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Sharp 03-23-2020 07:33 PM

King vs Eviscerate - EVISCERATE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED
 
PPV Spring 2020


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DUE: Monday, 3/30
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Line Limits: 10-16. Can go longer if agreed upon. If no limit is agreed upon, second person must match first person's verse length.

@King @Eviscerate

King 03-23-2020 11:04 PM

word

Eviscerate 03-24-2020 08:43 AM

yeh

Sharp 04-02-2020 11:44 PM

Eviscerate's Verse

Attackin a frail queen, this ain't even a male/female thing
wont smack her, but this Bitch will get disrespected by a rapper like Gayle, King
Head crack after head crack, fag'll get jacked,
crackle neck snap
tackle, chest smash, impact'll blow him out the water like a jetpack
Rather get stacks but instead I'm quarintined up in front of this computer
puffin the buddha, wasting my life writing for this fucking loser
Potato peeler to ya eyeball, got king crazy twitchin
straight incisions, retina rotating position blade scraping away your vision
Cinderblock to ya face, queer, whole cranium bruised
legs permanently glued to a wheelchair, ya spine-infused with titanium screws/
So stay focused like a gymnast, or something to that tune
you'll need dismounting parallel bars just to use the fuckin bathroom
Evicerate is that Goon. galactic black moon, tossin bar molotovs
large hadron collider ignitor, get us all tossed into a star holocaust
I'm on my astrophysicist shit. King is on his Hasbro, like kids with his shit
after clappin a clip in his wig, just to make sure he's dead, i'm kicking this bitch..

Aero 04-03-2020 06:52 AM

Not punchline heavy but the delivery was slick. You've got a way with words.

Adverse 04-03-2020 07:13 AM

Yeah we'll never know how this battle would have ended up since King no showed but this wasn't your average battle verse, had some really strong visuals like the "stripping away his vision" shit was pretty nasty lol overall it was a fun read

Sharp 04-03-2020 08:25 PM

Attackin a frail queen, this ain't even a male/female thing
wont smack her, but this Bitch will get disrespected by a rapper like Gayle, King
haven't read a lot of king battles so idk if he's seen it, but this is solid for me
Head crack after head crack, fag'll get jacked,
crackle neck snap
tackle, chest smash, impact'll blow him out the water like a jetpack
light but reads smooth
Rather get stacks but instead I'm quarintined up in front of this computer
puffin the buddha, wasting my life writing for this fucking loser
Potato peeler to ya eyeball, got king crazy twitchin
straight incisions, retina rotating position blade scraping away your vision
Cinderblock to ya face, queer, whole cranium bruised
legs permanently glued to a wheelchair, ya spine-infused with titanium screws/
So stay focused like a gymnast, or something to that tune
you'll need dismounting parallel bars just to use the fuckin bathroom
this whole chunk was just a smooth but mean read. would be dope live or recorded
Evicerate is that Goon. galactic black moon, tossin bar molotovs
large hadron collider ignitor, get us all tossed into a star holocaust
I'm on my astrophysicist shit. King is on his Hasbro, like kids with his shit
after clappin a clip in his wig, just to make sure he's dead, i'm kicking this bitch..
same idea here.

if you recorded this it would be a slick 16. wasn't all that personal, but your opponent was a faceless username who didnt show up so I don't blame you. Good read.

FGR 04-03-2020 10:45 PM

This was cool... You weren't swinging heavy but you had a few jabs.. flow was cool

Resin M-I-C 04-04-2020 01:47 PM

that read smooth af.. good shit


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