Vapeo vs Lotto Smirk - OPEN FOR VOTES
agree on rules first then we start
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10 lines due whenever
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The name “Lotto Smirk” is quite frankly absurd,
but I won’t harp on the name, don’t wanna sound like a bird Ever heard of the Smurfs, when I’m done you will resemble them, You ain’t scared of me now, but you’ll be trembling. I don’t really even know you but I know you lost to Habitat. Come at me I’ll hit you with that “rat tat tat tat” I’ll make you sad you made the mistake of battling me Make sure you understood my Smurf analogy You still wouldn’t be worth shit— even if you won the lotto I’m smirking cause you seem drunk, “99 bottles” |
Ill drop when i finish work later man
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I forgot about you...
another wack nobody no effort to put ya to sleep bruh dont know were u got dug up from but ima make sure to bury ya even deeper no1 wants ya wack idea's, people talking the piss w/out a care if you get a reaction w/ minor leagues its only cus ya known for stalking victims there i wont stop blastin, i got crazy weapons to leave ya retarded the gun'll fill you w/ so much live stock u could compete in the league split eight started you aint taking top spot, u plain trash, so far from ill only way you'd fuck up the hierarchy is if we let YOU rank people w/ what u class as skill meh i didnt even try this fool aint never bin a threat Gun'll leave vape straight plain smoked for not having any flavour thats an e-ciggerette |
This battle was very basic. Im not mad at it tho, yall both clearly new to text so fuckin up terribly is expected in the battle arena. Vapeo, every bar after the opener was pure filler. Especially the rat tat tat bar . Reminding him to remember the smurf line u said 5 lines prior was pointless as fuck tbh. There was no punch there. And pause at that closer. U plotting on drunk dudes bruh?
I honestly liked lottos hierarchy bar it was solid. Everything else was weak tho. vote- lotto |
Yeah I wasn't impressed either...both of you guys need a lot of work don't know there ain't much to say about this battle no stellar punches and there was nothing quoteworthy from either..I guess I'm going to vote for lotto even though neither of you really deserved the w in either case...so yeah vote lotto smirk
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Minor leagues ,e cigg
Vs Ummm the rat ta ta ta lmaoo Vote - Lotto |
Side battle
both missing Punchlines, complexity, flow, Multies, & wordplays. nothing against each other practice make perfect you guys will elevate Vote-Lotto |
The name “Lotto Smirk” is quite frankly absurd,
but I won’t harp on the name, don’t wanna sound like a bird You still wouldn’t be worth shit— even if you won the lotto I’m smirking cause you seem drunk, “99 bottles” vs no1 wants ya wack idea's, people talking the piss w/out a care if you get a reaction w/ minor leagues its only cus ya known for stalking victims there i wont stop blastin, i got crazy weapons to leave ya retarded meh i didnt even try this fool aint never bin a threat Gun'll leave vape straight plain smoked for not having any flavour thats an e-ciggerette vap was eh on this light tbh lotto smirk had more direct hits here vote smirk |
Pretty basic battle but I think lotto at least had some attempted punches in there
vote - lotto |
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