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WK2: BodySnatcher 1-0 vs. DynamiCz 0-1 - BodySnatcher WINS!!
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down for whatever.
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10 is coo
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If you wanna drop early I'm down. I'll edit my verse in here......10 ready.
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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...highlight=Sral
I like to welcome the pizza king himself Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! |
I say...
I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse You can carry your own body bag. |
Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that
You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack nah wasn’t feelin this Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up wasnt feelin this either bro Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook alright a tad wordy but this was cool Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap im not sure I quite get what you were going for If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! i feel like this is a very old concept but idk, nonetheless I just can’t dig it no matter how I read it /: Vs I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D alright, the 2D play saved this line. Without that tie in I would have hated this lol You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo nah too much happening here bro That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth fuckin dead Ugly fuck, An elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story alright this was cool Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse just decent because it was very wordy I’m very surprised here. In the NBL I read a few DynamiCz verses and I thought he was fire, I feel like he just didn’t bring much to the table this battle though. He had one good line imo, BodySnatcher had a couple misses at the most but he definitely came more consistent. The brushing your teeth line was fuckin terrible but made me spit out my coffee lmfao smh. Vote BodySnatcher VOTE IS AWAITING APPROVAL BY INCREDIBLE DUE TO FEEDING ACCUSATIONS |
Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that
You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack miss Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up Maybe because I've seen the pizza angle on him before, but na Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook fks w it, dope Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap didn't like this bar If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! eh... this was ok I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D lol, ok You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo huh? na That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth dope, lol Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story hit Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse You have a lot of tie ins, but the punch itself was light to me v/ Body Good battle, I agree w/ what gudelj said about Dynamicz tho. I read some of his other verses from NBL and wasn't feeling this one as much. Bodysnatcher had some clever lines and some creative concepts, thought he took it pretty decisively. |
Dynamicz
Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack kinda soft here for the personal flip didn't really hit for me according to sting factor Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up didn't like this either my man the wording of it and execution was off Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook very dope concept nice creativity good metaphore Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap fuck this could've something dope man wording felt on execution because the setup was nice this trio kinda made it fall off was u going for the wordplay tre o? like tre ocho just curious. If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! ok liking this nice flip Body Snatcher I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D good wordplay here this was dope very creative You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo finisher wasn't really sensible to me That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth lmao this was fucking dope harsh hit good metaphore Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story this was another dope hit ive seen the campfire wordplay before but nice tie in with the metaphore Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse didn't like the execution of this well dynamicz had the mike d antoni line and closer was cool. other then tthat some wording and execution hurt him that tlc setup would've had potential also if he just finished it right. Body had some dope metaphorical comparison his opener was creative that brushing the teeth line was lotb hit hard af. the campfire line like I said seen it done but the tie in was dope af. I got Body on this one for more creativity and consistency. Vote: Body |
Dy
Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack the personal is there, but snatched/snatching sucked as a concept/tie in for it. miss Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up nah, another miss Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook better attempt, but think about the impact here. theres hardly any + the punchline itself is awkward/seemed forced into a concept Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap OK at best, ima give it a pass cuz i just had a nap If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! decent 2 jabs 3 misses vs Quote:
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Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that
You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack (Lol this was pretty funny. Decent) Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up (This didn’t hit as hard to me. Prob shoulda did a bit more with the angle) Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook (I like the concept but the punch wasn’t as crisp as it needed to be. Made the line seem kinda scattered) Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap (This was pretty good. I liked the 3 Nina’s TLC for a set up. ‘Make him jump from a standstill’ isn’t really a phrase you’d use outside a bar (to my knowledge), but I see where you were going. Overall when you combine it with the punch in the setup I thought it was pretty good) If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! (Grimey! This is dope. You set it up well. This was your best line imo) I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D (I liked the scheme. You did a lot with it but the punch wasn’t quite there. A D flip prob isn’t good enough to be the punch. There was a lot of good word associations and tie ins though.) You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo (Im typically a fan of 90s hood movie references lol but this one was kinda all over the place. I thought it was weird that the punch didn’t incorporate He Got Game since that’s what you was setting up. I liked he yelled Jesus and ran to the corner part, and muzzle like a blue nose. I take points off though cus I thought it was all over the place.) That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth (I didn’t care for this. “Pull it out and Stan you again” doesn’t really fit cleanly for “brushing your teeth”....cus you not really stabbing yourself) Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story (Pretty dope. I liked the campfire wp. Only critique is Ive heard very similar flash under his chin/flashlight/ghost story flips. None worded like yours though so it was still dope.) Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse (I like this. A LOT of here and did it smoothly. Lot of tie ins (Proof/D12/Eminem/Detroit then Detroit/D caps/ then Purple pill/relapse). Impressive scheme. Good closer). Good battle. I thought both came with it. Dynamic is a solid pincher while Body Snatcher has been able to put together some really impressive schemes. I thought dynamic was slightly more consistent (his misses weren’t as bad) but Body Snatcher had some high highs. The difference for me was Dynamicz punches landed a bit harder. Body Snatcher has a lot of lines had good concepts, schemes, and tie ins but the punch wasn’t quite there. I got Dynamicz in a close one. |
If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping
Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! vs Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story Close. Both were light. Wasn't feeling much from either if anything and I was extremely liberal with the bars picked. However DY's bar was just a tad bit better as Camp fire bars are pretty played to me. I mean, he flipped it but wasn't fresh with the tie ins by any means. v/DynamiCz - with the slight edge. |
dyn had
Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! body had That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth got dynamicz here. this was a cool battle, these were my fav out the battle but alot of other decent lines here to. |
Cool battle, pretty close ... ive got Body
Opener was cool, he got game / rondo was dope af, and campfire was an awesome flip Dyn ... dantoni was cool concpet but punch was light, and i liked vertical leap.. Ive got body with slightly better concepts and consistency VOTE BODYSNATCHER |
Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that
You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack diet light Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up ....... Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook american sports plays are a mystery to me Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap dont get it If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping! this was okay vs I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D the single letter name play and bowzer concept took away from this You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo meh That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth meh Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory & if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story cool Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse not my cup of tea idk wasn't really a fan of alot. Campfire even though a bit played was the best executed punch so i'll go with that. v/Bodysnatcher |
@Incredible...You do know it's extremely hard to vote when battlin' isn't your forte right? So I'll just pick who I think dropped harder...
Snatcher bodied him imo...cats say shit close, nah... You can totally fuck off this vote if you wants, but my vote goes to BS. |
This is a wierd battle. Idk dynamics had a lot of shit that didnt really connect. BS wasnt a whole lot better but thought his punches were more sirect. Just WORDY AS FUCK goddamn. Idk man. I got BS edgin this barely. Them long ass lines almost made me vote dyn tho. Rs
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I really disliked both verses... dyna didn't hit on any punches... i guess the d'antoni line was ok... body had the worst flow I've read in years... body had much fresher concepts, but the lines were stretched and hard to put any concept of a rhythm to...
both were terribly worded... body in particular... took the sting off of any chance for a punch. I just don't understand how the punches still didn't hit when both ppl threw flow and rhythm in the trash can... I guess vote - Body cause I could see where he was going with some of it, and the concepts weren't awful... but this just wasn't a good read... |
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