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Cred 02-16-2018 01:09 PM

Lyric Olympics: Schadenfreude [c] vs Orc SWAGNFLOW (ORC WINS)
 
Where the winner/ champion decides the following week’s format.

Rules:
Participants will get an invite via PM and must respond within 24 hours or I’m moving on to the next.

This will all take place in the discussion forum. Matches, verses and votes.

If you no-show you’ll be banned from the Discussion forum. NO EXCUSES. You accept this when you agree to battle.

Votes should have a brief explanation but I’ll take what we can get to keep things moving.

Line limit is 20, 16 minimum (but i'm flexible)
First to 5 votes (must win by two)


Verses due Wed at 12am ET.
Votes due by Friday at 12am ET.



Format champion chose: SWAG & FLOW

@Orc @Schadenfreude

Schadenfreude 02-22-2018 08:43 PM

It's Cashius-style 16..lol
 
S’Levels to this shit, your ceiling’s my floor board. Want war? Price tag’s on ya head, guess what ya in store for.
Cold aim left a cold frame, flame out the cold bore. Reel lines for ya dame, chain hang like a gold lure.
Cap’t Save Em pick ya cape up, ya fit for the caper. I’d break her, dog train her.. still won’t hit a bitch w/ the paper.
Nerd’s broad lil perv jaws caught every drop like trust fall. Served raw, while the 2 ‘tween his legs getting curve balled.
Poster boy for these fags, the hate ain’t debatable..Yo whole life story’s trash, ya bio degradable.
Fag it’s futile, paramedics have to bag ya noodle, my cruel rule’ll go from bad to feudal..
Biggest Wesson let fire off..30 mag gets brutal, get the message as the iron draws - Magna Doodle.
I pursue to plying thru all the fanboys who riding you, so dope, I murder any prospect they Len Bias to.
God status undefinable.. need belief? I am proof. It was Me, death & taxes, We denied the Boof.
You a fag, ya fem..you can play that act w/ them, but I know you couldn’t stand for shit as an acronym.
Comp brings forth clowns, straight up whoring. I’m the Man ten toes down.. still a leg up on ‘em.
My intensity flares soon as I sense victims is near, blind rage, stick is been squared, guiding Me to the spot, I’m vision impaired.
Bitch Slapper, night before had yo Mom, give her the dick after.. way she ran w/ my cum, call her a kidnapper.
Ain’t time for my demise, don’t bet on this shit-packer, ‘stead spend your Pennywise, cuz I've got the IT factor.
I’m your Dad & your Boss.. your legacy’s next. Be a Man, take a loss, let the jealousy rest,
Realize what ya rhymes cost, even the best’ll meet death. Bitch is scared of seeing them lines crossed - pregnancy test.

...BODY.

Orc 02-23-2018 03:36 AM

It's the Tsar with these quotes,

I'll rip apart a Hero just to arm the Heat scope. Sparkkk til he's smoke. Mark the beast's throat.
How this Spar gone be dope?! it's ORC vs Darker Ego times every Bar that he's Wrote
I'm at Benihana with ya Baby Momma dressed as Master Chief in Heavy Armour
I SHOULD clip the snaggle-teeth Manatee witha magazine, but fuuuck it I'm a steady charmer
This is Big Baby gone mad, Schad killed in a second when the FINISH HIM beckons
The Switchblade is on hand but the Kick game is Hwoarang if we bringing that Tekken
I'm in Vegas sippin' with a thot like Mel B. Insane at spitting, my veins are different
As hotttt as Hell be, man like Thomas Shelby with the Razor hidden & the Gauge for gripping
Praise the women, cuz I'm stillll stronger than Killmonger with the Double Blades
&&&I've been Heel longer than a Summer day but my Steel somber as a Judges wake
The GOD flows sick: I'll bring all manner of pain like Sandor Clegane the sickest version
I had the hollows picked.. but you 'already got those Tips' when I fixed your wording
This is BANANAS... The clip too. Got the Hammer equipped to damage the kids crew
You'd need Ravishing Rick Rude, a Panther, a Schitzu, a Gat and like Six dudes just to FATHOM the slick moves
The fandom's legit, true. How sick can a kid be!? Vicious & filthy when moving the right hand
A Shooter with nice tan, even Richard Kuklinski wish he could pinch me, I'm cooler than Iceman

The Ruler is tight, DAMN...

