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Allen Knight 09-19-2016 06:28 PM

Hearder Hearder 1-2 Vs Innovator 1-2 - INNOVATOR WINS
 
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.


@Hearder Hearder

@Innovator

Hearder Hearder 09-19-2016 06:57 PM

Lol check

@Aero get a load of this weeks bar

Inno 09-19-2016 08:40 PM

Yo

Hearder Hearder 09-21-2016 07:53 PM

I'll kill u in front of ur fam, shits Grim. Ain't nothin dandy
Your kids'll be left chillin wit a corpse like the adventures of Billy & Mandy

Inno 09-22-2016 05:11 PM

knee deep in your girls V, she's a freak, tops me off till I cream call that cool whip.
and that bitch been a hoe. So I play Gardner with her face and put it between the tulips.

Kin 09-22-2016 09:12 PM

Heard... Grim/bill an mandy...related that to the show but using dandy to rhyme wit mandy kinda basic...

In..tops off/cool whip. Hoe/gardner/two lips... wordplay was much more creative from u... but all stuff ive heard of before... set up coulda been not so wordy...still feel like it was more creative then dandy/mandy

Vote- Vator

Chemist 09-22-2016 10:33 PM

why he banned tho
chilling with a corpse? lol I mean I get it off but it came off sooft
vater had the better line

PancakeBrah 09-23-2016 02:47 AM

zelph dropped a "like" bar. is horrible.

innovator worked his craft.

it's no contest.

v/ inno

Dope girl 09-23-2016 05:11 PM

Header start off attacking Vator but simply

vator a lil bit more creative.
Vote-Vator

Pinot Grij 09-23-2016 05:46 PM

Inno - tulips is very corny wp. it's like that old joke, "Whats better than a rose on a piano? tulips on my organ" - that's dad joke territory. can't cosign.

I don't watch cartoon but Double H wp was alright and imagery was funny. Dont' matter tho cuz he's banned.

Vote -- Hearder Hearder

Blanco Bishop 09-24-2016 12:31 PM

Both bars needed more fluidity but hearder was much more direct. I felt like innos execution was very choppy.

V lipface

Witty 09-24-2016 12:47 PM

I actually really enjoyed Inno's bar, I thought it was well written and I enjoyed the wordplay...Zelph's wasn't terrible but it was quite badly worded which made the hit seem soft...plus, the rhyming was way too basic.

Vote Inno.

Slechtn 09-24-2016 01:21 PM

The wording killed the fuck out of Zelph here, chilling? nawww. Hanging could have been better but still the concept is a bit outdated, just wasn't liking it here...Innov had an old concept with an ok twist...just overall stronger...my vote goes to:
Innov


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