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Sharp 08-08-2022 11:17 PM

Fracture vs Adverse - FRAC WINS
 
Netcees SOL Season II
Week 7


Due Thursday, August 11th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
@Fracture @Adverse

Adverse 08-08-2022 11:19 PM

Hell yeah still down to go 16 if that’s good with @Sharp @Fracture

Sharp 08-08-2022 11:21 PM

As long as you both agree, sure

Adverse 08-11-2022 11:04 PM

This guy’s a legend? Pfft..

If UPN had a Rushmore it’d be Zuch, Rudge, User and Dave
Frac should have his face carved too tho I’d just prefer to do it with blades
Neighborhood can’t stand dude, turned a blind eye as I let the automatic spray
Nobody seeing it when I run those clips in broad day, call that shit the matinee
Existential crisis bars, I’m that sick with the craft dude
He’ll see what a real procreate, and wish his parents never had the chance to
We ain’t idiots bro, Frac ain’t popular, doesn’t take a genius to know
Saying you’re in a “league of your own” doesn’t make it any less sad u play through every Madden season alone
If this text shit your life bro, tie a noose and stand on a chair
Couldn’t name the last league you was Quality Inn, biggest feat is becoming the manager there
When my heater busts, it’s dangerous!, aim the clips at your head
When Frac heater bust, it’s dangerous! he’s calling maintenance instead
Take nothing less than a W, that’s why I’m writin like wild
If you see a stalemate in this battle, it’ll be Dominate describin your style
I’m 27, he’s 36...imma have to bury old bloke
Ain’t seen someone get in this much trouble fucking with a 9 year gap since fucking Jared Fogle

Fracture 08-11-2022 11:12 PM

It’s fracture v. Fag who’s to use to losing this bad
How u look like Danny devito ate a bag of Doritos without using his hands?
U need a bib or a towel, condiments just chill by the mouth
Wow,.. Ur big heads ruined more collars than dna appeals in the south
Ur set ups don’t match the punches ur calling
You beat rod. But your best line was about splitting hairs while ur balding
Pig neck, air condition makes this bitch sweat
Cam adds ten pounds,.. but ur tits suggest ur dealing with an entire Dipset
Dick breath. You look like you escaped a zoo
Plz never take a nude, I’d rather see my daughters school become Breaking News
Yo, you’re feeble but worse
U said this is ur Super Bowl, well I’m Spacey w/ a Glock watchin u eat til u burst
Asked ya girl doggy or head? Her mouth trembled
She was on the fence so I blew her fucking back out like South Central
I like Ad, so I held back on pouring the hate
Fracll cushion the blow,.. by pressing the gun into a pillow that’s over his face

Bang.

Hush 08-12-2022 01:27 PM

This was a great battle


Frac had higher highs and lower lows


Adverse was pretty consistent except for that procreate line which made me angry


Quality inn was fire



Ricky ! That blow ya back out bar won it for me

Blue Bayou 08-15-2022 09:42 AM

I enjoyed this battle.... Ad came pretty hard and this is easily the best verse I've seen from him in a while... Frac did his usual dope outside the box concepts and creative approaches



Ad
Rushmore carving concept is cool... whether you used the correct names or not is irrelevant to this site imo, cool
Any clips movie ref is too played to me and I just dint think should be done anymore personally
Procreate very played unfortunately
Madden was lollll and I really liked your wording on this... good punch and personal here
Quality inn was dope... nice
Heater bust lol... cool
Stalemate has been done so this is a miss for me
Subway closer was ight


Frca
Lmao opener is hilarious.. great use of his earlier pic battle this season
Collars concept is cool. Funny personal
Splitting hairs is okay
Dipset nicee
School bar is bonkers. Love it. Worded great
The Se7en bar i fuck with conceptually but I dunno something about calling it a Super bowl of spaghetti seems silly to me haha... i appreciate the attempt and original concept tho
South Central dope af
Closer is dope too.. fuck with this concept a lot despite the lazy setup lol