Orc 02-23-2018 05:42 AM

@Hollywood @Artifice @King Karaoke @Arch. @brokenhal0 @Half Wit It @Adonis @Argh @King Ra. @Adonis @dyedinthewool @PiE @Pent uP @Frank @Certain @Vulgar @Dagel @butler @Merc @KBomb @Mqql x godsgrqndmistqke @Krucial Th1rt3en@Mercules @Tettris @Bender @CtrlF4 @Tic @KwaL!ty @murda sho @Drift @Creeps @RudeBoy @hotdogvendorman @Supernova @SiK @Axe @Utmost @tyler @SCRYPT @Cryogen @I4Ni @TRON @Black Mask @Fig @Zen @Cope @Meth @Plethora @Boredom @Sebastian Brawl @Apex @Concepz @Shank sinatra @megatron @DLB @Clockwise @151 @namesake @Mael @Sintro @Decibel
@Fart @K KiLLaH @john hensley @AV 12 @Seanzo @SuckaFreeCashier @Free @JOBone @CBA @Greed @Balanced @Chemist @Rugged @Seanz @fraze @Spoken @Junto @Chef @Concrete @MMLP @Jay Welsh@Requiem @King @Defiant @E Tha Real @SMaSH @Larkin @Unfukwitable @Choice Wordz @Profit @Ugh @Nigma @Vlad @Lenox @Plot @Gunplay @Maximus @Ender @Erron Black @Sunny @Basic M @Facts MuhSheen @DynamiCz @Immolate @Bobby Bigelow @LaughingStalk6 @Innovator @Hush @Cred @King Karaoke @WRATH @Habitat @Zelph @For Battling @Ghost1 @Vulgar @Resin M-I-C @JShazo @The Kurgan @MFtastick @SonnyDaze @kungfugrip @Fracture @Joe Metts @Moe Jetts @Frank Metts @Barcotic @ill nik-A @Lotto Smirk @BROKE LESNAR @Chyeahhh!!! @Jay Welsh @Amen @veritas @bleak @Infiltration @Aero @Razah @Useless @KempoMRK @Cimmerian @trap @Pinot Grij @Witty @2tripple0 @Mr. J @Joe Boston @Letterman @fresh @Genocide @Nick James @Blue Bayou @Knux @ALIEN @Junto @Incredible @SuckaFreeCashier @thatguy @Plot @Ronin @Victor. @Zuch @Kenny the OG @Og smokinstein @Rude @Sammy @Lyriscologist @JESODIST @Elemental P @Problumatic @ACTIVATE SELF @Darker Ego @Sharp @Split Eight @Muff @Sn00p @cousin heat @Paradigm @Dominate @Richcorey @Camp Bell @namix @ZuLou @Strikta @Answer @defcon_5 @Toil @Alvin Karpis @Suthaveli @TeckNeek @whitey @Killing Spree @Barcotic @Captain Neckbeard @Cool @Captain Obvious @jilti @Bomb Bard @BoloEdge @Knux

Nick James 02-23-2018 06:34 AM

I'll rip apart a Hero just to arm the Heat scope. Sparkkk til he's smoke. Mark the beast's throat.
How this Spar gone be dope?! it's ORC vs Darker Ego times every Bar that he's Wrote
I'm at Benihana with ya Baby Momma dressed as Master Chief in Heavy Armour
This is BANANAS... The clip too. Got the hammer equipped to damage the kids crew
You'd need Ravishing Rick Rude, a Panther, a Schitzu, a Gat and like Six dudes just to FATHOM the slick moves
The fandom's legit, true. How sick can a kid be!? Vicious & filthy when moving the right hand
A Shooter with nice tan, Even Richard Kuklinski wish he could pinch me, I'm cooler than Iceman


vs


Bitch Slapper, night before had yo Mom, give her the dick after.. way she ran w/ my cum, call her a kidnapper.
Ain’t time for my demise, don’t bet on this shit-packer, ‘stead spend your Pennywise, cuz I've got the IT factor.
I’m your Dad & your Boss.. your legacy’s next. Be a Man, take a loss, let the jealousy rest,fat wife
Realize what ya rhymes cost, even the best’ll meet death. Bitch is scared of seeing them lines crossed - pregnancy test.
You a fag, ya fem..you can play that act w/ them, but I know you couldn’t stand for shit as an acronym.
Comp brings forth clowns, straight up whoring. I’m the Man ten toes down.. still a leg up on ‘em.


this is actually hard to vote on. beginnin to wish I wulda stayed away from this lol. schaud.. I wasnt feelin much from the beginnin but towards the end u got pretty gritty n I fucks wit that. u finished strong. orc u had sum gems all the way thru.. u may have fall off a lil bit in the middle but u also ended pretty strong. I esp liked this shit rite here..

This is BANANAS... The clip too. Got the hammer equipped to damage the kids crew
You'd need Ravishing Rick Rude, a Panther, a Schitzu, a Gat and like Six dudes just to FATHOM the slick moves


I think u tipped me to vote in ur favor with that. decidin factor in this one

vote - orc

Ghost1 02-23-2018 10:45 AM

yo this shit is so fire lol.

im try to vote later but just wanted to voice im digging this from both sides.

