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Dove Dozer 03-31-2014 12:20 PM
Audio track - Not Ready
 
Something i was pondering for a while. Here. I hope you like it.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ll6TBaYpOf4

Fig 03-31-2014 10:49 PM
That was some good rapping. Hook was a.bit weak though. But that initial verse was fire. Like the voice too

Good to see you back around n0 go0OoO0od

Dove Dozer 04-02-2014 09:51 AM
Thanks for listening fig

Exis 04-02-2014 09:23 PM
Pretty much gonna echo what Fig said...wasn't feelin' the hook, it's ok just a bit ehh but other than that this was dope.first audio I've heard from you I think and yeah shit was tight man.

Stay upwards.

CopyPat 04-04-2014 01:03 PM
Hey man. wow have u ever gotten better. your confidence on the mic is sooo much better than your other older stuff i've heard. Plus you REALLY stepped up your complexity and scheming like we were talking about, which is good on its own but by doing that u didn't fuck ur flow up, cause damn, it came out real smooth man. seriously major props, your getting so much better, its fuckin real cool to see. Also liked the beat choice with the content here, everything meshed pretty well. you rode that beat nice with certain emphasis on certain parts etc, your're getting a good grasp of this audio shit bruh, nice.
@Genocide , you should peep this and see what u think/offer advice

Dove Dozer 04-07-2014 06:48 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by CopyPat (Post 314173)
Hey man. wow have u ever gotten better. your confidence on the mic is sooo much better than your other older stuff i've heard. Plus you REALLY stepped up your complexity and scheming like we were talking about, which is good on its own but by doing that u didn't fuck ur flow up, cause damn, it came out real smooth man. seriously major props, your getting so much better, its fuckin real cool to see. Also liked the beat choice with the content here, everything meshed pretty well. you rode that beat nice with certain emphasis on certain parts etc, your're getting a good grasp of this audio shit bruh, nice.
@Genocide , you should peep this and see what u think/offer advice


Thanks pat. I really appreciate that. Ive got lots of new music in the works. @Genocide peep this

e11even 04-09-2014 03:36 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dove Dozer (Post 310813)
Something i was pondering for a while. Here. I hope you like it.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ll6TBaYpOf4
Not many people take on an Eminem track and try to make it theirs imo, and aside from the hook you did a better than decent job bro. Keep droppin.

Dove Dozer 04-10-2014 09:40 AM
Thanks vivid

Dope girl 04-10-2014 10:00 AM
Great verse, beat sound decent.

Dove Dozer 04-10-2014 02:43 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by QueenHoney (Post 317791)
Great verse, beat sound decent.
It was a full song not just a verse. Are you sure u listened? Lol

Dove Dozer 04-13-2014 02:01 PM
@King Ra.

Dove Dozer 04-13-2014 02:02 PM
Dbl post

King Ra. 04-14-2014 05:37 AM
Got this later today.

Badweather 04-15-2014 11:55 AM
good to see you finished this one. the adlibs were a little distracting, and you seemed a little stiff. aside from that, the lyrics on paper are pretty brilliant.

Geno 04-17-2014 04:19 PM
content was nice dozer. beat of course is always an ill selection. dont like the chorus so much.. or at least the conviction it was delivered with -lyrically it could work. youve gotten better. after the hook though -seems your flow fell off. iono, felt really forced to match the beat when before the first hook you were doing nicely. keep rocking G


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