Killing Spree vs bleak - Killing Spree Wins
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Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux. Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up. Lyrics? on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles. All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya. It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back. When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that. Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features. When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches (Something something shark teeth) Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime. |
His mother is dead....
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Listen.... Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow! Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real |
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Vote - Bleak |
I actually got KS here
Just wasn’t feelin Bleaks formatting of the verse, couple decent lines but nothing crazy KS had some concepts but needs to improve on wording but like the verse better Overall KS wins |
bleak got this , weak lines , and poor rhyme pattern but better den spree filler verse
v-bleak |
Needs more votes
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Listen.... Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave Okay Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood Eh The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face Amusin ex, it's okay wish it hit harder Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion Okay This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow! Eh reaching Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real Pretty good V spree |
Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya Ooook Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux. Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up. Ooook Lyrics? on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles. All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya. Ehh It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back. When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that. Ok Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features. When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches Nah (Something something shark teeth) Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime. Nah Listen.... Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave Ooook Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood Nah The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face Cool Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion Oooook This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow! Ehhh Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real Ooook Ion know this kinda weak battle, nothing stood out or landed extremely hard but overall I got spree edging this with a kinda nice line n a few light jabs vs a few light jabs.. close n really could go either way just felt spree was more aggressive here, while bleak left me with a few bars I felt needed more.. vote spree |
Bleak: I think the format hurt you here, couple decent jabs but yeah the formatting did you no favours and lead to a lot lacking impact for me. You had the twelve car pile up maybe but fizzled out towards the end.
KS: I think a few people slept on the Diaphragm/Die if ram thing but I got it. I see you're quite wordplay focused in your verse, which is good, but maybe throw a few diff attacks rather than just relying on that one thing as a crutch. I noticed Broke does similar, so maybe thats an RB thing now? I dunno. I don't peep there too heavy. Regardless, Killing Spree got this with both consistency and more creativity for me. |
Spree wins 4-2
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