Amen 02-23-2018 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude (Post 643866)
S’Levels to this shit, your ceiling’s my floor board. Want war? Price tag’s on ya head, guess what ya in store for.
2 syllable scheming here. Nothing good here.
Cold aim left a cold frame, flame out the cold bore. Reel lines for ya dame, chain hang like a gold lure.
Cap’t Save Em pick ya cape up, ya fit for the caper. I’d break her, dog train her.. still won’t hit a bitch w/ the paper.
This was ok but thescheme was awkward when reading. Tried to do to much rather then let it flow fluently. I enjoy the inner scheme switching attempts in most cases, however here I did not.
Nerd’s broad lil perv jaws caught every drop like trust fall. Served raw, while the 2 ‘tween his legs getting curve balled.
Poster boy for these fags, the hate ain’t debatable..Yo whole life story’s trash, ya bio degradable.
I fucks with this one. Scheme switching again could have been better with more of an ABBA type of scheme...
Fag it’s futile, paramedics have to bag ya noodle, my cruel rule’ll go from bad to feudal..
Biggest Wesson let fire off..30 mag gets brutal, get the message as the iron draws - Magna Doodle.
This was ok. More of a fluid flow here...
I pursue to plying thru all the fanboys who riding you, so dope, I murder any prospect they Len Bias to.
God status undefinable.. need belief? I am proof. It was Me, death & taxes, We denied the Boof.
Eh.. Wasn't liking this much...
You a fag, ya fem..you can play that act w/ them, but I know you couldn’t stand for shit as an acronym.
Comp brings forth clowns, straight up whoring. I’m the Man ten toes down.. still a leg up on ‘em.
Flow was ok, nothing impressive with syllables or anything like that... Still on that 2, 3 maybe 4 top syllables
My intensity flares soon as I sense victims is near, blind rage, stick is been squared, guiding Me to the spot, I’m vision impaired.
Bitch Slapper, night before had yo Mom, give her the dick after.. way she ran w/ my cum, call her a kidnapper.
Ain’t time for my demise, don’t bet on this shit-packer, ‘stead spend your Pennywise, cuz I've got the IT factor.
I’m your Dad & your Boss.. your legacy’s next. Be a Man, take a loss, let the jealousy rest,
Realize what ya rhymes cost, even the best’ll meet death. Bitch is scared of seeing them lines crossed - pregnancy test.
Preg test was dope. Bars before that were light... Didn't enjoy much.

...BODY.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 643931)
It's the Tsar with these quotes,

I'll rip apart a Hero just to arm the Heat scope. Sparkkk til he's smoke. Mark the beast's throat.
How this Spar gone be dope?! it's ORC vs Darker Ego times every Bar that he's Wrote
Nice smooth flow...
I'm at Benihana with ya Baby Momma dressed as Master Chief in Heavy Armour
I SHOULD clip the snaggle-teeth Manatee witha magazine, but fuuuck it I'm a steady charmer
This was good, and again smooth fluid flow.
This is Big Baby gone mad, Schad killed in a second when the FINISH HIM beckons
The Switchblade is on hand but the Kick game is Hwoarang if we bringing that Tekken
Multi scheming - a lot smoother then SHAD's attempts.. He was trying to do to much with his flow - kind of threw it off IMO.
I'm in Vegas sippin' with a thot like Mel B. Insane at spitting, my veins are different
As hotttt as Hell be, man like Thomas Shelby with the Razor hidden & the Gauge for gripping
Again, inners were cleaner and the flow was fluid. This was nice.
Praise the women, cuz I'm stillll stronger than Killmonger with the Double Blades
&&&I've been Heel longer than a Summer day but my Steel somber as a Judges wake
Tough.
The GOD flows sick: I'll bring all manner of pain like Sandor Clegane the sickest version
I had the hollows picked.. but you 'already got those Tips' when I fixed your wording
Tough.
This is BANANAS... The clip too. Got the Hammer equipped to damage the kids crew
You'd need Ravishing Rick Rude, a Panther, a Schitzu, a Gat and like Six dudes just to FATHOM the slick moves
Dope.
The fandom's legit, true. How sick can a kid be!? Vicious & filthy when moving the right hand
A Shooter with nice tan, even Richard Kuklinski wish he could pinch me, I'm cooler than Iceman
Nice.

The Ruler is tight, DAMN...

v/Orc - much cleaner flow and better usage of schemes. There were a few bars where SHAD, IMO - tried to do too much by cramming syllables in and to me it fucked up the fluid flow he COULD've had. Orc's multi schemes transitioned nicely from ABBA TO ALL AAAA to ABAB. He executed all of his schemed fluently with dope concepts. He gets my vote here. Shad had some nice concepts - he just fucked up his flow - and you can see I lost it a few times, especially towards the end.

ill nik-A 02-23-2018 01:13 PM

Both dope. Both my niggs

But I got Orc with a smoother flow and harder bars. Still Schad to me had wicked schemes. The format through me off but still managed to read it as intended.

