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jilti 08-21-2014 09:56 PM

Defiant vs Jilti Jilti wins
 
Due this weekend match lines of first to drop
@Defiant check in

Defiant 08-21-2014 09:57 PM

Check

jilti 08-25-2014 04:27 AM

target merged. pounded so hard it hurts to fart or burp
cuz the way dudes get up in Antacid prolly cause heartburn
most of us have a WCW, his crushes are sweaty and larger
we all know they give DDP. he just calls them wrestling partners
cant see him goin hard on a beat since he sucks with keys
if anyone throwing hands up while Hearing Def, they must be
talk is cheap. u can drop a CD and call it a hot release
Brochure it is, and you couldn't even give out a copy for free
15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats
you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks



10 lines @Defiant your turn

Defiant 08-28-2014 06:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 390747)
Hispanics are up there too, ijs



I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit
So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it
Your girl is using u, the facts she so beyond grim
if u see jilt on his big day, it's trolling n she won't actually marry him
You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range
So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change
If you're with people rest assured it's all dicks
He's even the 'Linchpin' of a social group, it's his plan of attack to rape several chicks
Ima crush u faggot, I wanna see u fret n plea prick
if u Harbour any ill thoughts,il throw u in 1 before u think of getting sea sick

Paradigm 09-05-2014 04:34 PM

Links please @Defiant

jilti 09-09-2014 10:52 AM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?goto=newpost&t=91289

El Muffin 09-09-2014 04:13 PM

jilti

opener was nice. def like the wp

Rofl @DDP..that shit leaned me

hearing def was abv avf

Brochure was nice

closer was eh



DEFIANT
opener was ok
trolling... nah
Noteworthy LOTB
linchpin..nah
closer..ok


v/jilti

consistency

Blanco Bishop 09-13-2014 11:03 PM

Def had linchpin n note worthy.

Jill had brochure, ddp, indy


Close but jill was smoother in his wording plus funnier.
Good showing from both.

V jill

En Sabah Nur 10-16-2014 05:28 AM

15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats
you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks

vs

I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit
So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it
You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range
So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change

jilti had lotb. misses mostly due to originality of flipped concept and laziness of the np's. def edged this out with more consistency.

mvgt defiant

Defiant 10-28-2014 12:14 AM

2-1 uppin

Sharp 10-29-2014 05:53 PM

target merged. pounded so hard it hurts to fart or burp
cuz the way dudes get up in Antacid prolly cause heartburn
ok
most of us have a WCW, his crushes are sweaty and larger
we all know they give DDP. he just calls them wrestling partners
ok
cant see him goin hard on a beat since he sucks with keys
if anyone throwing hands up while Hearing Def, they must be
noooo played
talk is cheap. u can drop a CD and call it a hot release
Brochure it is, and you couldn't even give out a copy for free
clever
15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats
you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks
ok



I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit
So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it
alright
Your girl is using u, the facts she so beyond grim
if u see jilt on his big day, it's trolling n she won't actually marry him
eh
You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range
So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change
took me a sec cause note isn't american lingo but this totally works
If you're with people rest assured it's all dicks
He's even the 'Linchpin' of a social group, it's his plan of attack to rape several chicks
ok
Ima crush u faggot, I wanna see u fret n plea prick
if u Harbour any ill thoughts,il throw u in 1 before u think of getting sea sick
not feeling



good battle, thought it was close but jilti edged it on consistency

v/jilti

Defiant 11-05-2014 01:17 AM

3-1 up

Certain 11-05-2014 01:37 AM

jilti: I didn't like using Defiant to become Ant, but that was a clever line. The DDP line was terribly played, as are almost all 1990s/2000s wrestling lines you can imagine. "Hearing Def" was weak wording and an obvious concept. But "Brochure" was new to me, and the closer was pretty solid.

Defiant: Your wording was uncharacteristically sloppy here, particularly on the wedding line. The cleaning the table concept was lame for a Latino punch. "Noteworthy" was OK, sort of like "Brochure" in that I'm not sure I've heard it and not sure why it wouldn't have been used before. The linchpin line didn't work to me because lynchings are murders, not rapes. But the last line was the worst, ridiculously played and a bad way to end it. It would have taken a really good line to win there, though.

Vote: jilti


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