Wands nbl run looks more like awkward steps Your record stinks.. Ill use it to throw the homicide detectives off my scent |
Wanderer verse:
Ajax made you cry when he asked if you were off your meds, well.. Fuck ya brewed up feelings. Act cool but we can smell tears More than bottled up emotions.. they been aged in a barrel for at least 12 yrs Nothing scares me.. No crew or cartel, yo To be Blunt.. ur in over ya head with an assassin like she was in Sicario Im dope.. this snitch’s soft bars have never been fire I must confess; shit u say makes me seem even more killa like ya wearing a wire If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit U want fans on NC but who the fuck is this geek? G’luck tryna jumpstart a following when u probs get followed & jumped every week We won’t get along & that’s a statement of pure facts If I ever hit it off with u it’s a piece of ya cranium with my bat Kill u on ur travels. U created this situation.. So when my last resort is violence urs is the next place u go on vacation Ur winning never. Grab the tools & ur shit’ll sever Givin’ u no chance. Middle-aged romance; these 2 40’s spark til they click together |
Quote:
Close: garth, jimmy hoffa, record stinks You have some dope ideas, I can't really front on you. Stylistically I don't like the way you angle some of your punches but you consistently bring fresh concepts so keep doing you. Quote:
Close: opener, Blunt, middle aged romance You have some nice bars in here but there were a couple things that were light to me with the angle you took on them. aged in a barrel, over ya head, click together.... all were cool concepts to me that weren't worded harsh enough to outweigh the punches from Fracture. Vote: Fracture I have Fracture with more quotes here. Dude has a lot of fresh concepts, he didn't leave a lot of room for mistakes. Wanderer had a nice verse but a couple misses is enough to make you lose against this kind of competition. |
Frac
Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered & now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here You dont have bad ideas but youre sorry with words A good wand verse is a needle in a haystack, that a junkie already searched Ya chicks clit looks like a portal. Shes had many dicks Lost my rubber in her.. Hoffa will be found before that jimmy is Hard knocks & challenger were close. Both dope ideas, just not feeling the execution of em Cool verse, tho not as consistent as yours usually are Opener is fire and possibly lotb. Haven't read wand yet Wand If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit Kill u on ur travels. U created this situation.. So when my last resort is violence urs is the next place u go on vacation Almost didn't quote last resort. Lazy execution Seemed like an off week for you my dude. I was really looking forward to this one too Frac got it |
Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered
& now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here Ill break ya ribs in, make your chin split An uppercut will have this challenger mid air exploding on some '86 shit Ya chicks clit looks like a portal. Shes had many dicks Lost my rubber in her.. Hoffa will be found before that jimmy is piped down and record stinks were awful, but the quoted 3 were solid. wording on challenger made it tight. otherwise consistently ok. vs. If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit U want fans on NC but who the fuck is this geek? G’luck tryna jumpstart a following when u probs get followed & jumped every week Ur winning never. Grab the tools & ur shit’ll sever Givin’ u no chance. Middle-aged romance; these 2 40’s spark til they click together the two lines I quoted first were very nice. bottled line was killed on execution but was almost there. the misses were a lot bigger than Fracs though - like that hit it off line was just awful. the click 40s idea was dope, but their was no punch. V/ Frac |
Im a god to my peers, every slaughters revered
& now that destroyer has dementia youre not even the best wanderer here You dont have bad ideas but youre sorry with words A good wand verse is a needle in a haystack, that a junkie already searched He a pussy whos forever inside and never wins fights You aint about the hard knocks.. This rapist prefers the element of surprise Vs Fuck ya brewed up feelings. Act cool but we can smell tears More than bottled up emotions.. they been aged in a barrel for at least 12 yrs If I’m not feeling plan A, I’ll write bars as backup & still wreck it u’ve got Beelines planned.. so when u get stomped u can dash for the exit We won’t get along & that’s a statement of pure facts If I ever hit it off with u it’s a piece of ya cranium with my bat V/frac. Would have voted wand if frac didnt have that first bar, it was fire |
This was a good battle both had some fire
Frac opener was fire and an actual fresh name flip on wand is impressive this days. Probably lotb. Tbh I liked the entire verse except the closer. Wand - sicario and beeline were dope. Hit it off was nice but the rhyme is off so isn’t quite a haymaker. Opener could’ve been worded better and last resort definitely is a concept but could’ve been angled harder I think. Nice showing from both but Frac opener killed it and he had less misses Vote - frac |
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