Good stuff guys both had some dope shit... I got frac here tho with the higher highs and a few less misses. Props to both

Kill Spree 08-15-2022 09:51 AM

If UPN had a Rushmore it’d be Zuch, Rudge, User and Dave
Frac should have his face carved too tho I’d just prefer to do it with blades
If this text shit your life bro, tie a noose and stand on a chair
Couldn’t name the last league you was Quality Inn, biggest feat is becoming the manager there

Likes stale mate everything else was meh or I’ve seen


Vs

It’s fracture v. Fag who’s to use to losing this bad
How u look like Danny devito ate a bag of Doritos without using his hands?
U need a bib or a towel, condiments just chill by the mouth
Wow,.. Ur big heads ruined more collars than dna appeals in the south
Ur set ups don’t match the punches ur calling
You beat rod. But your best line was about splitting hairs while ur balding
Pig neck, air condition makes this bitch sweat
Cam adds ten pounds,.. but ur tits suggest ur dealing with an entire Dipset
Dick breath. You look like you escaped a zoo
Plz never take a nude, I’d rather see my daughters school become Breaking News

Frac got this more quotables.

V/Frac

Dominate 08-15-2022 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse (Post 824837)
This guy’s a legend? Pfft..

If UPN had a Rushmore it’d be Zuch, Rudge, User and Dave
Frac should have his face carved too tho I’d just prefer to do it with blades
Pretty cool attack bar. I like the wording. Set up incorporating a personal dig is good
Neighborhood can’t stand dude, turned a blind eye as I let the automatic spray
Nobody seeing it when I run those clips in broad day, call that shit the matinee
Not bad. Clips wp is done but with the 'nobody seeing it' and 'in broad daylight' tie ins it's cool. Set up well
Existential crisis bars, I’m that sick with the craft dude
He’ll see what a real procreate, and wish his parents never had the chance to
Nah this is played man
We ain’t idiots bro, Frac ain’t popular, doesn’t take a genius to know
Saying you’re in a “league of your own” doesn’t make it any less sad u play through every Madden season alone
Seen 'league of your own' flips before but the wording was strong, came out OK
If this text shit your life bro, tie a noose and stand on a chair
Couldn’t name the last league you was Quality Inn, biggest feat is becoming the manager there
Heh, good. Could have maybe found a more harshly worded flip rather than just stating his job but it's still solid
When my heater busts, it’s dangerous!, aim the clips at your head
When Frac heater bust, it’s dangerous! he’s calling maintenance instead
lol, cool
Take nothing less than a W, that’s why I’m writin like wild
If you see a stalemate in this battle, it’ll be Dominate describin your style
LOL I loved this. I see Blue said it's played but honestly I've never seen it and I feel like I should know. I have seen a million CHECKmate flips over the years but this was different enough, wording was funny
I’m 27,
you fucking baby
he’s 36...imma have to bury old bloke
Ain’t seen someone get in this much trouble fucking with a 9 year gap since fucking Jared Fogle
you said 'fucking' too many times but it's an OK line

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture (Post 824838)
It’s fracture v. Fag who’s to use to losing this bad
How u look like Danny devito ate a bag of Doritos without using his hands?
LOL. Good.
U need a bib or a towel, condiments just chill by the mouth
Wow,.. Ur big heads ruined more collars than dna appeals in the south
I don't get this
Ur set ups don’t match the punches ur calling
You beat rod. But your best line was about splitting hairs while ur balding
OK flip on his line
Pig neck, air condition makes this bitch sweat
Cam adds ten pounds,.. but ur tits suggest ur dealing with an entire Dipset
Hahaha, good
Dick breath. You look like you escaped a zoo
Plz never take a nude, I’d rather see my daughters school become Breaking News
Haha geez. Liked this
Yo, you’re feeble but worse
U said this is ur Super Bowl, well I’m Spacey w/ a Glock watchin u eat til u burst
Had to google the reference and still didn't love it when I got it. 'Super bowl' wp I'm iffy about
Asked ya girl doggy or head? Her mouth trembled
She was on the fence so I blew her fucking back out like South Central
Had to google this too but LOL, yeah that's good
I like Ad, so I held back on pouring the hate
Fracll cushion the blow,.. by pressing the gun into a pillow that’s over his face
It's OK. Feels familiar

Bang.

