Netcees - 3. Defiant vs 6. Ghost

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3. Defiant vs 6. Ghost - BAGS WINS

Netcees SOL Season II
Playoffs Round 1

Due Friday, August 19th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

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@Defiant @Ghost1

Bags told me he's no showing just FYI Defiant

Oh and check

Il send a no show verse

Champ me now
Check

U here from no shows, I’m here cause sinacog got BODIED without even a question
In the end ghost always over the top like cobb in inception
Defiants run in the league was not bananas
AND NKW HE TRYING TO SNEAK TO THE SEMIS LIKE ADAM LANZA
YEA I BATTLED COG AND DG. BUT THIS LOSER IS THE WORST ONE.
GUYS A COMPLETE NOBODY. U A FAT JOKE THAT EVEN USER NEVER HEARD OF
I HOLD THE LEAD. ALL MY HOMIES DEAD.
I PULL UP TO YA HOME WITH TECHS...SPRAIN OUT THE WINDOW LIKE A BROKEN LEG
I KEEP RATCHETS. PEARL STONE GRIP.
SNAP ON ME AN GET YA WIG TOSSED QUICKER THAN A WORLDSTAR CLIP!!!*@@**@

Ya HOF is questionable, should be left with another prize
Always faked it till he made it, like ya girl did before she called some other guys
Losing to Rican n others is a stunning slump
Didn't just have a fall from grace, it's the first time ya fat ass done a running jump
Always going backwards, these punches will have u deep in tears
But there isn't a break in proceedings, when you haven't made a forward step in years
Troll after troll account, sad fuck all ya luck has crapped
So it's Ironic you love interest when it's been years since u seen any of that

Vote - Bags

The things bags said sounded better

I PULL UP TO YA HOME WITH TECHS...SPRAIN OUT THE WINDOW LIKE A BROKEN LEG

Ok dude

V/def since he didn’t have Zarg ghost write

This wasn’t very good. Defiant literally could have won this one had he come a little bit consistent, again the concepts were there but the execution faltered. Opener is decent enough if not an old concept, the second bar was okaying. Last two fell flat on their face although they had potential conceptually

Bags was okay. Thought Adam Lanza should have been “tried to sneak in the semis like Adam Lanza” inception was okay, a sprain is different than a break you big fucking retardo. World star was ehh

Bags had a better grasp on what he was doing here, could just tell he was the vet even when he wasn’t really trying

V/Bags

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meth (Post 825135)

Check

Fucking what

over the top was cool
liked adam lanza aight
user line was jokes
sprain is groin on me
closer was ok lil dated

vs

opener was cool
fall from grace fell flat
proceedings coulda been fire, just a lil off
ok closer

bags came solid, had my fav lines here..defiant fought but also already started behind with going 2 less lines..

v bags

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghost1 (Post 825115)

U here from no shows, I’m here cause sinacog got BODIED without even a question
In the end ghost always over the top like cobb in inception
OK
Defiants run in the league was not bananas
AND NKW HE TRYING TO SNEAK TO THE SEMIS LIKE ADAM LANZA
Sneak IN the semis would be better, but cool.
YEA I BATTLED COG AND DG. BUT THIS LOSER IS THE WORST ONE.
GUYS A COMPLETE NOBODY. U A FAT JOKE THAT EVEN USER NEVER HEARD OF
LOL OK, solid
I HOLD THE LEAD. ALL MY HOMIES DEAD.
I PULL UP TO YA HOME WITH TECHS...SPRAIN OUT THE WINDOW LIKE A BROKEN LEG
Like a broken leg? Lol come on man. I think you probably intended sprain/spraying to be goofy but I liked it actually
I KEEP RATCHETS. PEARL STONE GRIP.
SNAP ON ME AN GET YA WIG TOSSED QUICKER THAN A WORLDSTAR CLIP!!!*@@**@
OK

Quote:

Originally Posted by Defiant (Post 825151)

Ya HOF is questionable, should be left with another prize
Always faked it till he made it, like ya girl did before she called some other guys
OKish. "till (s)he made it" is a bit of a stretch talking about his girl
Losing to Rican n others is a stunning slump
Didn't just have a fall from grace, it's the first time ya fat ass done a running jump
Solid here
Always going backwards, these punches will have u deep in tears
But there isn't a break in proceedings, when you haven't made a forward step in years
Nah not this one. "always going backwards"/"haven't made a forward step in years" isn't really anything. You could replace backwards/forwards with any number of antonyms and this would still be essentially the same thing.
Troll after troll account, sad fuck all ya luck has crapped
So it's Ironic you love interest when it's been years since u seen any of that
this one is solid

Concepts weren't that far apart really but Ghost's harsher and more swaggy delivery just makes the bars come off better. Also not sure why Def chose to go one less bar but that put him at a disadvantage too.

V/ Ghost

Love interest kinda
Break in proceedings maybe

Vs

Sprain lol
User
Rest was solid

Bags had higher highs and more bars so vote bags