Good stuff guys
I’ll work on your next opponent soon

i eat shit 2018 02-23-2018 06:47 PM

I hate voting shit gets all political,
but I want to support the site so
I will.

Useless 02-23-2018 10:37 PM

I feel like shad got away from the swag n flow about half way thru n was concentrating on dissing orc instead of hyping himself


S’Levels to this shit, your ceiling’s my floor board. Want war? Price tag’s on ya head, guess what ya in store for.
Cold aim left a cold frame, flame out the cold bore. Reel lines for ya dame, chain hang like a gold lure.
--- thought chain hang like a gold lure was fire. Didn't like u said cold a million times. First line is aite to Me, good tie ins n flips....
Cap’t Save Em pick ya cape up, ya fit for the caper. I’d break her, dog train her.. still won’t hit a bitch w/ the paper.
--- I like this cuz u dissing him n upping urself at the same time. Dog train her/Hit a bitch with the paper is dope imo......
Nerd’s broad lil perv jaws caught every drop like trust fall.
--- nice. Second part is u dissing him pretty much.......

The rest was a battle verse imho....


Vs


Orc only had like 2 lines I wasn't feeling so he gets this. Dope battle tho frfr


V. Orc

Darker Ego 02-23-2018 10:54 PM

Orc from start to finish consistent with the flows while Shad went absurd with the curses
Multies and punches were structured better by Orc now and he also packed more into the verses
Both were tied in the complexity and personals area thy had plenty and executed beautifully
So in the end its up to whose verse could be read aloud more fluently
Shad`s puns were predictable while Orc delivered them all over the place
No doubt the brother`s an ace yet they both entertained the crowd
A know this Cause before reading we blazed a herb
An now so glad to hear the words
You both transformed rhymes into blades and swords
Great job masters of the battle in text yall unravelled a hex
Shad you are a legend of this time but you were outshined
Orc if a had a studio you`d definately be signed
Vote is clear no need to state name cause you both have the same fame
Keep playing the brain game

Saint 02-23-2018 11:05 PM

Reall good battle.

Schade:
Bitch Slapper, night before had yo Mom, give her the dick after.. way she ran w/ my cum, call her a kidnapper.
Ain’t time for my demise, don’t bet on this shit-packer, ‘stead spend your Pennywise, cuz I've got the IT factor.
I’m your Dad & your Boss.. your legacy’s next. Be a Man, take a loss, let the jealousy rest,
Realize what ya rhymes cost, even the best’ll meet death. Bitch is scared of seeing them lines crossed - pregnancy test.

Cap’t Save Em pick ya cape up, ya fit for the caper. I’d break her, dog train her.. still won’t hit a bitch w/ the paper.
Nerd’s broad lil perv jaws caught every drop like trust fall. Served raw, while the 2 ‘tween his legs getting curve balled.

Orc:

The Switchblade is on hand but the Kick game is Hwoarang if we bringing that Tekken

had the hollows picked.. but you 'already got those Tips' when I fixed your wording
This is BANANAS... The clip too. Got the Hammer equipped to damage the kids crew
You'd need Ravishing Rick Rude, a Panther, a Schitzu, a Gat and like Six dudes just to FATHOM the slick moves

I'll rip apart a Hero just to arm the Heat scope. Sparkkk til he's smoke. Mark the beast's throat.
How this Spar gone be dope?! it's ORC vs Darker Ego times every Bar that he's Wrote

^^ were some other dope parts too.
I think if it were a standard batt I'd edge to Schad
But here w/ fluidity & wording orc got it imo
I read thru it a lil smoother & it engaged me more
Schad had some nice lines... but some schemes were stretched at times, possibly bc of reformatting iono.
But, in a s&f match.

V -- Orc

brokenhal0 02-24-2018 03:13 AM

Schadenfreude

Orc 02-24-2018 07:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration (Post 644102)
dead

You best edit that to a vote!!!

Nick James 02-24-2018 08:08 AM

that nigga voted with a verse

LMFAO

Chyeahhh!!! 02-24-2018 03:00 PM

he speaks....
 
man this shit is tough to vote on, Orc's shit was tuff enuff, swagged the whole shit and the flow was butter, badass lines through out, even the setups were closely chosen and worded superb . Shade on the other hand had a more unorthodox approach, the structure multi mixed with inner lacing rhyme schemes , almost infringing on a longbar format that was executed beautifully and some slickness peppered through out. Both matched braggadocio in their own right. Shade has more of a swag n flow style I fuck with while Orc's shit can't be denied.

can't really vote honestly it's almost a tie in my eyes.


good match ya'll

Lenox 02-27-2018 01:04 AM

Vote orc


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