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Windu Tuako vs. Touché Guerrero - Touché wins

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Due this Friday 11:59 PM
@Touche Guerrero

This is my check*

I'll write my verse tonight. It will be long bar fyi.

Ooooooo

Let me guess

Something about a nigger

I have esp

This fool writes sugar glass bottle bars...not one shard'll hurt! I'll make him taste defeat like bruce lee leaving O'Hara earthed!!
His cycle punch was more played than a starter shirt!! That shit so crude...it wouldn't even be fly in the past like the saqarra bird!!!
If we see T holding iron it's Tony Stark with the heat, he's unarmed but I'm a fucking star with mystique!
Cuz the one Tou punch that's bar of the week, was written by me, when I was still part of the league!!!
If u ever sell seats I'll lucha & leave a ugly bruise!! Guerrero couldn't make a splash if he turns to Eddy...then does his move!!
Bitch won't blast gats he's too scared about the blood he'd lose, so If we say this good guy sneaks with tools on 'em...then he's wearing chucky's shoes!!!
He picked a Star Wars avy to shadow me like a flood light!! This lil man washed up & over the heel like some scrubbed mikes
Like pass rushers I'll go in Tou pocket without hollering thug life, And leave Rero leaking like hoes with negative blood types!!!
See I'm hot off the top brainstorming acid rain to scorch ya!, I don't son gays so for you ...the term's changed to daughtered!!
He ass fucks men aggressively then their wangs are tortured, and if they got wood...he put his face on it like the angry orchard!!!

Please..

i've got killas..they'll flip triggas for bucks, come n see bitch
cuz once I flip a profit..my goons'll take you out quicker than he did
bro Che got the elements..Tuako? shit watch me leave that man bitter
this ain't a cartoon..but watch me put my hands around Wind like the last air bender
i only fucks with hoes..that marriage shit is for the chumps
only time you tie the knot on chicks..is when there bound together in the trunk
ya bars are just through..see im like brees, u've got it misunderstood
but Tuako? the way you take down losses..ndamukong suh could retire for good
i sucker hoes to give me top..they do it clean like a pro no slob
if a bitch gives you head..it's off the turnbuckle signature of Chris Benoit

Windu

Opener ..noooo ..not a defeat line....noooooo

Saquarra bird ..fly in the past. Kind of obscure mythological reference. Not that effective. YOU WUDNT BE FLY IN THE PAST IF U WERE A SAQUARRA BIRD. blah

Ok the next couplet is where it started to pick up.

One tou punch was dope. I like that

Likewise with guerrero /splash. That was dope

Chucky shoes was creative but corny as fuck.

Rare-o = passable. Not huge on segmented nps..specially in this instance

Thas like doin a np on the uaoko in ur name.

Angry orchard= ehhhhhhh

I didnt address this but alot of those setups were cringeworthy js

Touche

Opener kind of run of the mill mention last guy to beat u type line eh

Air bender= dope

Tie the knot played as fuck

Take down losses is nice too. Relevant

Closer is eh ok

2 quotables each

Lotb= equal

Windu had the worst misses though.

And the setups were just rhyming for the sake of rhyming

Daughtered for ex.

Close battle

V/ Touche

Profit ...suh
Vs
Orchard

Win u could be dope. Just adjust your style 2014. U have a lot of potential but touch got it with more condensed topics

V Touch

See I'm hot off the top brainstorming acid rain to scorch ya!, I don't son gays so for you ...the term's changed to daughtered!!
He ass fucks men aggressively then their wangs are tortured, and if they got wood...he put his face on it like the angry orchard!!!

vs

i've got killas..they'll flip triggas for bucks, come n see bitch
cuz once I flip a profit..my goons'll take you out quicker than he did
bro Che got the elements..Tuako? shit watch me leave that man bitter
this ain't a cartoon..but watch me put my hands around Wind like the last air bender
i only fucks with hoes..that marriage shit is for the chumps
only time you tie the knot on chicks..is when there bound together in the trunk
ya bars are just through..see im like brees, u've got it misunderstood
but Tuako? the way you take down losses..ndamukong suh could retire for good

wins verse only had 1 bar i could find that incorporated the setup with the closer. the longbar shit hurt him in this regard bc the randomness of the references in each bar ruined whatever concepts he had

red won off a solid outing

mvgt red