bored 50
 

They got that elephant’s memory - yall are never forgetting me
so tell em to keep it moving, tap potential kinetically
you light in the field, diracs don’t come w/ negative energy
know how to get a reaction, that's just a question of chemistry
put everything on the table, tell em check it w/ mendeleev
the bulk of my jeans tighter, that means i'm better genetically
those before me passed on - gave me a sense of heredity
That’s why this gift ain’t a surprise - they had it set in the registry
some know what it’s like to pop & some just get a vasectomy
me? I get to Icing - beretta decked with plenty accessories
Concuss ‘em out on the lawn without expressing obscenities
heat pumps every room in your house, its an impressive amenity
whole fam dyin ya arms, like "that's an excellent henna sleeve!"
Those flowers around your home make it look better aesthetically
so furious, flow serious - dead as a Kennedy
of course they shot @ the Lincoln, that's just the president's legacy
gave up on the promised land & manifested a destiny
Go blind looking at The Sun - deflect dissent with celebrities
True religion has more holes than the distressing of denim jeans
been fightin over capital since they set up an embassy @ the center of tel aviv
countin checks from the sheep got ‘em dead asleep, execs invested in feta cheese
if these bars are in bad taste then let em edit the recipe
its the same however you flip it, you can’t correct it symmetrically
Any imitation of me can get burned quick as protesting an effigy
a different type of an animal, i don't descend from the pedigree
Make one call to have u taken out like a professional referee
I don’t hash out for the cash, tell em to check the dispensary
if I fuck w/ a bedroom DJ she's spread together with Stephanie
a monster under the sheets, dick w/ embedded supremacy
i speed date these chicks while taking excessive amphetamines
Antivaxxer took her shot, she tried to message aggressively
Dudes gas her up to get in her mouth, shit’s like the premise of dentistry
I’ll only temp check w/ these hoes if I’m assessing them medically
Called her a piece of shit then swiped so far to the left it offended me
yall looking at the future, give ‘em the message prophetically
On the level, my goals is lofty - platform stems from the mezzanine
catch flights in every direction like the steps in an escher piece
I go through the 4 seasons, no sweat - the pension is evergreen
the people that don't feel it must be developing leprosy
make em drop they arms.. & every other severed extremity
One cut is shreddin your tendons see, quick as ending propensities
All in their hair like people having sex in the 70's
a menace in elementary, not even professors were testing me
wouldn't even try me as a kid when I was arrested at 17
Smacked & robbed a 3rd grader cuz he was dressing as fresh as me
I put myself in his shoes, that’s just me flexing this empathy
Know how to get in they heads, this shit is next to telepathy
Said give me a fortune, teller - she passed the presidents readily
if u in the middle of a banquet the runner ready its cuz ur head is the centerpiece
idk why u thought there'd be something at the end of the credits scene

Multi scheme was fire

Liked henna sleeve and some other clever metas

Props

Dope shit

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don't know why this didn't get more distinction.


a lot of quotables. some times i think it may have gotten tacky but then the next line would just be another smooth transition, with another clever little attachment. the thing here was consistency which is a huge flaw in a lot of writing. you'll see 2-3 good lines then the rest just stumble in, taking away from the luster of the first few. but this was pretty good throughout. i liked the correlation of slang/euphemisms constantly, and being used with words that fit the scheme -(thats the crux of what you did) the flex piece was very cool. some ones made me chuckle, and you actually got a few thoughts across - religion, and the tel aviv reference. antivax gas dentist put together was cool. you can see the flow of your thoughts and the knowledge of things going on in the world to connect it better. really good put together

Dam no idyiot from bb? This must be good

Hello, Answer.

Nice to see you in these neck of the woods; this was quite the impressive display of rhyming; your talent is nice; and I enjoy your writing. Good work on this piece. The punchlines are quite dope as-well. Good work, you're a good rhymer and writer. Nice work, Answer..

Your first 4 lines are just chea, fuckin' awesome...

@Answer
Did you spit this? Practice at all back when you wrote it?

I haven't. YET

Syllables counts look OK at a glance tonight. You're a good writer so I'm making an assumption that it'd work. But even if it's good, I don't know how so many rhymes in a row would sound.

With this many end rhymes there's GOT to be some reaches in there, but, let's just say I'm upping again for the culture and will try it when I'm free Friday night.

*Edit:
That is the long way of saying let's give it the old college try. Shit's dope. don't get me wrong with the "sizing up" above.

Rhyme schemes crazy asf. Had me hooked from the beginning. This the typa shit i enjoy reading. I can pick up the flow in my head and this shit flows smoothly the whole way through. 50 bars same rhyme scheme? I aint never tried that we might have to make it a challenge. Punchlines was fire, rhyme scheme fire. This some top tier shit right here for a “bored just writing” typa post. You did this shit for real.

Creative vs there
The flow so tight

Full of energy

#FREEPALESTINE
whole shit was fire

yoo did you peep the 2v2 joint slyfe and I did?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBarvAGvHiM

Henna sleeve fyeeeee