Summer Classic Finals: Murda Sho vs Knucklehead - Knucklehead wins
20 lines due Friday
Winner gets automatic NBL champ match |
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Aye Friday snuck up on me cool to drop tomorrow night?
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No prob brotha
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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?
Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown |
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Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts... Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion Zip Him Up!! |
Congrats to both for making the big show... I'm gunna be a little harsher a critic then usual since it's a final and will score it out
Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one nahh, played out angle & this particular flip has already been done... 5/10 This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat BOOM! dope concept that was executed nicely... dig it 9/10 Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body this is cool, hate the multi (its off) but not a big deal.. I think I get what ur going for hear and it hits.. 7/10 Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it lol, dece smoking/smoking flip... kidve obscure but I think its cool for an attack line 7/10 U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him ehhh, I get the attempt but this is a miss for me.. i can appreciate the personal angle here but the Cred/Credit angle has been worked too many times imo, cant give it props in a Finals.. personal helped this since he's calling out al th gun bar guys lately 6/10 Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no dig it... fresh & creative concept for an attack line.. 8/10 Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night hmmm, I like this... very diff from a lot of other bingo bars... pretty obscure w/ a 'rip ur heart out at dinner punch' lol but pretty creative and a cool fresh take..multi is bad again tho 7/10 Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava this was ehh imo... the premise is funny but 'like the floor is lava' is corny to me and a reach ... 5/10 Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC cool... don't recall seeing the 'pull the plug' phrase used like this as an attack line.. wording solid, cool 7/10 Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown cool idea, obscure meta again but pretty creative & fresh.. works well for a closer.. 8/10 vs. Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week lol cool open.. wording was solid with the personal tie in... not a banger, but a good solid bar and I like the swag involved 8/10 Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch cool np, execution was solid here and made the bar .. 7/10 This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin had to look this nerd shit up but this was cool.. like the wordplay, and works well as a 'send u to heaven' attack line.. wordng dope, 7/10 Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts... Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers hmmm, this is mehh, the plate tie in wasn't great & while ur wording has been dope so far this one is clunky to me... not feelin the homour factor that u were goin for 5/10 I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit hmm, this is okay & to the point it just seems easy and non-effective honestly.. & while I don't think it was intentional, the bars were very similar lol, 6/10 Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves haha @ 'wife's a pug' ... anyways, dig this.. cool meta and nameplay & the approach was fresh... 8/10 I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads cool & effective bar .. 7/10 Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles the Knuckle on the ground / caveman reference seems familiar & prob played.. or maybe it was a gorilla... anyways this was a solid nameplay & the double angle was cool, but slight deduction because ive seen the reference before 7/10 He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him ehhh, more needed to be done imo here... seems underdeveloped and incomplete 5/10 Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion nahhh this is a reach & feels corny... similar bars have been done 'ive seen I've exhausted all options, and running ur car in ur garage seemed like the best one' and its obscure/light for an attack line imo... seems like a throw in which is bad for a finals closer... 5/10 Niiice battle guys... on the whole both had a couple really nice hits (realllly liked the beer helmet line) & some pretty consistent/solid punches... some definitive misses as well for me with some half hearted flips & played ideas, but it was really neck & neck and I think when you really boil it down it was Murda's last 2 bars that really edged it to Knuck for me (i.e. the exhaust thing was worded corny & has been done)... I think with even 2 slightly above avg / cool bars Murda would've edged this but I've got Knuck with the better verse... ur multi's bugged me a lot of ties but the creativity was impressive... Could easily see this being like a 8-5 or 8-6 final vote tally, much diff styles... props to both Knuck - 69 Murda Sho - 65 Vote - Knucklehead |
Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one Decent opener here! Skeletons out the closet concept ok This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat Niceee here, can beer hat shit was nice Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body This was ok, no impact really behind this one. I like it statement wise tho Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it This is nice and I like how you worded this right here U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him Ok, I like this one too Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no Lol, this here was coo...wordng was kinda ehh here....but coo Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night This is ok, the bingo night concept is coo Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava Didn't really feel this one here Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC Ehh, decent Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown Coo closer here ---------------- Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week This was a ight opener here Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch Niceee This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin This was nice, I like this concept here! Def a hit for me Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts... Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers Couldn't really get with this one I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit Nahhh here Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves This was coo here I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads Niceee Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles This was dopeee, good shit He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him This was could have been fiya, think you just rushed and forgot some wording....light jab here cause of wording Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion Didn't like the ender here Props on this read, shit was a good on both ends, after two reads I got Knuck with the more overall consistent verse and less misses. Sho was going tf off as well, but had spots where he didn't have enough wording or he completely missed. V-Knuck |
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I got Knuck 100 |
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v/ @Knucklehead I felt he had the better content. He had different angles wasn't focused on the attack. You both deserve the praise for the work you put in to get here. I just think Knuckle head was crisper, cleaner & hit harder. |
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