Can I get an explanation for that collar line please @Fracture/anybody who gets it?

Fracture 08-15-2022 11:15 AM

@Dominate

I was referring to when a cop makes an arrest it’s known as a collar

A lot of arrest were overturned when dna evidence came about

Defiant 08-15-2022 12:54 PM

If UPN had a Rushmore it’d be Zuch, Rudge, User and Dave
Frac should have his face carved too tho I’d just prefer to do it with blades
Existential crisis bars, I’m that sick with the craft dude
He’ll see what a real procreate, and wish his parents never had the chance to
If this text shit your life bro, tie a noose and stand on a chair
Couldn’t name the last league you was Quality Inn, biggest feat is becoming the manager there
When my heater busts, it’s dangerous!, aim the clips at your head
When Frac heater bust, it’s dangerous! he’s calling maintenance instead

Vs

U need a bib or a towel, condiments just chill by the mouth
Wow,.. Ur big heads ruined more collars than dna appeals in the south
Ur set ups don’t match the punches ur calling
You beat rod. But your best line was about splitting hairs while ur balding
Pig neck, air condition makes this bitch sweat
Cam adds ten pounds,.. but ur tits suggest ur dealing with an entire Dipset
Yo, you’re feeble but worse
U said this is ur Super Bowl, well I’m Spacey w/ a Glock watchin u eat til u burst
Asked ya girl doggy or head? Her mouth trembled
She was on the fence so I blew her fucking back out like South Central


Close battle, alot closer than I thought it would be, adverse really went for it here and made it close. Wording was on point some lines the wording pulled it through on a concept that was decent like the procreate line that maybe was played. Fracture was just a tad more consistent imo.

Good battle

Vote fracture

Mac 08-15-2022 04:36 PM

If UPN had a Rushmore it’d be Zuch, Rudge, User and Dave
Frac should have his face carved too tho I’d just prefer to do it with blades

If this text shit your life bro, tie a noose and stand on a chair
Couldn’t name the last league you was Quality Inn, biggest feat is becoming the manager there
When my heater busts, it’s dangerous!, aim the clips at your head
When Frac heater bust, it’s dangerous! he’s calling maintenance instead

vs.

Dick breath. You look like you escaped a zoo
Plz never take a nude, I’d rather see my daughters school become Breaking News
Asked ya girl doggy or head? Her mouth trembled
She was on the fence so I blew her fucking back out like South Central


I got adverse.. his opener gave him the edge.. sorry frac

Resin M-I-C 08-15-2022 06:40 PM

opener and quality inn from adverse was firee.. heater was solid


frac had dipset which is old school fire, opener, sb and south central


adverse came in here with a fight, but to me had low lows like stalemate and procreate..

v frac

Dominate 08-15-2022 07:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture (Post 824995)
when a cop makes an arrest it’s known as a collar

Did not know this. OK, that bar is cool. Alright follow up to the opener.


I think this is botw. Nice job gents. It’s close. I had to google/get expos for a lot of Frac’s references which took the sting out a little, but even so the best bars for me are Quality Inn/heater bust/stalemate vs Doritos/Dipset/Breaking news/South Central. So that’s 3 v 4 and also Adverse had the only real miss to me with procreate. So,

V/ Frac

Saint 08-15-2022 08:56 PM

Ad:
opener similar to face carved over dead presidents bar ive seen.. still decent
matinee good, wording a tad off
quality inn feels as maybe too, solid personal
heater bust ha.. coolish
closer hmm maybe too specific? I recall the scene

Frac:South Central fence tie in brought it in. Dipset was straight - humor.. opener too not crazy punchline wise but upn like humor/ diss. Breaking news similar, collar was alright. your executions more to the point..

I've got v-Frac, lines stood out more, less misses


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