WK3: Enbombz 1-1 vs. Jabari Black 1-1 - Enbombz WINS!!
 

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@Enbombz @Jabari Black

Check. 12.

Cool.

You try start acting smart with dude i'll spark the tool
try step n i'm taking a knee, that's a protest to your garbage juice
You think you droppin verse of week? making your way to the top?
Nah kid In the line of fire...This body getting in the way of that shot
Its survival of the fittest, when it gets grizzly u prepared for that
Everyone of ya Plays dead as fuck like they trynna survive a bear attack
Put this impostor into check, fuckin revolver to the head
N i'm letting off all 6 black, want problems im solving them with lead,
Faggot think he coppin 10s, but each pic creates an ugly scene
The worst bitches are All Blacks, the line up look like a fucking rugby team
You get real sensitive, ya last bitch hate you n prays you die
Now you can say she's out of bounds..bitch chewed straight through those cable ties

Ext

Potato on the desi...keep the D silent then I’m Django with the toolie/
The ‘clip dropping n-bombs’ quicker than a Tarantino movie/
.38 wit a nickel plate - he’ll be begging for his life when i brandish it/
Barrel to his face...I put the ‘nickel in Bombz mug’ like he panhandling/
Twin glocks’ll send this man scramblin. He don’t want beef when the led spit/
If you try to run, it’ll be two arms behind ya head like ya girl told ya she pregnant/
It can get cruel. Get Burned alive....put the fire to Bombz like a lit fuse/
Even ya chick’s screwed. Now it’s like Hush...cus I ‘fuck around’ n burn ya bitch too/
Im at ya family reunion wit a big tool. If I see ya granny, she’ll get her mug clapped/
Now the coroner’s putting ‘grams in a bag’ like a dub sack/
You and Body Snatcher a team, huh? Well cool, he’ll die next/
I let the deuce pop n two shot’ll leave Bombz on Body like a suicide vest/

You try start acting smart with dude i'll spark the tool
try step n i'm taking a knee, that's a protest to your garbage juice

Lol nice opener

You think you droppin verse of week? making your way to the top?
Nah kid In the line of fire...This body getting in the way of that shot

Nice setup!

Its survival of the fittest, when it gets grizzly u prepared for that
Everyone of ya Plays dead as fuck like they trynna survive a bear attack

Decent......Wait Wait Wait then I reread it! Shit was nasty!

Put this impostor into check, fuckin revolver to the head
N i'm letting off all 6 black, want problems im solving them with lead,

Eh, ok

Faggot think he coppin 10s, but each pic creates an ugly scene
The worst bitches are All Blacks, the line up look like a fucking rugby team

Lmao nice

You get real sensitive, ya last bitch hate you n prays you die
Now you can say she's out of bounds..bitch chewed straight through those cable ties

Nahh b

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Potato on the desi...keep the D silent then I’m Django with the toolie/
The ‘clip dropping n-bombs’ quicker than a Tarantino movie/

Wow! Nice opener

.38 wit a nickel plate - he’ll be begging for his life when i brandish it/
Barrel to his face...I put the ‘nickel in Bombz mug’ like he panhandling/

Lmao I had a panhandling line for next week! Good shit

Twin glocks’ll send this man scramblin. He don’t want beef when the led spit/
If you try to run, it’ll be two arms behind ya head like ya girl told ya she pregnant/

Bad wording on this one!

It can get cruel. Get Burned alive....put the fire to Bombz like a lit fuse/
Even ya chick’s screwed. Now it’s like Hush...cus I ‘fuck around’ n burn ya bitch too/

Ouch! Nice

Im at ya family reunion wit a big tool. If I see ya granny, she’ll get her mug clapped/
Now the coroner’s putting ‘grams in a bag’ like a dub sack/

Very light fam!

You and Body Snatcher a team, huh? Well cool, he’ll die next/
I let the deuce pop n two shot’ll leave Bombz on Body like a suicide vest/

Played on his the bombz flip! But this is nice!

Damn this battle is actually debatable as hell! You both had 2 misses as of what I read! I dead ass may have Jabari by a bar. That Tarentino line was nice, but that punch off Hush chick may have been the battle winner. Thennnn I read Enbombz verse again here and that bear attack line was nasty son! I got to go with Bombz by a hair! Yo @JabariBlack props fam I'm digging your material you be having some fiya! Just have to pick that thin line of whats played and whats not, but you def one I'm watching for! Vote goes to Bombz

V-Bombz

Enbombz

opener-cool,
line of fire. i like that
bear attack. was an interesting play..and fresh. liked
solving. no
all blacks. wtf racist..wasnt feeling the bigotry
closer..nah

first 6 nice,last 6 wtf

jabari

opener,foreseeable n easy play. but its ehh ok. barely
panhandling was pretty cool tho
pregnant visual was cool but approach fumbled
hush/chick was handled nicely though.
grams was a no. that wp is old af too. no pun intended
bombz play on the closer was ehh played to me

2-3 on quotes

its closebut i got enbombz in a nailbiter

v/enbombz

Jab I think ur really getting better in my eyes every week. I hate the backslashes but that's you so do you lol. Anyways I thought the clap shit was handled predictably but directly which is a plus. I think that's the biggest thing u need to improve is unpredictability. While E is a wet blanket w/ no personality, there are still some personals you could have used. Takes away from it a bit when the only personal is about Hush or his tag partner. Did like the Bombz on Body but... predictable. I like ur style tho it's to the point

E u also have a minimalist style, even more so and I like how it reads, very direct and an easy read at that. I never find myself trying to fit syllables into my inner metronome, which helps so much in the harshness of the punch. The plays dead was a good example of a wp that works both ways seamlessly, while maybe a bit played

Nbombs clip
Hush
Conservatively I liked the verse as a whole, these stood out


Bear attack
All blacks
Out of bounds was decent

Taking a knee could be flames but needed a little more visual. Protest to ur garbage juice was not how to end it lol

This was close imo I can see Jabari winning w/ just a tad more but I think Enbombz gets out of here w/ the W

Vote Enbombz in a tight contest

Black came best i seen him an had some coo shit, jus worded it so it was a bit too obvious what punch was an that hurt it alot an turned strong stuff into light jabs. Enbombz came at this nasty to start but tailed off alot near mid end.

openers were stsnd outs to me.hush an panhandling were blacks best. Line of fire an bear attack were bombz

Tight match guys could of gone either way really. Blacks going to pull some upsets soon

Enbombz:

"You try start acting smart with dude i'll spark the tool
try step n i'm taking a knee, that's a protest to your garbage juice"

"Its survival of the fittest, when it gets grizzly u prepared for that
Everyone of ya Plays dead as fuck like they trynna survive a bear attack"

"Faggot think he coppin 10s, but each pic creates an ugly scene
The worst bitches are All Blacks, the line up look like a fucking rugby team"

Jabari Black:

Potato on the desi...keep the D silent then I’m Django with the toolie/
The ‘clip dropping n-bombs’ quicker than a Tarantino movie/"

"It can get cruel. Get Burned alive....put the fire to Bombz like a lit fuse/
Even ya chick’s screwed. Now it’s like Hush...cus I ‘fuck around’ n burn ya bitch too/"


Overall this was a good battle feel like Jabari keeps stepping it up but just keeps getting caught by better opponents. Enbombz knew what he had to do here and felt like he realized that and acted on it well. Both came with some good bars here but MVGT - Enbombz