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Hush 09-20-2018 09:42 PM

Semis; Blue Bayou vs Destroyer - Blue wins
 
Due Friday night

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@Blue Bayou @Destroyer

Blue Bayou 09-21-2018 02:16 PM

whenever ur ready friend

Destroyer 09-21-2018 06:22 PM

first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?
I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?
i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces
& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around
let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head

Hush 09-21-2018 07:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife
lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma
kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid
seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral
AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship


Big Bolo 09-22-2018 08:40 AM

Blue

i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife

Decent

lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma

Hype ur persona / Mike in a coma does not rhyme for me, don't like this

kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid

Cool here

seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral

Ok

AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship

Decent


Des

first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?

Decent

I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?

Ok

i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces

Not bad

& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around

Decent here

let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head

Not really sure what happened here


Not sure if these verses were rushed because of the concept of this little tourney but they seemed rushed, nothing really standing out from either verse really both had rhyming issues but maybe with an accent the persona/coma could work but des just didn't seem to even try to rhyme imo idk was pretty even overall I'm giving this one to blue, feel he has lotb with the Wendy's line

Score 09-22-2018 09:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 702269)
first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?

fire


I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?

not feeling the wp here

i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces

not bad


& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around

eh


let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head

idk. ok i suppose

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife

LOL


lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma

idgi


kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid

seens wendys a lot, but seen it as "when deez" as in when these never as
"when D's" makes a bit fresher, this is solid

seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral

dope


AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship

nah

cool lil battle, blue got it tho. des seems burntout. that barcotic bar was lolz tho lol

blue

~RustyGunZ~ 09-22-2018 08:47 PM

@Cashius @bleak @Jabari Black @Ryno @Killing Spree

could we get some more votes?

~RustyGunZ~ 09-22-2018 08:51 PM

first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?

ok

I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?

what?

i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces

cool

& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around

cool

let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head

no

vs

i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife

mm a little forced to me but ok

lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma

lol ok

kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid

seen when deez lines, ok personal

seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral

lmao dope

AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship

awful

cool battle, both had a bar that really sucked otherwise cool but blue was more consistent and had lotb

v/bb

Ryno 09-22-2018 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 702269)
first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?
i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces
& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around



i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife
kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid
seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral

tie in quotes but blue had the heavier hits and personals.

v/bb

Kill Spree 09-22-2018 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knucklehead (Post 702561)
@Cashius @bleak @Jabari Black @Ryno @Killing Spree

could we get some more votes?

I’ll hit everything tomorrow

Yo @Victor I’ll have my pic tomorrow been busy

Victor. 09-23-2018 09:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 702269)
first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?
....ok
I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?
...no
i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces
....eh
& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around
...eh
let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head
...didn’t rhyme

Not Des best work . Maybe ur forcing it right now bro


Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife
...ok
lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma
...eh lol
kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid
...ok
seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral
...ok
AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship
...eh


Blue way more consistent and creative here


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