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ACTIVATE SELF 07-09-2019 04:25 AM

Nothing to think about
 
I want to read something that causes psychedelic effects
Mind bending, altering my perspective of the u-and-eye-verse
Pluck the divine strings of change, release the frequency from which we came
A person: a vehicle in which sound moves through
Is it true
Am eye hue-man?
Depends on the view
Cause my blue and your blue can never be disproved
Mood: how I feel when I’m in tuned with the universal melody
Heavenly
Devilish
Counterintuitive concepts
That consume logic
Defy reason
Yet give meaning to life
I’ve been meaning to write
New commandments
1. Be free
2. Reject fear
3. All things are possible
4. Lend an ear
5. Your subconscious is Gospel
6. Believe in magic
7. Nothing is real
8. Time is > than money
9. Stop paying bills
10. Rebel, at all cost
After the fall comes death, but rebirth is certain
I know you, like I, have been hurting
Desperately in search of God
Where is he/she?
Got a mirror?
Things couldn’t be clearer
Vampiric reflections are not a thing
Just a social construct...like racism
The hate you give
You may receive ten fold
So be bold in the face of....
Never mind you’ll burn that bridge when you cross it
I am not clever
No, I’m just a single flaming feather lighting fires in Egypt
The Phoenix rises
Please be advised if
You really wish to fly
You must first learn to glide, Ic
The Sun is not your son
Respected it
Mother Earth is not your trash bin
Protect it
Her...
Oh, you know what I mean
Fuck it....

ACTIVATE SELF 07-13-2019 08:19 PM

Well...

Exis 07-14-2019 07:19 AM

Sorry can't quote as I'm on my pathetic phone...Thoght your probably first 8 lines were dope, You have this awesome ability to use words with imagery that really resonates fam...Your intellect is second to none...

Really apologize for not bein' able to highlight parts I wanted ;/

God bless...

Vel 07-18-2019 06:00 PM

damn I liked your word selection and loved the imagery and the whole omniscient feeling of this piece. I'll definitely be looking for more of your word. dope stuff man.

Maximus 07-20-2019 02:37 PM

wtf, this is hella dope.. liked it alot man

sral 07-20-2019 03:53 PM

Isn’t this old?

I think I fed this already.

Scar 07-25-2019 11:37 PM

Quote:

After the fall comes death but rebirth is certain
I know you, like I, have been hurting
Desperately in search of God
Where is he/she?
Got a mirror?
not sure if you meant for it to be but that was last part was gangsta as fuck man lulz

ACTIVATE SELF 08-06-2019 01:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL (Post 744621)
Isn’t this old?

I think I fed this already.

Yes, sir. You did.

Thank you for the read/feed ppls. It’s much appreciated.

ACTIVATE SELF 10-06-2021 11:54 PM

Just a thought


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