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Champ Match: Dominate vs Resin M-I-C - OPEN FOR VOTES
Netcees SOL Season II @Dominate @Resin M-I-CWeek 5 Due Thursday, July 28th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 14 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
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@Dominate |
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off |
Hello, mate.
. . Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./ Mahfucka. . . . |
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash Decent... Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy Raw...dope... And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill Nah... Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium Lmaooo. She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre Lmso I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money Ok Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off Ok... Pretty good, some dope lines, few misses....the phew line was the highlight to me....all in all dope verse... Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / Aight Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ Lmao Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / Dope It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / Lmaooo I loved this This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / Ok Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / Ehh didn't smack that hard You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss Lmaooo Good verse, highligyt was baby dick line, best bar of battle, this was a dope verse, I fuck with it. Both were good, really good battle guys, I feel Dom had to few more misses than res, and res came better overall Vote res |
Res:
Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / ^ cool. good reference Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ ^ like the connection between Korg and face rocked but this didn’t work for me Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / ^ dope, this was cool It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / ^ lol okay This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / ^ decent concept could have used some retweaking Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / ^ filler You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./ Mahfucka. ^ I’ve heard this kind of concept used before, cool connection to him being a teacher though Dom: Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash ^ decent. Like how both openers are trash bars lol Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy ^ this is dope and funny lol And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill ^ ehh decent I guess, alright flip on the Asian eats dog thing Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium ^ lol alright She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre ^ hahaha cool I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money ^ this is aight way to keep the gambling connection going Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off ^ this was filler to me. Res mentioned the fact he had writer’s block and man you could feel it throughout. Wording was off and concepts were hard to come by. I think he gave it his best but I’ve got Dominate being the more consistent battler here V/Dom |
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash Took my hungover brain too long to understand this but I like it Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy Nice. Can’t believe I haven’t seen this done before And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill Lol Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium I did this once but yours is written better tbh She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre Nice I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money Ok Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off Think I’m missing something here Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / Worded nicely for synchs a long bar concept is decent Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ Cool Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / Ok It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / this is Better This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / Nice Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / Lol You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./ Mahfucka. Lol nice closer Good from both. Dom kinda fell away with his last two but he had better high points. Resin read smooth af but the angles just weren’t quite as clever for me. Vote Dom |
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash Neigh wrote this lol.. liked it tbh Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy Simple well executed And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill This was OK, reminds me of a line I heard in live battle vs Asian person Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium Well worded but ballpark is played to me She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre Cool, hit I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off Roulette was coo..Iked the different parts. rodeo felt well as a closer but familiar Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. Liked the b2tf reference & executing this one. Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ Alright, had swag.. Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / Nice, I liked the concept & relatated personal It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / Original.. liked it This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / Decent personal Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / Aight You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./ Mahfucka. Lol closer Vote Res. This was close... great consistent battle prolly best so far but he got the nod to me.. |
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash dope Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy gonee And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill funny but nothing crazy Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium nice She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre cool I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money okay Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off I get it but I'm not feeling it as much as the other bars Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / dope Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ okay Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / really creative. I fw it a lot after seeing Doms Asian bar It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / I have mixed feelings about this one lol. Still good This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / okay Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / I don't think it was a boil but still works You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./ lmao Mahfucka. . . . Fuck this is close. Best battle I've read in a while. Easily best of the season. I'm going back and forth a few times because it's about the same number of bars I thought were bangers. I think Dom's let a phew go was my favorite bar but Resin was more consistent. Wildly close and it's tough because it's going to come down to voter preference I think. I'LL REREAD LATER AND VOTE I reread. It's crazy close. I think Resin's consistency edges it for him with one more bar that I liked. It could go either way. Great job, guys V/resin |
Stop acting like you have better things to do than vote on this losers
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Dominate:
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash Hehe.. I didn't like the "from some trash" part... "from trash" would've been cleaner but this was cool Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy Good grief I wish I would've used this against Frac.. Fuego And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill Alright, calling his wife an old yeller not as hard though.. Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium LOL.. aight.. didnt like this at first but reading it now I like it She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre alright I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball.. & when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money Standard Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off seems fillerish Nice verse. Thing about your verses is they will always be technically sound so you can read it days later and a bar I didn't care for I can look at and be like, you know what that's actually pretty good Resin: Aiyyo Ayy this dude is my target? See this feud end in carnage.. I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest. cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. / I like the word flux capacitator.. made this bar even better Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder.. Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./ more of a simple concept with a nice delivery Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / quarter eyes like your eyes only open up a quarter of the way.. I liked this bar.. its harsh, has imagery, creative It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches.. Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. / Alright, at this point you've overdone it on references. punch is alright, Googled the cover and saw a baby dick so thanks for that smh This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / I like the idea, a better setup would've made this hit harder Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid.. cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. / LOL this was nice esp if you know how disgustin User's situation is. You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast.. When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss haha coolish, also kinda silly cuz no one says a nine is dumping in reference to a kid Your delivery really aids in your punches, sometimes the setups could be more thought out Okay so on first read I had Resin winning this so I was like I'm not going to vote on this battle because I don't vote on Dom battles where I don't think he's won. On 2nd read I started liking Dom's lines a bit more. The phew line from Dom was bonkers and the river line from Res was Nice too. For me what seperates the two verses is probably the User line. That made go lol, alright... I've got Resin winning this but I'm going to put fear in his heart by putting the word Dom at the bottom. That way I know if you guys actually read. My best friends on the internets are Blue and Dom |
You’re dead to me.
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4-2 res
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It’s not a boil you fucking loser.
vote - dom |
Reserved
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Was meant to vote on this sooner… my sincerest apologies
Res You had quarter eyes - dope Flux capacitor was cool Nirvana cover was cool (seen nirvana cover bars before but this was a unique take) School shooter was good Rest we’re ok and the closer was a miss for me Dom Opener’s been done before Phew was one of those simple ideas I can’t believe hasn’t been done before yet still fire Old yeller made me LOL. Tad light Ballpark figure is clever wordplay but honestly, feel like I’ve seen this before Ogre was great Roulette wheel ok Rodeo was cool This is a tricky one. Both of you are dope writers. Dom, your execution was on point and Res, you always come really creative . Standouts we’re quarter eyes and nirvana cover vs phew and ogre. Can’t decide the winner from that so it comes down to the rest of the verse. I think Res had the worst miss with that 9 dumpin so I gotta give this to Dom by a hair Vote Dom |
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you shut your mouth when you talk to me |
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre Vs Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right.. Get smacked tonight.. Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. / This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers.. I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. / This was a dope read I had 3 vs 2 highlight bars I jus was fuckin with one’s approach Alil more, the dumpin 9 was like a bar that helped me go the other way … v/DOM |
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