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Incredible 05-21-2018 12:45 PM

WK3: Twodrop 1-1 vs. DynamiCz 0-2 - DynamiCz WINS!!
 
Rules

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  • Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

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@Twodrop @DynamiCz

Twodrop 05-21-2018 08:41 PM

10 good?

DynamiCz 05-21-2018 08:44 PM

Cooley

Twodrop 05-23-2018 06:20 PM

10 ready @DynamiCz

Twodrop 05-23-2018 08:50 PM

ayo,

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage

DynamiCz 05-24-2018 11:48 AM

Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout

GUDELJ 05-24-2018 10:33 PM

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
ok I dig it
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
lol ok
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
had potential but prehistoric birth made it corny
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
nah
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
another one that Sorta had potential but you ended it corny


Vs


Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
ok I don’t think everyone’s gonna get the 17 reference, shit I’m not even sure if I do, I’m assuming you mean Glock 17 so I’ll run with that. Cool line
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
i liked the idea and what you were aiming for but the way you did it was a miss for me
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
nah
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
now this is fire
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
wasnt feelin this


Close battle here. Two drop’s first two were pretty good, but sorta got progressively worse from there. This guy definitely has the right idea and has the concepts on lock, but tends to come off a little corny or super old school with it. Gotta find a way to make them hit harder. DynamiCz has the opener and windsurfing, both of his hits were stronger than Twodrops hits. Windsurfing being LOTB, I’m going with DynamiCz.


Vote Dunamix

Incredible 05-25-2018 12:03 AM

Twodrop:

"Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall"

"In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage"

DynamiCz:

"Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day"

"Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing"

Overall this was a decent battle, felt like Dy didn't come with his full potential here I think he still getting back into it, still thought it was decent overall. Feel like two is getting better though for real, both had a couple solid lines but in the end - MVGT - DynamiCz - overall better verse here. Props on showing and gl going forward.

Blue Bayou 05-25-2018 01:02 PM

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
cool, like this bloodline flip as an attack bar
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
lol, but I did this a while back so it didn't register as much for me
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
nah, dyna-sore been done & done better tbh
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
lol, for a dynamite wp/np this flip was enjoyable enough to be col
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
sorry.... seen it done a few times b4 & theres not enough of a flip her for me


Vs


Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
decent, works for an opener/attack line
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
cool, good tie ins here... dig it
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
I get the connections but it's worded poorly & choppy to me.. okay
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
nicee, like this
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
too many gun/attack bars in a row... this meta is decent



Overall cool short read... Two-drop def has potential and I liked his attempts, unfortunately he really went with the dyna/mic nameplays route & ive seen a lot of them done before.... Dyna had some cool attack lines and creative concepts (tho too many for only 5 bars)... he was a bit more consistent and fresher here so he gets it

Vote - Dynamicz

Joe Boston 05-25-2018 05:56 PM

two

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
dope like the flip great wordplay good tie in off the setup

You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
ok quicky funny basic wp flip been done before

u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
ok see the dynasaur np on him before but this was cool

bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
lmao cool ass wordplay this was creative again good tie in off the setup like how u kept everything connected and relevant to each other
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
like the micz hard nameplay but this could've had more sting factor didn't like how u worded it

Dyna

Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
dope af great metaphore

Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
this had potential I didn't like how u worded it though

Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
again potential but I dislike how u worded it

Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
fucking dope again

You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
ok

well I felt both were pretty much even but dyna had two hard ass punch great sting factor. two had the opener and the dynamite tina bar. I felt Dynamites two hardhitting bars gave him the edge hear.

V/DYnamicz

Amen 05-26-2018 04:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Twodrop (Post 667253)
ayo,

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
This was tough.
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
No.
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
Um, nah... 2004 WP right here and wasn't a fresh enough flip to credit.
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
Concept ok, execution not.
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
OD'd on the NAMEPLAYS. Last 3 bars were NP's - mix it up a little.

Quote:

Originally Posted by DynamiCz (Post 667487)
Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
Meh, ok.
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
Wayyy too wordy for such a basic concept. Keep it simple.
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
Again - extra wordy for what?
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
This was tough.
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
Nah...

DynamiCz got this one, IMO. Hate that every bar is SIMILE, tho lol. Mix it up a bit, dude. I still think he edged this one out. Opener was dece-ok and windsurfing was tough. 2Drops openeer was fire - rest fell flat to me and he OD'd on the NP's lol...

v/DynamiCz

Jabari Black 05-26-2018 08:18 PM

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall

(Pretty good. The punch wasn’t crazy but the tie ins were good. The ‘Orc and Cred’ part didn’t tie in well but everything else tied in nice)

You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me

(Not bad. Quickie is kinda a stretch)

u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth

(I’m not really feeling this one. Dinosaur is too elementary imo)

bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker

(Lol this was funny. Coulda elevated it a bit more if the ‘eat the food’ part had some sort of tie in but I liked it. Good personal angle as well)

In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage

(I like the line but his name would be pronounced Micks and not Mikes. I liked the line but I cant get around that it’s a reach)



Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day

(Lot going on here - in a good way. Two in his drop/convertible is subtle but good writing. Convertible/convert to bull was reachy but I give it leeway cus it was just in the set up. Ditching with 17 was good. Senior skip day was light for the punch but overall the bar hit)


Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer

(Good line. Pretty creative. More subtle tie in - I esp liked the wrong word/hangman flip. Nice line)

Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics

(Okay. This a played concept but cut executed it well for what it’s worth)

Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing

(Nice)

You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout

(Pretty good. The punch wasn’t crazy but all the tie ins elevated it. Didn’t waste a word - that’s good writing)


Good battle. A lot closer than I expected but it was pretty straightforward to judge imo. Both verses were very punch heavy and I think Dynamicz out punches Two. Not to take anything away from Two because he had a good verse but Dynamicz just crafts his punches extremely well. His concepts are creative and he has an added layer of complexity with all the tie ins.

Mvgt: Dynamics

Good showing fellas.

Enbombz 05-27-2018 06:48 PM

Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
okau idea, couldve been done better
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
elow average jab
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
played wp but not terrible
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
don get it
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
don get it


vs


Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
light but okay
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
meh hangmans been done better
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
played but not bad
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
okay
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
don get it


i got mics here, nit a great battle. Mic executed his verse etter, that enough here. v.mics

Cred 05-27-2018 08:22 PM

Bloodline and quick key were koo.

vs

Windsurfing was fire and I was fuckin wit that dig out joint.

Short sweet battle here. Couple bars I enjoyed. Although I gotta say I preferred Dynamicz verse more.

Vote / Dynamicz


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