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Incredible 05-14-2018 11:45 AM

WK2: Enbombz 1-0 vs. Infiltrate 0-0 - Infiltrate WINS!!
 
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@Enbombz @Infiltrate

Saint 05-14-2018 05:11 PM

10?

Enbombz 05-15-2018 06:39 AM

Yeh 10-12. Match whoever drops first.

Saint 05-19-2018 12:33 AM

posting later

Enbombz 05-19-2018 04:17 AM

Same

Enbombz 05-19-2018 08:02 AM

they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression
you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky
I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note
The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick
Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle
how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder

zelti 05-19-2018 07:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltrate (Post 665228)
posting later

You showing?

Saint 05-19-2018 08:41 PM

UK huh?

My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond
Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air
Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan
This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm
Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s
Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat

Barcotic 05-19-2018 11:44 PM

Enbombz
they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression
played, not a good flip
you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky
opposite of ur opener, pretty damn creative. fresh concept, wording couldve ben a bit better but this was still above average
I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note
decent
The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick
chin is mad played n this didnt have a good enough flip to make it nice. kudos for trying to incorporate a recent fight but u still really only used chin as ur concept
Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle
dope
how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder
another israel wp? this was played way b4 it being used twice in the same week. the other usage had a tie in that saved it, which unfortunately this one lacked. miss

2 gd punches
1 jab
3 misses


vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltrate (Post 665404)
My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond
minnow sounds nothing like men owe, this was a miss for me
Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air
hah pretty good, creative bar. u dont have to capitalize as many words tho fr
Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan
dope, on par w/ the other movie ref from eb
This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm
nah man, not feelin it. concept, wording, cant fwi
Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s
same as the last bar
Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat
a liiittle stretch but decent

2 gd punches
1 jab
3 misses


Twodrop 05-20-2018 02:21 AM

they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression
I just recently saw this flip done better, forget by who, but a miss for me
you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky
yup
I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note
just ok
The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick
I dont see a flip on chin, but the bar itself hit for me
Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle
simple but effective
how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder
ya, second isreal play, thought bleak did it better, miss

My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond
just ok, had to google this
Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air
doppppe
Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan
this was nice, coo wp w/ the movie tie in
This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm
even after another google search, didn't like this
Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s
lol, decent
Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat
fks w/ it

I got inf with the edge here. He had LOTB for me w/ the star spangled banner, and both had same number of misses.

Good battle,

mvgt/ inf

DynamiCz 05-20-2018 12:39 PM

they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression

Decent opener

I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note

Nice here

Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle

Dope

how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder

Ehh played, but still worded nice

-------

Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air

Dope

Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan

Nice

This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm

Dope

Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat

Nasty


Dope battle! I'm going with Inf on this one. Bombz had lines that hit, but Inf lines was hitting and applying pressure. Shit was a dope read frfr props on both ends.

V-Inf

Flow 05-20-2018 07:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Enbombz (Post 665272)
they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression
lol
you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky
no
I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note
lol
The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick
ok
Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle
light
how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder
unsure on this

A light jab 2 lols and a dece bar with a miss an a iffy one. Decent showin. Liked the lols. Tickled me



VS


Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltrate (Post 665404)
UK huh?

My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond
ok at a push
Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air
fuck with this. Should of opened on this for me
Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan
fresh gun bar
This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm
clever but felt it lacked sting
Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s
unique liked it.
Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat
clever but meh.. you could of hit harder with this

Tbh i think INF the better battler an his creativity is always on point but felt this lacked a lot more sting then what he been showing as of late, maybe sleepin i dunno, good drop but i liked enbombz showin an think there was a risk of an upset here. But overall got to give it the yank. His wording an creativity trumped enbombs lol moments.

Vote inf

Jabari Black 05-20-2018 07:30 PM

they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression

(Tear/tier is a very basic flip. I like the personal touch to it but it didn’t elevate it much. Not bad but I thought it was elementary)

you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky

(Had to look this one up but it checks out. Not bad)

I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note

(Lol I liked this line. Funny and I liked the concept)

The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick

(Decent. Like your opener, the flip is very elementary but I like the personal touch to it)

Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle

(Lmao I had no idea wtf this meant til I YouTubed putting a ship in a bottle. Had no idea that’s how you do it - didn’t care to know either lol but whatever - learn something new every day. Good line though. The flip works perfect)

how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder

(Cool closer. Once again the personal touch elevated the bar. One or two more tie ins coulda helped made it hit even harder.)




My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond

(This was pretty good. The minnow wp was clever. Punch didn’t hit that hard as hard to me but still a good line.)

Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air

(Took a knee on this bar Kaepernick style to protest Zelph brutalizing niggas. This wasnt too crazy to me but solid. The phrases ‘wave the flag’ ‘star spangled banner’ and ‘in air’ didn’t really have a tie in...like there was no second meaning that tied into shooting Enbombz. I didn’t like the concept though and that’s a solid name flip. This line landed imo)

Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan

(I liked this. The wordplay was good, the punch was there, and all the subtle tie ins made this a good line.)

This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm

(This is good writing. The reference might be too obscure but then ‘light box session’, and ‘end to sleep’ flip is pretty good.)

Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s

(I didn’t catch this reference.)

Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat

(En doors was a pretty slick name flip/wp and you set up the punch well)


Excellent battle hear. Two good pens for on display. Enbombz had the better and harsher angles and I thought your personals hit a little harder because of that. Inf’s angles weren’t as harsh and were more on the humorous side. However, inf had the better pen imo. His wp and punches just came off more polished and clever. Imo the deciding factor was Infs punches just landed harder.

Mvgt: Inf

GUDELJ 05-21-2018 05:15 AM

they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression
alright
you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g
Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John Krazinsky
wasnt feelin
I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro
"I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note
idk why but I really liked this, nice. I like how you executed it a lot
The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid
Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick
decent
Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled
I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle
ive read this like 50 different times and I still don’t get it. 1950’s olde English reference or something?
how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order
What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder
isreal wordplay is too played you know that, but the flip is decent and gives this some credit


Vs



My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop
Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond
min owe doesn’t sound like men owe. Reach here
Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair..
Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air
ok good
Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph
My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan
alright good
This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em..
1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm
nah I’m not looking this shit up
Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me..
Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s
lol decent at best
Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see
Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat
it works but I find it corny tbh


Really close match here. After reading a few times I gotta go with Enbombz for that suicide note line. Shit was great. Good battle.

Vote: UNDECIDED BUT LEANING TOWARSS ENBOMBZ

Geno 05-21-2018 09:15 AM

So..
Enbombz had a cool story type diss going here. A little diff then im uses to. Thought that misdirectes some of his punches though. I mean i get what you were doing but it led the ands astray imo

Inf had more to the point punches and thought his shit was a lot more dirext. This was close though imo enB had a dope verse it just wasnt enough.

V/inf


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