WEEK SIX DISCUSSION
Last week was hell let’s make this one better, okay?
Halfway through the regular season |
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can we make this a slobber knocker, I don't wanna just do 40 lines for a champ match, I been doing 60 this whole time kind of a let down to go from that to 40 lines.
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It's a champ match brothers should be able to go all out.
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Writing it is one thing, but 3x60 lines is a lot more than 3x40 for people to vote on. See what Adverse wants to do, I'll go with whatever.
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60 is fine with me, perhaps keep the 60 line limit in contenders/championship matches and drop everything else down to 40? The vote was super close
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Can somebody aside from myself, Eviction, and Dominate go to this website, filter for ten letter words and generate? That will be our topic for the week (if you get something super lame just click again)
https://randomwordgenerator.com/ |
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How about picture prompts for next week? Those used to be insane and got everyone’s juices flowing |
Alright guys let's try a 60 limit out then and see how we go
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Battles are up, if I missed anything please don’t hesitate to let me know
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60 is the sweet spot at 40 I'm like oh shit I got to end this now.
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the topic provincial are you meaning the verb or noun, or that's up to us lol?
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@Frank: Now that I can speak more. The stuff in italics was the character reminiscing/thinking, me mentioning it as style points is me basically saying that it shouldn't be needed. What wasn't in italic is present time. There's 3 stories going on, basically. Present time (stamding at the pier considering suicide and eventually coming home), thinking/reminiscing about life/what made the character decide against suicide and the time in Dahab. I should have exchanged the stuff you felt was filler to highlight this in some way instead. Should also have spent the opening couplet to highlight where I was, that would have taken away the confusion with Norwegian Ocean/Dahab. In short: I should have spent more time on it overall, which I should have done with basically all my verses so far this league.
Edit: Thanks a lot for feedback/votes, they have been incredibly good all over the board so far this league with exception of a few. I need to get my shit together. |
Still scratching my head over last week if you win by 1 or 20 it’s still a win technically I won that battle and the other guy lost, should have closed it when the tie was decided.
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I hear you eviction, but coming from the mod side is very very difficult, if not utterly impossible to please everyone. Let's not send adverse into an eating frenzy and lose all the collective weight we have lost, which for him and I, is whatever he's lost lol
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I can eat for the both of us
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This entire pizza is in your honor adverse. May it's dough fill us all
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